Fighting demons and personal demons "Demo" of sorts
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 3:25 pm
EDIT: http://www.mediafire.com/?xsv9cjmbksdmpcd
in case people are too lazy to scroll down
So one day during the summer holidays I thought to myself, I want to make a visual novel. Then when I got back to school and told my friends about my ideas, which are based off my wandering mind in class. They liked the idea, so we started working on a visual novel together. We've started writing the script and I've started the art.
Unfortunately I'm not a great artist, but I'm the best my circle of friends has to offer.
I'll post pics later, but the gist of the story is some kids fight demons and angels blah blah blah. But that's just background, I want my novel to be a character study, to really capture the emotional side of things and explore different emotions, different reactions and characters colliding.
Well, I've talked a lot without showing any real evidence that I'm actually doing anything so here's a picture: unfortunately I couldn't access the original picture since I saved it all on the script writer's laptop, but it's an idea of what one of the characters look like.
I'm okay with any criticism or ideas that can help me.
Once again, I'm not a great artist, since I slacked off 3/4 of my life and just did other things, now that I'm drawing again, it feels weird.
so, I'll update this post with info as we get working.
Oh yeah currently there are over 36 characters. All from my daydreams
LET THE RAMBLING ABOUT TEH STORY BEGIN!
This story takes place on earth. One of the 5 realms. Each realm is designed to keep balance of souls in the universe. Well except the fifth realm which is basically like a library where they monitor everything. So Earth is the processing of souls before it gets sent either to "heaven" or "hell" to be used (depending on the soul's choices therefore tainting it either "good" or "evil") Then after the soul gets used its sent to be cleansed before it gets processed again and that takes place in a realm called "purgatory" the fifth realm was "event horizon" but that's beside the point.
Anyways each realm has an individual lord. Lucifer for Hell, God for Heaven, (Un-named man) for Earth and Thanatos for Purgatory. Also an old looking guy for event horizon but once again that's irrelevant. (or is it?)
So around 2000 years prior to the time that my vn takes place, the lord of Earth dies and the angels and demons see this as a chance to disrupt the flow of souls and harvest the souls directly. Of course, God and Lucifer were like NO! but the demons and angels overpowered them as God and Lucifer had to split their energy to also maintain earth before a new lord was found.
Fast forward to the present in VN time, Demons and Angels control various major cities and those are the churning points of souls.
BUT there's one city that appears to be like all the other demon owned cities except for one thing. The victims usually recover after a year. There are detectives trying to find out what happened. Strange reports of kids with powers. Is this a special city?
Anyways there's gonna be more in depth stuff later.
The picture of the girl on top is Evelyn, who's a tsundere (I know that's lazy on my part, but trust me. There's more to her than just "tsundere")
Also her father shot himself.
I have a test now, but when I get more free time I'll clean stuff up and try to make this wall of text more entertaining
in case people are too lazy to scroll down
So one day during the summer holidays I thought to myself, I want to make a visual novel. Then when I got back to school and told my friends about my ideas, which are based off my wandering mind in class. They liked the idea, so we started working on a visual novel together. We've started writing the script and I've started the art.
Unfortunately I'm not a great artist, but I'm the best my circle of friends has to offer.
I'll post pics later, but the gist of the story is some kids fight demons and angels blah blah blah. But that's just background, I want my novel to be a character study, to really capture the emotional side of things and explore different emotions, different reactions and characters colliding.
Well, I've talked a lot without showing any real evidence that I'm actually doing anything so here's a picture: unfortunately I couldn't access the original picture since I saved it all on the script writer's laptop, but it's an idea of what one of the characters look like.
I'm okay with any criticism or ideas that can help me.
Once again, I'm not a great artist, since I slacked off 3/4 of my life and just did other things, now that I'm drawing again, it feels weird.
so, I'll update this post with info as we get working.
Oh yeah currently there are over 36 characters. All from my daydreams
LET THE RAMBLING ABOUT TEH STORY BEGIN!
This story takes place on earth. One of the 5 realms. Each realm is designed to keep balance of souls in the universe. Well except the fifth realm which is basically like a library where they monitor everything. So Earth is the processing of souls before it gets sent either to "heaven" or "hell" to be used (depending on the soul's choices therefore tainting it either "good" or "evil") Then after the soul gets used its sent to be cleansed before it gets processed again and that takes place in a realm called "purgatory" the fifth realm was "event horizon" but that's beside the point.
Anyways each realm has an individual lord. Lucifer for Hell, God for Heaven, (Un-named man) for Earth and Thanatos for Purgatory. Also an old looking guy for event horizon but once again that's irrelevant. (or is it?)
So around 2000 years prior to the time that my vn takes place, the lord of Earth dies and the angels and demons see this as a chance to disrupt the flow of souls and harvest the souls directly. Of course, God and Lucifer were like NO! but the demons and angels overpowered them as God and Lucifer had to split their energy to also maintain earth before a new lord was found.
Fast forward to the present in VN time, Demons and Angels control various major cities and those are the churning points of souls.
BUT there's one city that appears to be like all the other demon owned cities except for one thing. The victims usually recover after a year. There are detectives trying to find out what happened. Strange reports of kids with powers. Is this a special city?
Anyways there's gonna be more in depth stuff later.
The picture of the girl on top is Evelyn, who's a tsundere (I know that's lazy on my part, but trust me. There's more to her than just "tsundere")
Also her father shot himself.
I have a test now, but when I get more free time I'll clean stuff up and try to make this wall of text more entertaining