(My) dark little secret. otome (WIP)
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So here is what the main menu would look like.
Not unless I get sick of how it looks and change it. It's actually a bad habit of mine.
Logo made bu Auro-Cyanide
Not unless I get sick of how it looks and change it. It's actually a bad habit of mine.
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This may sound so damn wrong but somehow I am sad that Zander is not an available guy...D:
So pwetty cute chibis in the main menu *A*
So pwetty cute chibis in the main menu *A*
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I could think of two reasons why it sounds so wrong to pursue him.
first, he is dead
second, he's your brother, your twin brother.
I'll try my best to give him lots of appearances though.
And for the sake of Zander's fans, maybe after all this, I should make a game where there is an MC who just died and gets to pursue her fellow "ghosts".
I'm kidding though!
first, he is dead
second, he's your brother, your twin brother.
I'll try my best to give him lots of appearances though.
And for the sake of Zander's fans, maybe after all this, I should make a game where there is an MC who just died and gets to pursue her fellow "ghosts".
I'm kidding though!
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Nice idea about ghosts, though yay for after-death romance)
Or you could just include the ending, where Zander tells his sister he met super cute ghost other day
Ah and chibis are really cute ^^ so adorable. But I don't think they go well with the logo ^^;
Oh well, it's just my noob opinion.
Or you could just include the ending, where Zander tells his sister he met super cute ghost other day
Ah and chibis are really cute ^^ so adorable. But I don't think they go well with the logo ^^;
Oh well, it's just my noob opinion.
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What the? Are you some sort of psychic? I was planning to add that, but not as an ending, just a plain old joke to show that Zander is enjoying the "after-life".Nimu-chan wrote:Or you could just include the ending, where Zander tells his sister he met super cute ghost other day
I was thinking that it looks a bit off, I've been asking everyone here in my house if it looks okay and they say it does, so I decided to make it like that. But, if I do indeed get sick of it, I'm editing it.Nimu-chan wrote:Ah and chibis are really cute ^^ so adorable. But I don't think they go well with the logo ^^
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Heh, I see ^^; Guess I spoiled a bit of fun then)SilverxBlue wrote: What the? Are you some sort of psychic? I was planning to add that, but not as an ending, just a plain old joke to show that Zander is enjoying the "after-life".
I'm not psychic, but I was a fortuneteller back in the days of my wild childhood btw. I'm good at guessing things sometimes.
Let's see what other followers of this thread think)SilverxBlue wrote:I was thinking that it looks a bit off, I've been asking everyone here in my house if it looks okay and they say it does, so I decided to make it like that. But, if I do indeed get sick of it, I'm editing it.
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I think they're adorable.
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Band chibis are my thing. You know what that means.
> Going to agree that they clash with the logo. Cute or Scary, make up your mind. xD
> Going to agree that they clash with the logo. Cute or Scary, make up your mind. xD
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Haha! If they're not twins I would want to, yes. xD His character design just attracts me~ <3SilverxBlue wrote:@ renpao - Thanks! Too bad we never got to see your mystery game but still, I'm loving the game you're currently working on.
I don't think it's that bad to like Zander, it would only be bad if you want Alex to pursue him. o_O
Wow you're a pinoy too? There are a lot of us here in the forums and most of them are working on otome games.
And yes, I am. ^^ I moved to Cali in 2006 though, but I can still speak Tagalog as straight as I used to. ;D
As for the logo, I'd have to agree, they seem to clash...I think part of the reason is because the logo has this dark aura surrounding it and the chibis below seem to contradict that. If you still want to put the chibis, however, maybe try making them less bright/darker to complement the background? I'm not sure how to explain it properly, but something that would make them less stand out on their own? C:
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Screw the people at my house, I think they just told me that it looks okay to stop me from pestering them.
I think I'd use the logo for the main menu and the chibis are for loading screens or something. I already have the Zander chibi on the options and "Are you sure you want to quit?" screens so I can't use them for that anymore.
I think I'd use the logo for the main menu and the chibis are for loading screens or something. I already have the Zander chibi on the options and "Are you sure you want to quit?" screens so I can't use them for that anymore.
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One major problem, yes.SilverxBlue wrote: I could think of two reasons why it sounds so wrong to pursue him.
first, he is dead
That was the main thing which caused me to think It's so wrong, Alex and Zander are almost mirror-images of each other, it'd be a 'screw yourself'-path kinda thing...SilverxBlue wrote:second, he's your brother, your twin brother.
WHAT WHY ARE YOU KIDDING?! D: *is shot, again*SilverxBlue wrote:And for the sake of Zander's fans, maybe after all this, I should make a game where there is an MC who just died and gets to pursue her fellow "ghosts".
I'm kidding though!
*A* Ohh, chibi-Zander asking you to quit or not...WHO WOULD WANT TO QUIT THEN D: So manipulative!!!
Now because Alex is crossdressing as Zander, I'd love to see a scene where Zander would have to crossdress as Alex. Except it doesn't fit into the story at all. I mean, he is still dead (WHYYYY?! D: ....I think, Zander, you got yourself some crazy fan here...)
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I kinda find the black blending bad with the logo... I can barely read what's written D:
Even though black suggests a bit darker thing, mebbe white'll make it a little more better (also to make the logo readable).
And the chibis doesn't seem to fit, but that's just my opinion xD
Even though black suggests a bit darker thing, mebbe white'll make it a little more better (also to make the logo readable).
And the chibis doesn't seem to fit, but that's just my opinion xD
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@ Celestie - I might consider that game, but only after I'm done with all of my projects or at least half of them, then I'll see if I could think of some sort of plot for it and see if machinist is still willing to work with me.
Hmm, maybe I'll consider adding that as an extra-ending-that-doesn't-have-anything-to-do-with-the-plot.
@Lumen_Astrum - I thought it was already readable, it was white at first but I decided to change it maybe I should change it back...
Ah yes, I'm currently working on a new main menu without the chibis on it, I'll use them for something else.
I can see that you are indeed Zander's biggest fan.Celestie wrote:Now because Alex is crossdressing as Zander, I'd love to see a scene where Zander would have to crossdress as Alex. Except it doesn't fit into the story at all. I mean, he is still dead (WHYYYY?! D: ....I think, Zander, you got yourself some crazy fan here...)Omake/Extra-material...?
Hmm, maybe I'll consider adding that as an extra-ending-that-doesn't-have-anything-to-do-with-the-plot.
@Lumen_Astrum - I thought it was already readable, it was white at first but I decided to change it maybe I should change it back...
Ah yes, I'm currently working on a new main menu without the chibis on it, I'll use them for something else.
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*whistles* Biggest fan? Nooo...where did you get thaaaat from? *superfluous, unconvincing denial*
BUT HE IS SO CUTE DDDD *glomps*
Anyway, I didn't really mean it like that...that you HAVE to make a story with Zander (I'd be happy, though). I think I am happy enough if you add a crossdressing Zander-scene somewhere and give him as much screentime as possible for a dead, cute guy and I am happy enough :3 Besides, there are more guys to pursue and I am all for Alex' happiness *A*
BUT HE IS SO CUTE DDDD *glomps*
Anyway, I didn't really mean it like that...that you HAVE to make a story with Zander (I'd be happy, though). I think I am happy enough if you add a crossdressing Zander-scene somewhere and give him as much screentime as possible for a dead, cute guy and I am happy enough :3 Besides, there are more guys to pursue and I am all for Alex' happiness *A*
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+1 to Zander fans This guy also needs a happy ending) Like eating tons of sweets in Heaven, or something. :'D
Yup, I guess you could just add extra ending, that can be opened, once player does all the routes. I don't know how it's technically done, though.
Yup, I guess you could just add extra ending, that can be opened, once player does all the routes. I don't know how it's technically done, though.
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