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Summary: Kaya is dating her childhood friend Tooya, but he doesnt seem to return her feelings. Its her birthday, and they were supposed to meet at park but then she sees him with another girl in a store. She goes to meet him at park and he gets there an hour late. Controlled by her grief, will she say something that she would regret? And if yes, will she able to fix things?



I only own the story XD
Character art and bg from bassnovel, and no cgs >.<
Music from Romeo and Juliet movie

Characters:
Kaya <- the mc
Tooya <- mc's childhood friend o.o
Kookiie (not the way you pronounce cookie , its like cooki-ee)
Mystery Character <- not obtainable guy but he has an important role :3

2 obtainable guys. Well I decided on 5 endings. [one of them is the true ending]

The game contains 227 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 1,703 words,
for an average of 7.5 words per screen.
The game contains 4 menus.

Edit:

I just played this game and got all 5 endings.

It was a very touching story! the music added to the sadness as well. I enjoyed it for a short gxb game. (ah sorry for not saying much, but like i really did like it lol im just not big on words >_> )

Yay I love these charas and even though story is short it feels so... true, realistic(that creeps me out, cause I saw a ghost and I'm telling that this is realistic story)I just played on my insticts and got true ending ^^!
All in all this is great visual novel!:D

It would of been great if it was longer, but still great story!

@Cidz : I am glad you like it :3
@Cute.Sakura.Princess : Yay I wanted it to seem a little realistic :'D (Actually if you play all endings there are tiny details that piece together something.. o3o hehe)
@lunanight : Thank you XD

I just played your game now and got all the endings ^-^!
The characters were great and so was the story ='D!
(But I think you could've used your art for the game,You shouldn't be ashamed to use it,I've seen it before and its really cute 8D!)
Congrats on finishing your first visual novel! I look forward to seeing more from you ^_^!

PockieHoshi wrote:I just played your game now and got all the endings ^-^!
The characters were great and so was the story ='D!
(But I think you could've used your art for the game,You shouldn't be ashamed to use it,I've seen it before and its really cute 8D!)
Congrats on finishing your first visual novel! I look forward to seeing more from you ^_^!

Ty Q^Q Since you played all paths o.o did you notice

if the story and the game was longer i think it would have been better i did not get much story so i am not sure what to say about it

Tenxinori wrote:

PockieHoshi wrote:I just played your game now and got all the endings ^-^!
The characters were great and so was the story ='D!
(But I think you could've used your art for the game,You shouldn't be ashamed to use it,I've seen it before and its really cute 8D!)
Congrats on finishing your first visual novel! I look forward to seeing more from you ^_^!

Ty Q^Q Since you played all paths o.o did you notice

the "girl" and "Kookie" had same text color >:D There is a mystery to it XD

Lolz,I actually DID notice that

@Cain0425 : Well ty for reading it anyway >o<

@PockieHoshi : O.O Ready for major enlightenment? 8D

Oh I see, I was curious about who the mysterious person was.

Something bugs me though, did he really forget the present or actually didnt buy it, and was actually with another girl not to pick a present for her, and why didn't he smile at her the way he did with other girls?

Tenxinori wrote:@Cain0425 : Well ty for reading it anyway >o<

@PockieHoshi : O.O Ready for major enlightenment? 8D

The truth is............KOOKIE IS NOT HUMAN O3O
The person who helped her time travel is Kookie, and he turned into girl..(did that sound weird O.O"") to create misunderstanding (since tooya's fate was to die that say) but he is kaya's bestie , so seeing her cry, he tries to fix it by trying to help her time travel. (thats why if u believe what he say, he help you, otherwise Kookie "appear outa nowhere" and ask her to be with him) O3O

OMG I get it now xDD!
I NEVER would've thought of that ! Oh and I was wondering,Wanna make an organization together o-o;?
An otome game-making one of course 8D!
You have an amazing imagination =]

I was giving hint when O.O You like my imagination? *runs around* yaaay and otome making organization? whats that o.o

Tenxinori wrote:I was giving hint when

the mc said "why are people appearing out of nowhere today" XD

O.O You like my imagination? *runs around* yaaay and otome making organization? whats that o.o

We work together making otome games I guess o-o?
Oh and we can make a name for the organization and place it under that little section that shows the posts and location and stuff =D.
I think it would be a great idea to work with you.
Sounds like a neat idea to me !