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Mermaid Revelation (GxB otome)

Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 9:26 pm
by ShirakiHime
Summary: This is about story of a mermaid. As you read more into the story, you will come across mysteries. I am certain that after you read this, you will have whole different viewpoint of the disney fairytale of the little mermaid. Since the truth is bigger than you can imagine...

edit: I guess I cant call this kinetic since there is two endings although only 1 menu.

Characters:
Rena: Main character
Bara: Main character's mother
Other characters will be introduced in the kinetic novel.

The following will be updated frequently.
Programming: 3%
Script: 0%
Character Art: 5%
CG: 0%


I will update more details later ^_^

Re: Mermaid Revelation (Kinetic GxB otome)

Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 10:34 am
by Alera
Wow, you got me with the mystery stuff and what you said about the new view point! Good luck with the project! >w<

Re: Mermaid Revelation (Kinetic GxB otome)

Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 10:38 am
by Dakishimete
You say the truth is bigger than we can imagine, huh? I rarely play kinetic novels but you got me thistime. Good luck!

Re: Mermaid Revelation (Kinetic GxB otome)

Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:39 pm
by DragoonHP
It is a KN... so it's automatically gets my attention...

But what you said about the truth being bigger than we can imagine... hmm... it sorts of makes me wonder...

Definitely looking forward to it...

Re: Mermaid Revelation (Kinetic GxB otome)

Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 2:56 pm
by ShirakiHime
@Alera: Thank you :'D (it haz romance too ;D...i am just trying to decide whether i should make the ending, happy/neutral/or tragedy)

@dakishimete: :3 thank you (i am making sure to include some romance too ;D since most of us like it *A*)

@dragoonhp: :3 I am glad that you like kinetic novels

Re: Mermaid Revelation (Kinetic GxB otome)

Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 8:58 pm
by Alphonse
Erm...to be honest...I don't think you shoulda posted a thread before you even start! Your focus should be on making the game at this stage, not gathering fans and supporters. (Especially because, if it's just an idea right now, you're more likely to not finish it.) Personally, I think you should be at least half done overall or completely done with one section before you post... If you do have anything finished right now, anything at all (like maybe the plot), you should mention it. Otherwise, it just looks like you have nothing to back up your (rather vague) talk. ^_^;

Re: Mermaid Revelation (Kinetic GxB otome)

Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:54 pm
by ShirakiHime
Alphonse wrote:Erm...to be honest...I don't think you shoulda posted a thread before you even start! Your focus should be on making the game at this stage, not gathering fans and supporters. (Especially because, if it's just an idea right now, you're more likely to not finish it.) Personally, I think you should be at least half done overall or completely done with one section before you post... If you do have anything finished right now, anything at all (like maybe the plot), you should mention it. Otherwise, it just looks like you have nothing to back up your (rather vague) talk. ^_^;
I wanted to see if people are interested in my plot or not. I would be sad if I make a vn and nobody seem interested in the plot. As far as the progression, I have finished the character sketches, but I wanted to update the progression section of this thread after I finish the lineart.

Re: Mermaid Revelation (Kinetic GxB otome)

Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:27 pm
by PockieHoshi
Seems interesting so far ^^
Really curious about the character designs xD

Re: Mermaid Revelation (Kinetic GxB otome)

Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 1:15 am
by TsukiShima
Wait, how can a kinetic novel have 2 endings? If there even have one choice, it's an interactive novel actually. Or there's a new game+ after the first ending?

Re: Mermaid Revelation (Kinetic GxB otome)

Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 8:29 am
by ShirakiHime
HanaMori wrote:Wait, how can a kinetic novel have 2 endings? If there even have one choice, it's an interactive novel actually. Or there's a new game+ after the first ending?
:shock: I c ..i guess i should edit it then

Re: Mermaid Revelation (GxB otome)

Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 2:36 pm
by AlessNaph
ahh, i love fairytale. good luck with your project ^^