Painted Walls -- Horror

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Re: Painted Walls -- Horror

#46 Post by Head_Phones »

Very solid plot
Unfortunately, I thought the endings were all quite obvious, except the eyes (but that's because I'm not used to eye colours other than black and brown) and the white ending.

And one thing is that during my fourth playthrough (did not realise there were only three endings ^^|||) when I chose 'tell Mommy about the red', the girl went to get the needle, and when I chose the other option, the girl told her mother about the red. You might want to fix that, unless you did it on purpose

Personally, I did like the style of writing. It probably won't suit everyone, but it is quite child-like and also slightly crazed, which suits the story.
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Re: Painted Walls -- Horror

#47 Post by Ran08 »

Um, I'd really, really love to play this, but it keeps saying network error. :( *sigh* I'll keep trying though! Haha. But, I was just wondering, is there a mirror for this? Haha. If there is, please let me know. Thank you. :)

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#48 Post by Galaxious »

I seriously love the game. You did an amazing job on it! Ahh, such a curios and interesting child she is to have a wild imagination.
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#49 Post by Zhyx »

i think its good.. and i haven't read it yet.. ahaha but i will read it in week end.. By the way nice Art,.. ^_^

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#50 Post by AsHLeX »

Just finished playing it. Short storyline but quite intruging. :D Recommended it to my friend to try haha.
I got all 3 endings - actually got the red ending on the first try O.O
I was like... Is she gonna kill the baby? Yes she's gonna kill the baby. Poor baby.
The blue ending was a little creepy. The white ending not so.
The girl sounded like she had schizophrenia in my opinion.
It definitely is worth the read, in my opinion. :D
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#51 Post by Anthony »

Awesome job!!! I really enjoyed the art, the only thing that didn't suit for me was the music, too repetitive, but anyway, that's my opinion ;) Hope to see you making more VNs. Congratulations!

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#52 Post by AntiquedFae »

I just want to say that this was I think the first ever VN I played, and it left a huge impression on me. I can still remember it so well. It is one of my favourite VNs. It is so simple and so excellently done. It really is a piece of art, and I'm so glad it is still available. Well done, amazing artist.
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