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Hello
I've been working on a short visual novel titled Little Confetti.

In this game, you are playing as a girl who just got transfered into academy for knight and magician.
As the story advanced you'll befriend with some other students, meet a guy from knight division (your romantic interest) and also perform your study in academy. There's an image map of the academy so player can choose the places they want to go in their free time.



Main Characters:



Sub characters:



The teachers:


Academy Image map:


Screenshot:







One thing I noticed is compatibility problem, the game won't run on some pc, and I have no Idea how to fix it

This is my first time to actually make a visual novel game so It's still far from perfect so I'd love to get some feedback :>
Thank You!

*Sorry for any grammatical error ;;3;;

Update

I've been meeting with someone from a game company, and asked them if it's possible to distribute&published Little Confetti,
So far we have only a gentleman agreement to work together to bring this game into the market...

But.....

Due to several reasons we couldn't do it right away, and the guy suggested me to offer some free sample, to see people's C&C...
So....I'll upload the sample version of this game for people to try and see <and hopefully kind enough to give some feedback ^^>

I'll post the link as soon as I finished uploading it, the connection is kinda sucks in my country....

Meanwhile....
If anyone resides in Malaysia, you can get a copy of this game (full version) for cheap price this December
More info >>>http://forums.comicfiesta.org/showthread.php?tid=7879

Thank you very much!


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The sprites are cute! and the story seems interesting.

ART. SO. CUTE
I'm stalking you.

BEWARE 8D

Ohhh! So cute! (I don't know why but it sort of reminds me of a certain RPG game called Recettear o_O)
Anyways, I'll be looking forward to this and Good luck! ^_^

Awwww, this looks so cute! I'll be looking out for this game. ^_^

I love the whole chibi-ish style art. The story sounds interesting and the image map looks great.

Oh, look, a teacher with an eyepatch.
You've officially got a stalker :D

Looks super-cute!

What problems are you having with it running on some computers? Maybe somebody can help?

+1 the art style, is very nice (even the coloring is particularly good)

Wow, it looks really fun! For some reason, as soon as I saw the art I thought 'RPG?' but it's not it seems. Still, cute art

the sprites and backgrounds look amazing XD
looking forward to more =D
good luck

Those has got to be the creepiest chibis I've ever seen. Sure, Harvest Moon can get away with tiny feet, but yours are literally stumps. Compared to the very detailed colouring and clothing, this clashes a lot, and in the end, looks plain creepy. Good thing we won't see their feet in-game! Background art looks top-notch though.

Anyways, so is this like a stat raising game? Like go to classes, raise up your magic skills or something.

Adorable art!
I'll be stalking this.
Yes.
I will.
8D

This is just... absolutely adorable! oAo!

The art, the backgrounds, the interface... it's just all so cute~ >A<~

...ART. LOOKS. SO. DAMN. CUTE!~♥

I'll definitely play this. ^ ^

Getting in line to tell you how cute the art is~
Looks like an interesting story, too. Looking forward to it!