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[NaNoRenO 2010] Luka

Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:50 pm
by KomiTsuku
In that classic Frozen Phoenix Studio fashion, I managed to make good on my word and produced a kinetic novel for NaNoRenO 2010. Now, it's not nearly as epic or fun as what I originally wanted to release, Dreams of the Skies V4.0, but we can't always get what we want.

Description: A soul lost in the darkness is awoken from her slumber by a mysterious light. Anything more than that you are gonna have to read to find out. Or infer on your own. Oh, and Chief Editor has a deadline to meet and is scrambling to meet it. You know, vague IRL backstory bull sheet.

Linux- http://www.mediafire.com/?nkwzn4gz4gw
Mac- http://www.mediafire.com/?mz0dhniltzz
Windows- http://www.mediafire.com/?mtuggljyg4y

For producing this in under 24 hours, I am rather pleased with its results. Feel free to correct me and tell me how you feel.

Re: [NaNoRenO 2010] Luka

Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 10:10 am
by Deviot
Hmmmm, the orb could be more dazzling or eyecatching tho, i can barely make it out against the black background.

Re: [NaNoRenO 2010] Luka

Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 11:26 am
by Victoria
I loved the conversation in the beginning and in the end =D And it can really be taken as many things, so I kind of liked the understatement of the ending.
And, what also made me laugh, was the name, Luka. Because in the story, it was girl's name. And in my country, it's one of the most common male names, and then I imagine the reaction of friend of mine who has the same name if I told him about that :mrgreen:

Re: [NaNoRenO 2010] Luka

Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:51 pm
by KomiTsuku
@Devoit: Very true, but I had some inspiration that one. In trying to match the inspiration, I had to tune down the brightness and flashiness a bit. Depending on my workload, it may become more apparent in a future release...

@Victoria: Hehehe, proof that the world has different views of a name. ^_^ I have only met a female Luka. It's a rather rare name where I'm from.

Re: [NaNoRenO 2010] Luka

Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 7:53 am
by Victoria
Really? I've never even heard of female version of Luka, that's why I laughed =D But it's really a beautiful name to me ^^