Idol Crush v1.1

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Re: Idol Crush v1.1

#31 Post by SusanTheCat » Sat Mar 19, 2011 4:33 pm

It mentions on the first page that the graphics came from Bass.

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Re: Idol Crush v1.1

#32 Post by lepapillonrouge » Sun Mar 20, 2011 3:19 am

Note on the Kanon music:

Last regrets during your first meeting with Jun is an accidental, to quote tv tropes, Fridge Logic. XD Except I don't think you need to go to the fridge to realize that when you've watched Kanon...

I just downloaded the game, got Kan's Neutral End...sadly. I think I'll like him the most.
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#33 Post by dott.Piergiorgio » Fri Apr 01, 2011 3:50 pm

again, where is the Linux release ?

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Re: Idol Crush v1.1

#34 Post by Wright1000 » Mon Apr 25, 2011 5:31 am

Not a bad game.
But the main menu is not so good.
I mean the buttons does not change color when the mouse pointer is over them.
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#35 Post by EzzyAlpha » Tue Apr 26, 2011 3:22 am

It's not a BAD game...But it is pretty bland. Seems like a completely generic VN, almost to the point of looking like a parody. Your writing skills need some work...Otherwise, it was good.

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#36 Post by RemnantDream » Tue Apr 26, 2011 8:28 am

I'm downloading it now ^_^

I think I'll like Kan best. I always like the antisocial ones.

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#37 Post by Snowflower » Tue Apr 26, 2011 11:18 am

I don't think many people get this, but this was my first attempt at making a VN. Therefore, the story writing is not as good as what I'm capable of since I kind of got tired of the entire process months ago (due to the fact that I spent weeks trying to figure out the program on my own)

As for the menu, I didn't know about the hovering images when I released this game. Maybe, I will update this game in the future when I get the time? Hm... Maybe, if people wants it

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#38 Post by RemnantDream » Tue Apr 26, 2011 1:58 pm

I thought it was a very good VN, especially since it's your first. I wish it had been longer cause I liked it ^_^

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#39 Post by Snow Blossom » Sun May 15, 2011 4:33 pm

I found this VN short and sweet; even though the plot was kind of generic, the art completely made up for it~
I have to say, I actually liked Jun's bad ending a lot, because it's not often that one of the obtainable boys turns out to be a jerk; It was really refreshing :D

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#40 Post by NeryNight » Wed Jun 15, 2011 7:34 pm

Seriously, this game looks very good. The art work is awsome. Why didn't I stumble upon this before???
*downloading* :P

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Re: Idol Crush v1.1

#41 Post by 15385bic » Tue Dec 13, 2011 8:43 am

I kept getting bad or neutral endings >3> - it all ended so fast Q_Q

I did like how it all went together though =)

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#42 Post by Generic Timeline » Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:08 am

I will say this: it's a good first shot at a VN. But there are plenty of room to improve on.

1. Your scripts are in dire need of a proofread. You're missing a lot of periods and some punctuations, so just keep this in mind if you plan to release a v1.2 in the future.

2. I would really love to see more character development. Declarations of love, kissing scenes, etc. all seem sort of abrupt in this VN.

3. Well, I guess the VN itself is too short. If you can fit good character development into that ~10 minutes of gameplay then I'd have no problem with it. But imho, you haven't been able to do that.

I understand that this is your first VN, and that this criticism is coming from someone who can't script to save her own life. But please take these into consideration, because I think the art is really pretty and it'd be a shame if it doesn't have a good script to go with, you know what I mean?

Sorry if I sounded harsh, I really am trying to be constructive. Good luck with this VN.

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#43 Post by Kokoro Hane » Tue Dec 20, 2011 10:46 pm

Downloaded. I'll be sure to give you my opinion once I play the game through ^.^
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Re: Idol Crush v1.1

#44 Post by omgwtfsushi » Thu Dec 22, 2011 5:40 am

Im excited to play it XD
downloading now yey!

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Re: Idol Crush v1.1

#45 Post by dott.Piergiorgio » Fri Dec 30, 2011 8:07 am

I'm still waiting for a Linux or -all release....

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