WIP - Heileen 3

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Re: WIP - Heileen 3

#31 Post by Mink »

Hey, he's not all bishie! U R DOING IT WRONG.

No, kidding. God knows I'd kill for a guy who doesn't look like a teenager. Or maybe because I'm not a teenager I prefer guys who, you know, LOOK LIKE ADULTS. But I digress. The sketch is nice, if...sketchy.
Unrelated, but I got Heileen 2 and didn't have problems with it like Heileen 1. Weird~
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#32 Post by Chorvaqueen »

Mink wrote:Hey, he's not all bishie! U R DOING IT WRONG.

No, kidding. God knows I'd kill for a guy who doesn't look like a teenager. Or maybe because I'm not a teenager I prefer guys who, you know, LOOK LIKE ADULTS. But I digress. The sketch is nice, if...sketchy.
Unrelated, but I got Heileen 2 and didn't have problems with it like Heileen 1. Weird~
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Now I'm going to end up thinking this guy is going to be all rapey. D:
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Also same sentiment as Mink. We need more manly men.

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#33 Post by Mink »

Heh, manly men. Now I'm thinking about that song from Robin Hood: Men In Tights. 83

Er, anyway. As for muscle, maybe you should think about how he got the muscle in the first place. If he's got muscle like that, that may imply being more of a body builder than anything. If he got muscle from doing actually work and lifting stuff, that tends to be more lean, functional muscle. Also, abs. Guys generally don't get six-pack abs unless that actually specifically work out to get them. And then you'd have to maintain that...
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#34 Post by jack_norton »

In the story, he is a thief/spy. I think I'm going to reduce muscles a bit (seems too strong now) and shorten his hair. Anything else? :D
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#35 Post by Chorvaqueen »

Well, aren't thieves/spies lightweight in general? I mean for practicality reasons, but still capable of some power.

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#36 Post by jack_norton »

Yes, indeed I told artist to make it muscular, but not like "body-building" type, more like natural muscles, slim, tonic :)
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#37 Post by azureXtwilight »

Yeeesh 8D

Muscles are fine though~ But usually thieves are lightweight so... Okay! XD
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#38 Post by Cain0425 »

cant wait to see the new picture of thieves/spies guy yay

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#39 Post by jack_norton »

Forgot to update this thread. I have both Sebastian and the new adult Marie sprites:
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both their romances are very interesting I think 8)
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#40 Post by Aquane »

:O

Brown hair + blue eyes= instant win in my book

Marie also looks simply gorgeous! Adult Marie, huh? Does this mean Helieen will get a new sprite as well? Shes always looked amazing to me, just wondering because those two are childhood friends so I assume their ages are not far off :3 then again some people retain a more youthful appearance for longer than others.

I'm really looking forward to this :3 I like that you've decided to (or was thinking of, at least?) adding Jonathan. I like him more than John, to be honest xD In the first one I've always thought of him as a simple douchebag clueless ladies man. ;)
Still, that won't stop me from also completing his path, its sure to be interesting~ I've never been disappointed by your games after all, even characters I somewhat dislike have stories that I love~

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#41 Post by jack_norton »

No Heileen will be more similar to her initial sprite :)
There's Jonathan, and his romance path is quite cool (he's the only educated/romantic person aboard) but I think that even John's path is quite nice with some strong love/hate scenes!
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#42 Post by Aquane »

Cool :o haha love/hate scenes are awesome, very entertaining xD

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#43 Post by jack_norton »

A sneak peek of Heileen 3 romance ending CGs:
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I asked Rebecca (the artist) to use full-rendering coloring and the result is amazing! Really probably the best ending CGs of all the games I made so far. Is hard to pick one, but if I had to, my favorite is the Jonathan one, because of the setting/lighting (sunset).
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#44 Post by jack_norton »

So there's the chance that artist can draw 2 more romance CG. I was thinking to do like for Spirited Heart, and have a otome version (GxB) and a yuri version (GxG) if there's enough interest for the yuri version of course. What do you think? :)
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#45 Post by catonkikisbow »

I registered just to answer this, but... while I know a lot of people here are mainly GxB fans, I for one would love that. I stole my sister's computer just to spend hours trying to romance Ruko (the human girl) with Yana, and squealed over each progress. (I actually replayed it again after I accidentally clicked the worst possible answer when the chickens escape, but realized I hadn't saved progress...and will have to do so once more since my computer shut down for an update while I was distracted... But anything to romance Yana! And Thym! Geez they are both so cute after a few right answers.)

I haven't bought any of Heileen yet, but it looks amazing. I'm definitely planning to put the series on top of my list of things to buy, since I've been on a otome (and other visual novel and simulation) game binge lately.
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