(WIP) Keep Smoking! An anti smoking campaign.

[Doctor No]

Hey guys. I made small Kinetic Novel based on a concept i got in another commercial. It is very short and it is about smoking.
I need feed back cuz i'm really stumped about how to improve it.

Here is the link. link removed

I Used sprites from risingbamboobanana and The Sylvie sprite that came with Ren Py.

I'm VERY new to tis. So please guide me where i'm wrong.
Thanks.

[edit]I already know about the smoking sprite problem. And have removed it. But haven't updated the file yet.

[TakeOverWorld]

Small improvements - Grammer and spelling . At the beggining he asked 'Where has everyone gone' but there was no question mark. And the friend says 'keep your figners crossed' which should be fingers. A bit of music might improve it , maybe?

[Doctor No]

Updated in the main post.