[otome] I11 dating sim

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[otome] I11 dating sim

#1 Post by fioricca » Sun Jun 05, 2011 10:22 pm

Hello everyoneee.

Testing out Ren'py; my first time with it, so I thought I'd make something simple. The characters are from the soccer anime Inazuma Eleven, but you can still play this game without knowing the series itself - the story bears no relevance to canon events.

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Windows: http://www.4shared.com/file/81qG_OJg/orz-win32_2.html
Mac: http://www.4shared.com/file/7mt3xDNm/orz-mac.html


I didn't tinker with styling at all as I still haven't figured out how to do that yet - I didn't think that it would be necessary with a simple VN-styled game like this, but mostly because I don't know how to do so. |///D As mentioned before, this is my first game so all sorts of feedback is greatly welcome *_* I know that the colours/art is very inconsistent, the backgrounds are lazy and the story is overused and uncreative. FEEL FREE TO SCREAM AT ME FOR THAT TOO.......

Thanks so much for the help and feedback in advance! *A*
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Re: [otome] I11 dating sim

#2 Post by sorani » Mon Jun 06, 2011 12:24 am

I love your art style! It's so pretty! I downloaded the game, but I've yet to play it....I'll get on it soon. And also, if this game is completed even if it is your first game, shouldn't it be in the completed games section? But if you're still working on it, then never mind!

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#3 Post by fioricca » Mon Jun 06, 2011 3:38 am

Oh it's still in progress |D Thank you so much; so thrilled to hear that you like the art. ♥

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#4 Post by azureXtwilight » Mon Jun 06, 2011 6:30 am

I like it! I really like the way you write~ :D
Please do continue making this game :3

P.S : Dylan is my fave, am I weird? XD

PPS : I checked the wiki of inazuma eleven, at it seems like you took the minor character~ :D
Any reason?
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#5 Post by fioricca » Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:04 am

Aaa thank you so much! Writing is something I have little confidence in, so that means a lot. Thank youuu!

XD All of them are indeed side characters, with the exception of Fideo. And umm if I had to cite a reason, I guess I just like these guys too much |D Pres Hino, the creator of Inazuma Eleven, has announced that he is seriously considering making an official I11 otome game; however you can bet your pennies that it will feature popular main characters, hence these kids will be neglected as they're not that important. I thought it would be cool to have an otome game featuring the captains of the various international teams so I went with the popular Italian (Fideo), English (Edgar) and American teams (Mark and Dylan).

sdgfshdgh I am going to sound like an even bigger tool if I continue. So THANK YOU; I had a lot of fun writing Dylan, I'm really glad you enjoyed him. :D

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#6 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:08 am

Ooooh, the characters are cute :)
You drew them so nicely :)

Good luck ^_^

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#7 Post by Camille » Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:09 am

Oh my gosh an Inazuma Eleven game, haha! This is awesome. (I've got Sakuma in my avatar) I really like your art style. *_* I feel like I'd rather pair up Mark and Dylan than date them myself, though. XD

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#8 Post by fioricca » Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:17 am

@Lumen_Astrum: sdjfhdsj I'm flattered! Thank you so much for the support!


@Camille: HAHA I KNOW RIGHT ;-; I've tried my best to minimise the heroine's/player's participation by stealing Persona 3's narration style, such that most of the focus falls on the characters instead. I'm not sure how successful I am in this regard, but I totally hear you there.

HELLO SAKUMA. Thank you for the support, and I'm happy to hear you like the art - it means a lot!

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#9 Post by Camille » Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:34 am

fioricca wrote:@Camille: HAHA I KNOW RIGHT ;-; I've tried my best to minimise the heroine's/player's participation by stealing Persona 3's narration style, such that most of the focus falls on the characters instead. I'm not sure how successful I am in this regard, but I totally hear you there.

HELLO SAKUMA. Thank you for the support, and I'm happy to hear you like the art - it means a lot!
Ah, that sounds awesome. XD Even if it wasn't a dating sim, I think it'd be fun to see the i11 guys in another context, anyway. Also, I'm on a Mac, so if you could make a Mac distribution, I'd love it. ;A;

Anyway, if you need any help, just holler! I'd be happy to design the UI for you if you want something a bit more fancy.

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#10 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:41 am

fioricca wrote:@Lumen_Astrum: sdjfhdsj I'm flattered! Thank you so much for the support!
No problem, and oh. I just looked at the wikipedia article of Inazuma Eleven, and I'm pretty surprised that even though I've never heard of the title, when looking at the cover, it suddenly looks familiar... I think I saw it will be coming soon on our local channel.

Soon after, I'll know what are they talking about, hooya! xD (even though you say that there's no requirement on watching it, it will make the experience fun at the very least! :))

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#11 Post by fioricca » Mon Jun 06, 2011 9:07 am

Ah, that sounds awesome. XD Even if it wasn't a dating sim, I think it'd be fun to see the i11 guys in another context, anyway. Also, I'm on a Mac, so if you could make a Mac distribution, I'd love it. ;A;

Anyway, if you need any help, just holler! I'd be happy to design the UI for you if you want something a bit more fancy.
whsgdhf silly me. Sorry for that; here you go! http://www.4shared.com/file/7mt3xDNm/orz-mac.html

Aww man that is so sweet of you. Thanks a lot, I'll keep that in mind!

No problem, and oh. I just looked at the wikipedia article of Inazuma Eleven, and I'm pretty surprised that even though I've never heard of the title, when looking at the cover, it suddenly looks familiar... I think I saw it will be coming soon on our local channel.

Soon after, I'll know what are they talking about, hooya! xD (even though you say that there's no requirement on watching it, it will make the experience fun at the very least! :))
Eee I see; do enjoy! I personally think the anime gets more and more awful as time passes but the characters are worth checking out. My take on the characters is somewhat different to canon, I do hope that it's not disappointing...... |///D

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#12 Post by stellacisem » Mon Jun 06, 2011 1:56 pm

the art looks really good! if you need help with anything other than coding, let me know ;) oh BTW, what is this story about? I can't download the demo because the site is blocked in my country. *sigh* (I think it is time I search this Inazuma Eleven :D )
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#13 Post by fioricca » Mon Jun 06, 2011 3:26 pm

Aaah thank you so much! It's so sweet of you to offer help; I'll keep that in mind. ♥ I don't believe it - I never liked 4shared that much myself but I got an account because I thought it wouldn't be blocked anywhere O_O";; What hosting site works for you? I could re-up it elsewhere......

(Have fun with the series XD)

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#14 Post by Snow Blossom » Tue Jun 07, 2011 9:18 pm

Played the demo... It was really cute! And that was one good cliffhanger :3
Mark and Fideo are definitely my favorites... like pancakes and pasta :)
Great job so far and good luck with this!

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#15 Post by fioricca » Tue Jun 07, 2011 10:43 pm

Thank you so much! ♥ So thrilled to hear that you liked it!

Everyone in this forum is so nice, it means a lot that you'd try the game despite not knowing the characters haha q_q

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