I finished playing through all the endings last night, and it was a pretty enjoyable experience! Here are my thoughts on the different aspects:
Story - Very interesting way to tell the story! Most of the time, the player has to try to piece together what Reijiro did, how he felt, and what happened in between letters. The story itself may be fairly simple, but the presentation made it a unique experience.
Artwork - The artwork is sparse, but good - I particularly liked the ending pictures with Hirae in an evening gown of sorts
even though they pretty much corresponded to the "bad" endings. A minor gripe that I have is that there isn't time to stop and admire the photos of Hirae during the typing sequences.
Music - The music is decent, but not quite as memorable as it was in GR. The song that plays during the typing sequences is pretty fitting though. Its beginning kinda reminded me of Guilty Gear for some reason.
Gameplay - Again, this element made it a pretty unique experience - I was addicted after completing the first letter. It would be helpful to have an error noise whenever the player makes a mistake. Because I memorize a sentence before looking down at the keyboard to type, I only catch my mistakes once I glance up at the screen and see ten mistakes in a row.
Also, the auto-returns seemed counter-intuitive most of the time, particularly since it auto-returns right when a word is finished rather than after a space. There were a few cases where the trend is broken and a space was actually needed to complete a line, but it would help to be consistent one way or the other. This goes for returns as well - there were a couple isolated instances where the player has to do manual returns, and it would help if the game was consistent about it.
Here are a few bugs that I found:
- The last character of each line doesn't seem to count. It stays greyed out regardless of whether it was correct or not, and a typing noise doesn't play when it is pressed. Any mistakes made there doesn't seem to count against he player either.
- In the third letter that the player types up, there seems to be a sentence that was copied and pasted from the second one ("the weather is cooler..."). It seemed to be out of place, so it is probably a bug.
- Saving and exiting resets the mistake count on your current run when you continue. With this little bug, I made it to the fourth ending with only 8 mistakes.
Overall, great game! It was fun to play something that was way out of the norm.
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