[WIP] Avian [GxB]

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[WIP] Avian [GxB]

#1 Post by ayellowbluesky » Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:32 pm

My first game! Oh yeah! It's called Avian right now, but don't be surprised if I change the title.

Anyway, the plot is as follows. The world lives in Miki has not seen color in six years. Everything is either black, white, or some shade in between. No, that's not entirely accurate. Miki can still see her best friend, Raven in color. Then one day, Miki sees a guy walking down the street in color. Curious, she approaches him and questions him. His name is Red, and it turns out the reason that she can see him is because they're both Aferians, a human who has special powers or control over something they shouldn't have. If she wants to know more, Red says that she has to visit the organization that he belongs to, Panther. An organization that recruits Aferians like Miki to fight some monsters that she has only heard of, but never seen. Avians.

Characters:

Miki
"I'm an Aferian? What are you talking about?"
Our 17 year old witty protagonist whom you control. She's not prone to anger, but she's not afraid to fight either. She's suppose to be in school, but luckily for her it's summer. She's been friends with Raven for as long as she can remember. She has long brown hair and blue eyes. She doesn't know what she controls yet.


Possible love interests:

Raven
"You know, one day, I’m going to rule the world."
Miki's friend that she's known almost her whole life. He can be cruel to others, but he has never been so to Miki. He's bash and loud, not to mention unbelievably strong. He has a huge ego. When he was young, he use to tell Miki how he wanted to rule the world, and how he wanted her to be his queen when he did. He doesn't talk about that as much as he use to. He has spiky white hair with red eyes. He has no power that Miki knows of, but there has to be a reason she can see him in color. She doesn't know if he is an Aferian or not.

Red
"Nothing will stop me from killing every single of those Avians!"
The man who recruits Miki into Panther. He says he's twenty but he looks like he's sixteen. He's very headstrong and stubborn. He can be intimidating at times, but he's not as mean as he looks. He's best friends with Leon. Apparently he has a huge grudge against Avains. Surprisingly, he has black hair instead of red. He also has blue eyes. He's tall and is muscular built. His power is rumored to be Immortality, but he won't make any comment about it.

Leon
"I have more reasons to smile then to frown. Guess which one I'm going to do?"
Another Aferian who is a member of Panther. He's the son of the leader, Lady, and looks to be about Miki's age. This doesn't mean he's second in power though. He is very optimistic. He also rarely takes things seriously. According to Red, he has the potential to be amazingly strong, even stronger then him. Apparently he has some sort of hidden power. He's lean and has blond hair with green eyes, just like his mom. He has a very strong bond with Leon. He controls lighting.

Ti
"You should stay away from me! I'm nothing but trouble!"
A stranger who Miki found dancing outside one night. Even though weren't any clouds in the sky, it starts to rain. Miki can see him in color, so she figures outs that he's another Aferian. He appears to be a coward. He runs away when Miki first sees him. The right half of his hair is red and the left side is blue. His right eyes is red and the other is blue. He controls both water and fire.

Avain
The group of monsters that Panther fights against. They only showed up about seventeen years ago. Not much is known about them besides that they are violent are sometimes eat humans.

Panther
The organization fighting against the Avains. Lady is the leader, and Red is second in command. It's very small and hardly known.

Those are all the MAJOR characters. Nothing at all is set in stone.

Endings. I have all of Raven and Red's endings planned out. They have three each. I have a couple ideas for Ti and Leon, but I haven't worked on them much. I'd say elevenish.

All the music will be found online. It will play according to the mood of the scene.

I also need someone to do the artwork. I can't draw. At all. That means I need CG's, Backgrounds, sprites, the whole shabang. Pretty much any style will work.If your interested, comment? I think that would work...

Progress:
Story: 85% done. Working out some kinks and planning endings.
Script: 10%
Coding: 2%
Art: 0%
Music: 15%

Oh yeah. Also, special thanks to Kexruct, who you guys can find on TvTropes. He helps me with this game, and listens to me go on and on about it.
Last edited by ayellowbluesky on Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:42 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: [WIP] Avian [GxB]

#2 Post by redcat » Wed Jul 20, 2011 10:50 pm

Will this be supernatural or sci-fi?
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Re: [WIP] Avian [GxB]

#3 Post by ayellowbluesky » Thu Jul 21, 2011 8:49 am

Between those two, I would have to say supernatural. I don't really know the difference between that and fantasy, but I think it's more fantasy then it is supernatural. There's very little, if any, science involved.
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Re: [WIP] Avian [GxB]

#4 Post by wingzofdarkness » Thu Jul 21, 2011 1:42 pm

The premises of the story sounds interesting. The genre would be fantasy, not supernatural. Supernatural is dealing with the unknown sources such as ghosts, demons, vampires, etc.

I believe you should edit Leon's details. You wrote 'he's the daughter', when in fact he is a man so that would make him a 'son'.

Are you looking for a particular style or quality from an artist? I think you should mention it if you do.

I'll be looking forward to seeing your progress =]

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Re: [WIP] Avian [GxB]

#5 Post by ayellowbluesky » Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:02 pm

>.> *Edited.* Leon is no daughter. xD

As for style, I'd go for pretty much anything.
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