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#121 Post by Ren » Wed Dec 07, 2005 6:22 pm

snowshine wrote: The hero must be happier if he died in page 26. 8)
I might be wrong, but i think she meant that he would have been happier if he died...?so maybe something bad is gonna happen?*D*
*wants to read more*


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#122 Post by Blue Lemma » Wed Dec 07, 2005 6:51 pm

Ren wrote: I might be wrong, but i think she meant that he would have been happier if he died...?so maybe something bad is gonna happen?*D*
*wants to read more*
Nooooo! But they're so happy and cute now~ :cry: :cry: :cry:

*waits for next installment* =:-3

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#123 Post by snowshine » Fri Dec 09, 2005 1:04 am

Thank you, Pytom. I'll correct page 27.

>>>Mike: Take it easy. It can wait.

>>>Jun: It's alright. Don't mind such a trifle!

>>>Everyone: Thank you very much!

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#124 Post by mikey » Sat Dec 10, 2005 11:08 am

Snowshine >> Actually, I am adding a new section to my page when you complete the manga, stherefore it's best if I update it with the full work, it will be much easier for me, since I want it to be readable online and I need the finished manga so I know how to resize the pictures and how many pages to make ans so on. So I hope you'll like it! ^_^

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#125 Post by ShiraiJunichi » Sun Dec 18, 2005 4:14 pm

*snifle*

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#126 Post by musical74 » Sun Dec 18, 2005 10:48 pm

*Wonders if ShiraiJunchi is sniffling because snowshine is doing such a great job or is it something else?*
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#127 Post by mikey » Mon Dec 19, 2005 6:06 am

I'd like to know as well... I have the new site already waiting ^_^. But it's okay, it will wait for as long as snownshine needs to complete it. No rush.

*maybe we'll get a Christmas present?*

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#128 Post by snowshine » Wed Dec 21, 2005 10:43 am

THE LAST PAGES OF BLACK PENCIL:

32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44

I changed pages 03 25 a bit.
The story is over. I guess you can understand why Jun was sniffling now

Again, thank you Mikey, for creating Black pencil and the site. I was really like this game, enough to draw it into manga. ^__^
Thanks to Jun. If there was not your help, I doubt whether it could be done well like this.
And thank you everyone for reading. Though it's a bit early... Merry christmas.

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#129 Post by monele » Wed Dec 21, 2005 2:04 pm

*snirrrrfl....*

Mewwy Kwismas ;o;

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#130 Post by Blue Lemma » Wed Dec 21, 2005 3:06 pm

Waaaaaaaaaaaaah! :cry: :cry: :cry:
How depressing :( A good manga, but oh so sad :cry:

Then again, we don't know for sure what happened ^^
Great job, snowshine, and merry Christmas to you too!

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#131 Post by mikey » Wed Dec 21, 2005 4:12 pm

Snowshine, thank you for the wonderful manga. I still can't believe it all.

The temporary page for the manga is gone, and BPM now has a new and permanent page, at
http://atp.manga.sk/projects/bpm/bpm.htm
and you can read it all at
http://atp.manga.sk/projects/bpm/bpmread.htm
There is also an option to download the full PNG version, it has around 10 MB.

Because of snowshine's manga, my site has changed! Check out the new sections and updated encyclopedia ;) Well, there isn't much that's incredibly new, but still... ^_^

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#132 Post by PyTom » Wed Dec 21, 2005 6:32 pm

Would it be okay with mikey and snowshine if I went ahead and included the manga along with Black pencil on the archives CD? (Assuming there's room, and I don't see why there wouldn't be.)
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#133 Post by mikey » Thu Dec 22, 2005 12:29 am

I don't think my "permission" is needed here, but if it were, of course, no problem.

Anyway, snowshine, I've posted the manga also on my club page, and here are translated the first reactions:

1. Very good manga, nicely grasps the idea of the game. The style sometimes reminded me of Anne Freaks. From time to time it has an amateurish feel, but that isn't really a bad thing.

2. I like it... The story is really interesting,... and the style is also quite nice. You can see the the style isn't completely perfect, but the feeling is it comes from the heart... and that's what counts [for me].

Congratulations! :P

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#134 Post by snowshine » Thu Dec 22, 2005 10:39 am

To Pytom: Yes, of cource ^__^

To Mikey: I'm glad to know everyone enjoyed it, though I still have many things to learn. All thanks to your Black pencil, it had a moving content. It made me wanted to draw it extremely... Mikey, how about your other games? May I draw them?

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#135 Post by ShiraiJunichi » Thu Dec 22, 2005 1:34 pm

I predict a resounding "YES!!!" for that question ^_^ .
Personally, I'd like to see River Trap done...

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