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Junker-Kun
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by Junker-Kun » Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:39 pm
Well, my lazy ass have finally finished it.
This is a short Kinetic Novel about two old friends who are meet each other after a year.
The novell is very short so there is nothing to tell about it, it's better to look yourself.
And sorry for such a dinosaur-style (yeah, not gorilla-style like before =D) art. I'm not so much as an artist.
Oh, and Linux and Mac versions WEREN'T tested as I have no Linux or MacOS on my PC.
P.S. Many thanks to night_serenade for editing ^__^
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"Don’t be sad. Even if the world won’t forgive you, I’ll forgive you.
Don’t be sad. Even if you won’t forgive the world, I’ll forgive you.
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by SusanTheCat » Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:49 pm
The story started a little slowly, but it was really good over all.
I really liked the character designs!
Susan
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by Junker-Kun » Mon Mar 14, 2011 6:18 am
And I thought my problem is very hasty endings...
I'm glad you liked it.
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by SusanTheCat » Mon Mar 14, 2011 9:39 am
It could also be that I have a short attention span.
I think this would make a very sweet VN.
Susan
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by Junker-Kun » Mon Mar 14, 2011 9:48 am
Well, I'm actually thinking about making a VN in the same universe. So who knows...
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by Machus » Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:24 pm
I loved it.
It's simple stories like these that always get me.
It was a bit slow at the beginning, but that's to be expected.
It fit the scene well; just a leisurely chat to catch up with an old friend.
The story was good as well.
I was scared for another sad ending, but you pulled through! ^^
The twist around the end was unexpected as well, but it fit nicely with the story.
Nice job with your first KN!
I'm available as a proofreader, just PM me. Thanks!
~Mau
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by Junker-Kun » Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:05 am
Nice job with your first KN!
Thanks!
The story was good as well.
I was scared for another sad ending, but you pulled through! ^^
While I think it's necessary to have them sometimes, I don't really like sad endings.
"Don’t be sad. Even if the world won’t forgive you, I’ll forgive you.
Don’t be sad. Even if you won’t forgive the world, I’ll forgive you.
So please tell me. How do I make you forgive me?"
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by Machus » Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:08 pm
Sad endings can be much more effective than a happy ending.
It all depends on the type of feeling you're going for.
I love bittersweet endings, personally.
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by Suikama » Tue Mar 29, 2011 1:32 pm
A simple and cliche story concept, but the characters were nicely fleshed out which kept things interesting until the end. I enjoyed it
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