This was my first otome game, and, as such, I didn't quite know what to expect. (By the way, in case you couldn't tell, I'm a guy.)
But, it was great, and I enjoyed it very much. The way everything was put together just seemed very complete by the way. The art was great.
I think that the stats were kind of confusing, and I basically ended up randomly choosing an activity every night.
And the presence of the mall and your ability to shop there could be better telegraphed; I ended up finding out that you could buy stuff very late in the game, and I'm not even sure what they do. (This could just be a case of me not reading some manual or speeding through the text too quickly.)
I ended up not actually figuring out who Alistair was and just saved and guessed three times.
Maybe I just didn't spend enough time with Derek?
I got Travis's ending, which was very sweet.
Altogether, great game, hope to see more from you guys!
I'm available as a proofreader, just PM me. Thanks!
~Mau