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#1 Post by Junker-Kun »

Well, my lazy ass have finally finished it.
This is a short Kinetic Novel about two old friends who are meet each other after a year.

The novell is very short so there is nothing to tell about it, it's better to look yourself.
And sorry for such a dinosaur-style (yeah, not gorilla-style like before =D) art. I'm not so much as an artist.

Oh, and Linux and Mac versions WEREN'T tested as I have no Linux or MacOS on my PC.

P.S. Many thanks to night_serenade for editing ^__^

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"Don’t be sad. Even if the world won’t forgive you, I’ll forgive you.
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#2 Post by SusanTheCat »

The story started a little slowly, but it was really good over all.

I really liked the character designs!

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#3 Post by Junker-Kun »

And I thought my problem is very hasty endings...
I'm glad you liked it.
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#4 Post by SusanTheCat »

It could also be that I have a short attention span. :)

I think this would make a very sweet VN.

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#5 Post by Junker-Kun »

Well, I'm actually thinking about making a VN in the same universe. So who knows...
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#6 Post by Machus »

I loved it.
It's simple stories like these that always get me.

It was a bit slow at the beginning, but that's to be expected.
It fit the scene well; just a leisurely chat to catch up with an old friend.
The story was good as well.
I was scared for another sad ending, but you pulled through! ^^
The twist around the end was unexpected as well, but it fit nicely with the story.
Nice job with your first KN!
I'm available as a proofreader, just PM me. Thanks!

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#7 Post by Junker-Kun »

Nice job with your first KN!
Thanks!
The story was good as well.
I was scared for another sad ending, but you pulled through! ^^
While I think it's necessary to have them sometimes, I don't really like sad endings. :wink:
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#8 Post by Machus »

Sad endings can be much more effective than a happy ending.
It all depends on the type of feeling you're going for.
I love bittersweet endings, personally.
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#9 Post by Suikama »

A simple and cliche story concept, but the characters were nicely fleshed out which kept things interesting until the end. I enjoyed it :)

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