Well, take a look:
Fixed up the prefrence screen today.
Also, here's a special screenshot for everyone~
http://puu.sh/5IX5
Enjoy~

Thanks for the comment. To answer about the POV, I'm writing in a 3rd person perspective since you can't really cover a Game within a game without a bit of POV change (In this case, two POV's).Omnificent wrote:Just posting to let you know that I have been lurking this thread.
This game does have the potential to be pretty engrossing even with the familiar premise, though I'll reserve my full judgement on when the proper demo/full game comes out. If the OP and Commodore's Guide is anything to go by Morgan is by far the most interesting character, though I get the feeling it'll be Abraham that ends up being the POV. Unless this game has a ton of different POVs, in which case that would be pretty awesome.
You may need someone to proofread/spell-check, though, there were a few misspelled words here and there. I could help out there if you'd like.
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