Mermaid Revelation (GxB otome)

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Mermaid Revelation (GxB otome)

#1 Post by ShirakiHime » Mon Oct 31, 2011 9:26 pm

Summary: This is about story of a mermaid. As you read more into the story, you will come across mysteries. I am certain that after you read this, you will have whole different viewpoint of the disney fairytale of the little mermaid. Since the truth is bigger than you can imagine...

edit: I guess I cant call this kinetic since there is two endings although only 1 menu.

Characters:
Rena: Main character
Bara: Main character's mother
Other characters will be introduced in the kinetic novel.

The following will be updated frequently.
Programming: 3%
Script: 0%
Character Art: 5%
CG: 0%


I will update more details later ^_^
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#2 Post by Alera » Tue Nov 01, 2011 10:34 am

Wow, you got me with the mystery stuff and what you said about the new view point! Good luck with the project! >w<
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#3 Post by Dakishimete » Tue Nov 01, 2011 10:38 am

You say the truth is bigger than we can imagine, huh? I rarely play kinetic novels but you got me thistime. Good luck!

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#4 Post by DragoonHP » Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:39 pm

It is a KN... so it's automatically gets my attention...

But what you said about the truth being bigger than we can imagine... hmm... it sorts of makes me wonder...

Definitely looking forward to it...

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#5 Post by ShirakiHime » Tue Nov 01, 2011 2:56 pm

@Alera: Thank you :'D (it haz romance too ;D...i am just trying to decide whether i should make the ending, happy/neutral/or tragedy)

@dakishimete: :3 thank you (i am making sure to include some romance too ;D since most of us like it *A*)

@dragoonhp: :3 I am glad that you like kinetic novels

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#6 Post by Alphonse » Thu Nov 03, 2011 8:58 pm

Erm...to be honest...I don't think you shoulda posted a thread before you even start! Your focus should be on making the game at this stage, not gathering fans and supporters. (Especially because, if it's just an idea right now, you're more likely to not finish it.) Personally, I think you should be at least half done overall or completely done with one section before you post... If you do have anything finished right now, anything at all (like maybe the plot), you should mention it. Otherwise, it just looks like you have nothing to back up your (rather vague) talk. ^_^;

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#7 Post by ShirakiHime » Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:54 pm

Alphonse wrote:Erm...to be honest...I don't think you shoulda posted a thread before you even start! Your focus should be on making the game at this stage, not gathering fans and supporters. (Especially because, if it's just an idea right now, you're more likely to not finish it.) Personally, I think you should be at least half done overall or completely done with one section before you post... If you do have anything finished right now, anything at all (like maybe the plot), you should mention it. Otherwise, it just looks like you have nothing to back up your (rather vague) talk. ^_^;
I wanted to see if people are interested in my plot or not. I would be sad if I make a vn and nobody seem interested in the plot. As far as the progression, I have finished the character sketches, but I wanted to update the progression section of this thread after I finish the lineart.

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#8 Post by PockieHoshi » Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:27 pm

Seems interesting so far ^^
Really curious about the character designs xD

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#9 Post by TsukiShima » Sat Nov 05, 2011 1:15 am

Wait, how can a kinetic novel have 2 endings? If there even have one choice, it's an interactive novel actually. Or there's a new game+ after the first ending?

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#10 Post by ShirakiHime » Sat Nov 05, 2011 8:29 am

HanaMori wrote:Wait, how can a kinetic novel have 2 endings? If there even have one choice, it's an interactive novel actually. Or there's a new game+ after the first ending?
:shock: I c ..i guess i should edit it then

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#11 Post by AlessNaph » Fri Dec 23, 2011 2:36 pm

ahh, i love fairytale. good luck with your project ^^

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