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lordcloudx
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by lordcloudx » Thu Mar 24, 2011 12:48 pm
I don't think I've posted this game here before. Anywayz...
For the Morning Sun 朝日のためにis a professional Japanese style visual novel written entirely in English. This visual novel features many bold and startling innovations never seen before in any Original English Visual Novel. Refer to the comprehensive readme file included in this package for more information.
Download sites:
http://www.brothersoft.com/games/for-th ... g-sun.html
http://download.cnet.com/For-The-Mornin ... tag=buttonHow do you make your games? I see. Thank you for the prompt replies, but it is my considered opinion that you're doing it wrong inefficiently because I am a perfushenal professional. Do it my way this way and we can all ascend VN Nirvana together while allowing me to stroke my ego you will improve much faster. Also, please don't forget to thank me for this constructive critique or I will cry and bore you to death respond appropriately with a tl;dr rant discourse of epic adequately lengthy proportions. - Sarcasm Veiled in Euphemism: Secrets of Forum Civility by lordcloudx (Coming soon to an online ebook near you.)
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sake-bento
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by sake-bento » Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:32 pm
Edit: Changing my comments so they're less misleading...
I think I got all the endings unless there are more, in which case I didn't. Do I have to play for over 9000 hours to find the others? I like how you only QT'd 1000 hours. Also, watercolor sure isn't what it used to be.
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Machus
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by Machus » Thu Mar 24, 2011 6:50 pm
Ahh, no Ubuntu version
Well, what is it about?
I'm available as a proofreader, just PM me. Thanks!
~Mau
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by gekiganwing » Thu Mar 24, 2011 7:03 pm
Just downloaded the Windows version... and Norton Internet Security found a "threat." It removed something called "WS.Reputation.1" from the executable file.
I don't know if this is a genuine security problem. But I figured it was best to mention it.
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PyTom
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by PyTom » Thu Mar 24, 2011 7:28 pm
WS.Reputation.1 isn't a virus, but an indication that Norton has seen the file very few times. It can be safely ignored.
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(When was the last time you backed up your game?)
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Hollow Gourd
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by Hollow Gourd » Thu Mar 24, 2011 7:41 pm
Admittedly, in my eagerness to discover just what 'innovations' and 'unparalleled interactivity' this visual novel offered, I scrolled rather quickly through the game. I have to say, though, that the only thing I noticed was a large number of choices.
Didn't seem particularly innovative, but perhaps I missed something...
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sake-bento
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by sake-bento » Thu Mar 24, 2011 7:48 pm
Hollow Gourd wrote:Didn't seem particularly innovative, but perhaps I missed something...
It's "innovative" in that none of the choices have any bearing on the story. Also, pretty much everything on the features list is a lie. Like cake.
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by lepapillonrouge » Thu Mar 24, 2011 7:57 pm
It's a little early for April Fool's, don't you think?
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by Alera » Fri Mar 25, 2011 12:58 am
@ sake-bento : I knew your first comment was a joke. XD
Now I wonder if it's actually worth it to leave a serious comment/ critique to this myself. Because I have a lot to say actually, but...should I? This all seems like a 1st April joke, as @lepapillonrouge said. XD
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Zayay [Otome?][BxPlayer][NaNo 2013]
Tortichki [Drag&Drop mini game]
Other games I've worked on:
● My Heart's Flame ● Emissary of Starlight ● Freedom From Silence ● Sickness
And many more unannounced/secret projects. ╮ (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) ╭
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