Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Update 11/5 w/Guide!]

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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Pending gore-fest]

#46 Post by azureXtwilight » Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:21 pm

Thanks a lot! :D
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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Pending gore-fest]

#47 Post by HigurashiKira » Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:58 pm

Glad I could help~

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This is just a placeholder sprite
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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Pending gore-fest]

#48 Post by HigurashiKira » Wed Aug 17, 2011 11:10 pm

Bump. Look at that new title screen~

Lint:
Statistics:

The game contains 172 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 2,175 words,
for an average of 12.6 words per screen.
The game contains 1 menus
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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Loli inside]

#49 Post by Azora Tenshi » Sat Aug 20, 2011 7:05 pm

This game seems really interesting, it sorta reminds me of the novel "Hunger Games" (Probably just me), but your game has a really good storyline! Can't wait till its completed, it'd be quite epic!!!
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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Concept Art Update]

#50 Post by HigurashiKira » Thu Aug 25, 2011 1:20 am

Because I'm in a good mood, here's a little snippet:
Commander "Hello?"

??? "Hello Commander."

Commander "Oh, it's you Director. May I ask the reason for your call?"

Director "Commander, I am calling about our little \"project\""

Commander "Oh, that."

Director "According to my feed, you just recently activated it."

Commander "Yes sir, I am getting it ready for-"

Director "Commander, do you not remember what we had planned?"

Commander "Well, I do sir, but you see-"

Director "I don't need your excuses! That specific unit is almost impossible to stop once activated and my clients do not want this Game to end anytime soon."

Commander "Alright sir, I understand. I'll keep it locked up in the base."

Director "You better, otherwise it'll be you who will have to answer to them."
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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Concept Art Update]

#51 Post by NeoSota9 » Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:35 am

Where the demo? I don't see it.

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#52 Post by HigurashiKira » Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:39 am

NeoSota9 wrote:Where the demo? I don't see it.
Currently, the game is going through a rewrite, so no demo for now.
EDIT:
Well, there is the old demo I had here
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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Concept Art Update]

#53 Post by NeoSota9 » Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:13 am

HigurashiKira wrote:
NeoSota9 wrote:Where the demo? I don't see it.
Currently, the game is going through a rewrite, so no demo for now.
EDIT:
Well, there is the old demo I had here
That will do I'm trying to get a feel for this.

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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Concept Art Update]

#54 Post by HigurashiKira » Mon Sep 05, 2011 5:02 pm

Ok, I need to ask: If I were to make a tiny guide-game which gives info on what the hell is going on here as well as to who the characters are, would you think of it as helpful?
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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Concept Art Update]

#55 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Tue Sep 06, 2011 7:53 am

I hate to say this, but your art style kinda ruins the dark aura the game should have... ;n;
Are you planning on getting a sprite artist? O:

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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Concept Art Update]

#56 Post by Hayzel » Tue Sep 06, 2011 11:45 am

Lumen_Astrum wrote:I hate to say this, but your art style kinda ruins the dark aura the game should have... ;n;
Are you planning on getting a sprite artist? O:
Remember that Higurashi has a very dark aura yet all the sprites are overly cute.

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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Concept Art Update]

#57 Post by Melinoe » Tue Sep 06, 2011 11:55 am

I'm really excited for this game, I read The Hunger Games and I loved it, so yeah. Plus, gore. I read the "Blood Leecher Off" screenshot, and I immediately thought of 999: Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors. Which is a good thing, because the dead body descriptions in that game are worse than seeing the body... (Which they don't let you do...sigh...)

Also, I'm sorry if I missed something, but will you actually show some gory dead body CGs?
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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Concept Art Update]

#58 Post by Hayzel » Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:53 pm

Melinoe wrote:Plus, gore. I read the "Blood Leecher Off" screenshot, and I immediately thought of 999: Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors. Which is a good thing, because the dead body descriptions in that game are worse than seeing the body... (Which they don't let you do...sigh...)

Also, I'm sorry if I missed something, but will you actually show some gory dead body CGs?
....O.o what the....

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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Concept Art Update]

#59 Post by HigurashiKira » Tue Sep 06, 2011 6:37 pm

Lumen_Astrum wrote:I hate to say this, but your art style kinda ruins the dark aura the game should have... ;n;
Are you planning on getting a sprite artist? O:
I do have a sprite artist, just waiting for the sprites to be done. The drawings are just my presentation of them.

Also, Corpse Party would like to have a word with you.
Melinoe wrote:I'm really excited for this game, I read The Hunger Games and I loved it, so yeah. Plus, gore. I read the "Blood Leecher Off" screenshot, and I immediately thought of 999: Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors. Which is a good thing, because the dead body descriptions in that game are worse than seeing the body... (Which they don't let you do...sigh...)

Also, I'm sorry if I missed something, but will you actually show some gory dead body CGs?
Glad you like the concept. To be fair, I was first inspired by Killer Queen and then later, after reading The Hunger Games I added some things I liked from the books.

The only reason I added the Blood Leacher was for the fact that 90% of the people on this site are squeemish. So it would be hard to find someone who would do the corpses. Oh well, I'll just very descriptively and turn their imaginations into a bicycle of nightmares. *evil laugh*
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Re: Death Rule: The First Rule [WIP][Concept Art Update]

#60 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:57 am

HigurashiKira wrote:I do have a sprite artist, just waiting for the sprites to be done. The drawings are just my presentation of them.

Also, Corpse Party would like to have a word with you.
Oops, sorry. XD I thought they were the final works XD
I clicked the Corpse Party thing, but it says 403 Forbidden XD
Hayzel wrote:Remember that Higurashi has a very dark aura yet all the sprites are overly cute.
I'm sorry, I've never played Higurashi before...

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