revamped.

[Cain0425]

i really like the way this game is going do you know when there will be a demo for this game

[renpao]

I am finally back from my trip! Thanks to everyone who showed their support while I was away. I really appreciate it from the bottom of my heart!

Just as promised I was able to focus on writing the script: currently at 9k+ and still on going! It's almost half-way done to make a demo (because I finally decided where to end it)...let's see if the demo will end up being past 10k+.

Until I hit a writer's block, I think it's better to focus on the writing for the time being. Then I'll go back to showing WIPs for the art, CGs, and GUI (<--- I'll probably work on this last, seeing as I'm not good with this). C:

Anyways. Replies!

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Hmm, I don't know about the colors, to me they seem pretty okay. I think it's more that there are no folds on his jacket. With this shading I can't help but feel it's made not of fabric, but of something hard like steel or plastic. I glows like steel, yeah. And smooth shadows even strengthen this effect.

Thank you! It's actually funny how I was thinking the same thing about the shirt looking all metallic-y, lol.
I'll post an updated version of the outfit later on once I am done working on the script. C:

OMIGOD Killian = pure awesomeness!!!
The art looks amazing and storyline is original!!
And Pooman is hands-down the best comic character ever.
So looking forward to this~

Ah, a Killian fan! I'm happy to hear he earns some fans while I was away. xD
Thank you so much! That is very kind of you to say. ;A;

i really like the way this game is going do you know when there will be a demo for this game

Thank you for taking interest on my game!
The demo might be out in August because I'm almost half-way done with the script (at least for the demo), but I think it's safer not to promise anything for now. C:

[Azania]

The art... is so beautiful D; and the plot <3!!! I love plots about being a princess xD and the characters all sound great! They're so interesting! I can't wait to play the demo and the full game!!

[Nimuell]

Nice to see you back :'D

It's great you made such progress with writing!

Yay demo demo C:

[rubythorns]

This looks like so much fun! I'm absoulutely amzazed that you did all that by yourself. O_O The art is beautiful.
I'm looking forward to playing. Yay for comics and male otome fans!

[EternalDream]

D-Demo ;A;
I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO IT!!! >w<b

[Snow Blossom]

Demo's always make my day!
Double thumbs up!

[RemnantDream]

Pooman <3_<3
This looks amazing :D I love your art.
(~-3-)~ <-- for some reason that jealous face reminded me of an octopus o.O

[Pyonkotchi]

Looking forward to this. I'm totally loving the art. and the story seems so cute.
also Pooman. I got a good laugh outta that D

[LadyAvori]

Any game with a superhero called Pooman and an illegitmate princess who reads comics is a must play on my list!

I completely agree!!

[xxxSakura]

So many development blogs to stalk! *follows you on Tumlr* I love your art style, and yes we need a demo! *bangs invisible pole repeatedly* Also, I'm amazed at how you're managing everything on your own! If you ever need proof-reading, just ask

[Celestine]

Like the plot. But I don't know who this pooman is? Cute sprites, they give off a nostalgic kinda feel to them. Which I think is romantic.

[ririruetoo]

I can't wait to play this game~! BTW are you looking for Beta-testers? 'Cause if you are, I would totally help!

[Celestine]

I reread the comments gotta say your pretty timid. Don't be so harsh on yourself. Your art is good. It's not so easy to change characteristics in people when drawing. Gareth has a baby face and Ansel looks manly.
Killian has the mysticism characteristic which I like in people. (My childhood friend who likes to draw kinda has trouble in that area between male and females and pretty harsh on her art too.) But you don't.
And with Cameline I liked how you added that interesting headband to her style.
Also I like to add you have practically an original plotline by adding the whole odd superhero thing. Which adds a kinda funny humor, little interesting quirk in there that makes your story unique in its own way.

[SerenaLolipop]

veryveryveryveryveryveryvery good luck!!