Pink Carnations (GXB Otome)

[Shioriemei]

Pink Carnations

Hikari is a high school girl studying for her exams. Her life was going like a routine, until one day she falls asleep next to a aquarium. At that point, she gets chance to experience true love...and the story begins o.o (btw i am rlly bad at writing short summaries without giving spoilers) DX

Cover Art:


Characters:
-Hikari
-Kai

2 Endings o.o (1 good and 1 bad)

BG: 100%
Dialogues: 100%
Script: 80%
Character Art : 100%
CG: 0%

There is going to be 3 Cgs

[Death_HUG]

I don't think your storyline is horrible but it's somewhat uninteresting. So try to make the summary more... interesting? XD Also, maybe you should give us some details about Hikari and Kai? But good luck on finishing this ^_^ I'll definitely play this when it comes out :3

[Shioriemei]

I don't think your storyline is horrible but it's somewhat uninteresting. So try to make the summary more... interesting? XD Also, maybe you should give us some details about Hikari and Kai? But good luck on finishing this ^_^ I'll definitely play this when it comes out :3

:'D I am glad at least 1 person will play dis QAQ It iz kinda short since its my first vn ;o and idk how i avoid putting up spoilers ;A;

[PrivateEyes]

Good luck with your first novel!

Personally, let's say I'm not the biggest fan of shoujo or josei stories XD However, I look forward to reading your complete work

Edit: Also working on my first game so I know how much hard work you have to put into it 0.0

[Desu_Cake]

I think the reason no-one seems interested is that we know nothing more than the fact that it is a romance. That said, I'll probably read it anyway :3

[dollssoulkirie]

Shiroiemei~ Good luck on your game! I, too, am starting on my first attempt with Ren'Py. :3
I'll play the game, once you've released a demo or have completed it. ^^ I normally give all games a try~ (Even tho I really don't post a lot on forums.. Trying to get the hang of posting again after soooo many years without interacting with forums. lol, I feel like a fish out of water.)

[Shioriemei]

@PrivateEyes : Ty >.< I rlly hope you read it O.O

@Desu_Cake : O i c ;o but yay u will read it :'D

@dollssoulkirie : Ty , good luck to you too :3 I am glad you will read mine and when ur vn is out i will read it too :3

[Riviera]

The cover art is nice, anyway!

I'm just kind of waiting for a bit more info.. like, say, character names and sprites. As they are completed of course (don't feel like I'm trying to rush you).

It could be interesting.. but.. well.. as it was said, there are tons of ways this could go from there. She could get psychic impulses from a fish in the aquarium that turns out to be a sort of wish granter that leads her to find her true love, she could dream about one of the fish (who's really a boy that's been cursed) talking to her and this opens up her doing research and meeting boys.. it could.. well.. you get the idea.

So, yeah. Waiting and watching.

[Shioriemei]

The cover art is nice, anyway!

I'm just kind of waiting for a bit more info.. like, say, character names and sprites. As they are completed of course (don't feel like I'm trying to rush you).

It could be interesting.. but.. well.. as it was said, there are tons of ways this could go from there. She could get psychic impulses from a fish in the aquarium that turns out to be a sort of wish granter that leads her to find her true love, she could dream about one of the fish (who's really a boy that's been cursed) talking to her and this opens up her doing research and meeting boys.. it could.. well.. you get the idea.

So, yeah. Waiting and watching.

D: since its my first vn, i didnt wanna mess it up o-o so its kinda short and no supernatural stuff QAQ I just hope you wont get disappointed.

[Cidz]

i dont mind the short sypnosis that much its a WIP afterall. but ill check it out when you have a demo or the game fully released i look forward to it. i love otome, romance, shoujo, etc... soo im sure ill like this! good luck.

[Shioriemei]

i dont mind the short sypnosis that much its a WIP afterall. but ill check it out when you have a demo or the game fully released i look forward to it. i love otome, romance, shoujo, etc... soo im sure ill like this! good luck.

ty ;A;