Snow White~The Tales of the New Princess (GXB Otome!)

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Re: Snow White~The Tales of the New Princess (GXB Otome!)

#61 Post by Tag- » Sat Aug 06, 2011 11:29 pm

Snow Blossom wrote:GYAAA the menu is adorable!!! XD
This is just me being meddlesome, but where are you going to fit the menu buttons?

Thanks for the compliment <:
If the menu buttons don't fit I'll shift the guys' heads around to make it fit xDD

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I just kinda think it's too spacious lol.
Then it's not perfect, is it? xDD //shot
I do agree though, but I just wasn't sure what to put on it to fill the gaps. I was killing myself over the unsymmetrical-ness of it xDD''
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#62 Post by HikkiPanda » Mon Aug 08, 2011 7:26 am

Tag- wrote:Then it's not perfect, is it? xDD //shot
I do agree though, but I just wasn't sure what to put on it to fill the gaps. I was killing myself over the unsymmetrical-ness of it xDD''
How about drawing their whole body instead of bust pictures? hopefully their body can fill the gaps 6^^

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#63 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Mon Aug 08, 2011 7:55 am

Or maybe add something else, like more ribbons to fill in the space.
Or apples. Or more characters. XDDD But I'd like ribbons.
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And on the problem on where should the buttons go, it'll be nice and a bit cool if it's scattered all around the picture~

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#64 Post by Tag- » Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:27 am

HikkiPanda wrote:How about drawing their whole body instead of bust pictures? hopefully their body can fill the gaps 6^^
I've tried that, but having all of them full body looks much too crowded xDD
Lumen_Astrum wrote:Or maybe add something else, like more ribbons to fill in the space.
Or apples. Or more characters. XDDD But I'd like ribbons.
<-- Is a ribbon addict.
Well, I can't add more characters because then that would be much too spoiler-y xDD The ribbons and apples are a good idea though, I might try to add them in. Thanks for the suggestion :D
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#65 Post by SerenaLolipop » Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:04 pm

Dear Everyone,
I have BIG news. On Snow White now, there is SEVENTEEN guys to go after. Of course, not all will have CGs. BUT SEVENTEEN!!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!!??!?! YAY!
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#66 Post by Snow Blossom » Wed Aug 10, 2011 10:05 pm

SEVENTEEN??? TTWTT (<-- tears of joy) It's like a dream come true!! I'll be playing this game for months~!

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#67 Post by azureXtwilight » Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:13 pm

It's quite too... Ambitious for a first game. You might think I'm annoying but here's an advice from a girl who decided to remove two guys from her games because she can't handle it.
Can you handle that? I prefer having a few guys with deep personality and fun story rather than many many guys with personalities similar to each other or just plain tropes definition... Then again, it's your choice. It's a bit sad to see if something like this doesn't meet the endpoint (completed) or completed but seems like it's been rushed...
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#68 Post by SilverxBlue » Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:28 pm

HOLY MOTHER OF!!!!! Seventeen guys!? You're probably gonna make a record for most number of obtainables in an otome game!
Oh my! How can you handle that? I'm not trying to sound annoying or anything but oh my seventeen! That's more than TMGS! Which I consider too much already. (I couldn't even finish the first one up to now.)

I do second what Azure said, not only will you have to think up of unique character personalities for each and everyone of them but you also have to think up a LOT of character development (I don't think anyone likes a couple who just ended up being together all of a sudden), but then, it's your game and you decide for it, so I'm just going to wish you good luck. ^^
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#69 Post by SerenaLolipop » Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:40 pm

Well, the guys are more of minor characters and have not that long routes(probably under 30 minutes or so...)I just sprinkled them around a bit, and they probably won't have many (if any) CGs. But I do have all the sprites for them, and I thought, why not? ((I also felt that the main guys were made up of too many shotas....)) I pretty much have idea's for all of these, (and besides- 1 of them is a bit....blurry on the romance...*and made up of flashbacks*) Hmmm...I may cut down a bit sometime or another, but for the time being~17!!!!!!
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#70 Post by xelacroix » Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:59 am

anime is cute

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#71 Post by Celestine » Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:48 pm

I think its a good idea. There are stories like that.
Like a boy who has a crush on a girl in beginning of story and you don't hear from him until later in the story.
It's like a manga/anime possible love connection you read from a fanfic. Or like a alternate route to see what happen she choose someone else. Like when they did that movie Sabrina Teenage Witch: Goes to Rome. And she falls for an italian guy and then they separate back to their normal lives.
Their like mysterious routes in the main character.
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#72 Post by LadyAvori » Mon Aug 15, 2011 5:35 pm

Wow! 17?!? Well I'm rooting for you!

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#73 Post by llplldll » Tue Aug 16, 2011 9:06 pm

I like your idea(.^_^.) The story seems fun and the CG are nice. I'll be watching this one.

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#74 Post by TakeOverWorld » Wed Aug 17, 2011 5:56 am

Wow, 17? That seems loads! But anyways, the art's very pretty, and this game looks cute and fun. The character bios were quite funny :)

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#75 Post by SerenaLolipop » Sat Aug 27, 2011 11:00 am

Dear friends,
For the moment-Snow White will be delayed a bit due to the voluntary Hurricane Irene evacuations in New York-where I currently live. Hopefully all will be well, but I'm not sure how everything will play out at the moment.
Always,
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Rainbows make the world go round... Or was it that rainbows go around the world?

Jewels are Expensive. But Friendship is Priceless.

I was going to take over this website but then I got distracted by Gakuen Alice.

Ran is in the middle of her own otome game right now, Snow White!
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