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Posted: Thu Jul 08, 2004 9:08 pm
by toraneko666
I have a 60 day trial of jasc print shop pro. But, I want to buy it it coast $80. sadly. It is the program ive been using to color with. I suck at coloring. but here are two projects I have colored. One is a made up toranoana and the other is Miko.
Tell me if you think the coloring is acceptable....

Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2004 5:58 pm
by Jerails
The sun! I'm blind!! Aaaahh! Hey, art looks really sexy! Kinda risque...
If I remember right, Miko's ribbons are supposed to be much darker than what they look like...
Don't worry too much about colouring, you're making good progress!
Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2004 9:06 pm
by toraneko666
Thanks. I was trying to make her ribbon match her swimsuit.

Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2004 3:54 am
by Grey
The colouring gives a very 3D effect, my only constructive critisism would be with the drawing itself that her lower left arm seems seems a little displaced from its elbow. Also her toes seem very small.
But it's a good picture.
The 2nd seems a lot fuzzier round the edges than the 1st.
The main thing though is that the sunburst effect is all very well, but the ray visibility seriously needs turning down. When was the last time you saw visible sunrays on a beach after all? The 1st would look a lot better than way.
But I don't see anything wrong with the colouring, certainly the skin on both looks very 3D

Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 1:26 am
by toraneko666

Thank you very much! I am trying to figure out the program so its kinda hard^_~' thanks for you critisisum.
