(My) dark little secret. otome (WIP)

[Alera]

Bands are my thing. You know what this means. I have to kill you now.

Wow, so serious Aleema. XD

[SilverxBlue]

@ Aleema - Oh no! Please don't the band thingy won't be of much importance here anyway the story will mainly focus on the investigation of Zander's death. The band thing is just a bit of a sideline for her a petty excuse for her to dress up as Zander.

Rock robin would still be the best band-based otome game and there is no way in hell I'm copying it.

Now, I'm scared or maybe I should change the band thing into something else...

[Aleema]

I kNoW wHeRe YoU lIvE

... I am so kidding, girl. I'm super jealous of your sprites -- your boys (and girl) are crazy hot. I suspect the mystery will be very interesting, especially since you can date the suspects ... of your brother's murderer.

edit: awww, I was joking, don't take it to heart. <3

[SilverxBlue]

Oh for a second there, I thought you got mad and I was almost dead, especially when I saw this; .

Thank you very much. And the hot boys and girl are all thanks to machinist.

[Auro-Cyanide]

I am looking forward to this project

First, I am super attracted to the sprites. Good job Mechanist! The linework is a little shaky, but the expression and posturing make them look really interesting and full of life. The colouring is soft and well done. I keep staring at Jannica's breasts because they are subtle but are formed in a way that actually makes them look dimensional... Overall, awesome job.

And Silver-Blue, I think it is an interesting plot and I am game to see what you do with it, but more than that, I am attracted to your writing. There is a lot of personality there and even the short synopsis was enjoyable to read. The character's voices come through really well. Keep writing like that!

I wish you luck on the project I will make sure to keep popping in to check on it~

PS. This is also one of the few games where I would actually have to after everyone. They all seem really interesting and I want to see what their stories are like.

[SilverxBlue]

@ Auro-Cyanide - Thanks! :'D

With all the feedback I'm getting I really am pumped up to work on this even more! *goes back to do some serious writing*

And machinist, I'd like to thank you for doing an awesome job on the art, people are looking forward to this mostly because of you!

[PsychoticallyAngelic]

I am so keeping an eye on this. ALL THE GUYS AND GIRLS LOOK WONDERFUL. I WUV YOUR ARTWORK. Greg and his specs. <3 Reynard looks the coolest though. XD Good luck with your project!

[Celestie]

About the tsundere-part, it is very mild, but she is kind of a little bit tsuntsun towards...*check* Greg. Not much with the others, though, so she isn't a tsundere by total default. Alex appears like a mild tsundere of the type B: usually nice and normal, only when someone presses the wrong buttons she becomes tsunstun (Greg poking fun of her flat-chested-ness? She may be proud of having a B-Cup but her answer is tsuntsun enough xD).

So Reynold can still be totally tsundere to Alex, he'd be the Type A, I believe, usually harsh and direct and tsuntsun to Alex and sometimes, rarely deredere, I believe? OHH DO WANT *A*

[SilverxBlue]

@PsychoticallyAngelic(Wow, your name is long.) - Thank you very much but the artwork isn't mine it's machinist's. To be honest, I can't really draw anything worth crap.

@Celestie - Oh I see... So a tsundere has types too, I thought it was only the kuudere. Yup, Reynard is rarely deredere,

even when he is with his own girlfriend.

[Celestie]

...well, what I am talking about comes from TVTropes.org, so...xD

This is TVTropes' definition. And Kuudere-characters can be Tsundere-type characters as well, so those two are kinda working hand-in-hand.

Awww. I almost feel bad for the option of ripping them apart to get one of them. As long as the 'ripping-them-apart'-process isn't anything mean and bitchy and stuff.

[Riviera]

Good job, machinist! I love Rey!

... I hope we'll be able to tear them apart in a, "we fit better together and that relationship was ending soon anyway" type of way... or I'll feel guilty.

[renpao]

This looks like a really interesting game! I am a huge fan of mystery games because I like solving and discovering things, and having the twins as the main lead is such a plus for me. My never before released dark/mystery story features a girl and a boy who looks like a split image of her, that's why. xD

I also find the characters intriguing because of the short dialogues you added. I'm rather impressed at how the sprites were drawn in a way that it shows their personality/character type. Good job, machinist! :3 (Is it bad that I really like Zander (and his sprite) so much? Even though he's dead? xD)

I am definitely looking forward to this! And it's always good to see a fellow pinoy working on otome games. Pinoy pride. :3

[Lumen_Astrum]

Waah, you always get amazing artists in your team... ToT

Anyway, this looks cool Good luck

[machinist]

ah thanks for the comments about pics

[SilverxBlue]

@ Celestie and Riviere - Don't worry, I'll try my best not to make Rey and Jen so close to each other that people would start feeling guilty when they are ripped apart.

@ renpao - Thanks! Too bad we never got to see your mystery game but still, I'm loving the game you're currently working on.
I don't think it's that bad to like Zander, it would only be bad if you want Alex to pursue him. o_O
Wow you're a pinoy too? There are a lot of us here in the forums and most of them are working on otome games.

@ Lumen_Astrum - Guess I'm just lucky, but still.. There are a lot of good artists here so there is a very big chance to get one. Thank you very much!

@ machinist - You deserve them!

I see that Rey is getting popular now, so here is a little something that serves as thanks.



I'll put the others only upon request, I'm too lazy to put them. *orz*