Life of another one

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Life of another one

#1 Post by ianshane96 » Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:31 am

Life of another one is a game im making anyone wanna join me in making an epic game? If so add me of Facebook to discuss ill make a group on face.The name is Ian Shane find the picture of a boy wearing a Cap xD

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#2 Post by ianshane96 » Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:31 am

*Facebook*

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#3 Post by Taleweaver » Fri Nov 04, 2011 6:02 am

*facepalm*

You might add a few details here. You're planning an "epic game", so what's it about? Tell us your plans, the scope, the people you need - writers? artists? programmers? musicians? Also, what about you? Not everyone has a facebook account, you know; we'd like to read about you here, on the forums.
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#4 Post by ianshane96 » Fri Nov 04, 2011 6:15 am

well.The story begins with a boy named Shihumaru Jackson.im lazy to tell tomorrow maybe ill tell the full.I need artists,bacground makers,programers.i can help give script since I am the Creator of this thing. 8) 8)

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#5 Post by Wright1000 » Fri Nov 04, 2011 8:44 am

This is what I call daydreaming.
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#6 Post by leon » Fri Nov 04, 2011 9:41 am

@Taleweaver: ROTLF because of your *facepalm* comment.
ianshane96 wrote:well.The story begins with a boy named Shihumaru Jackson.im lazy to tell tomorrow maybe ill tell the full.
If The Creator is too lazy to even explain more about his project, than just the title and the name of the protagonist, I'm concerned about the future of this project. Most projects (especially epic one) end up unfinished, even when their creators are not lazy...
ianshane96 wrote:I need artists,bacground makers,programers.i can help give script since I am the Creator of this thing. 8) 8)
Don't forget a proofreader...

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#7 Post by Taleweaver » Fri Nov 04, 2011 1:05 pm

leon wrote:If The Creator is too lazy to even explain more about his project, than just the title and the name of the protagonist, I'm concerned about the future of this project. Most projects (especially epic one) end up unfinished, even when their creators are not lazy...
This.

Take a look at what other developers in this forum do to present their works in progress. Some of them tell so much about their games that you don't even have to play them anymore after having read the thread not only know the quick and dirty but already have a rather good grasp of the game's dramatis personae, setting, plot and producer's ambitions. In other words, plenty of reasons to decide whether you want to join in the production or not.
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#8 Post by sake-bento » Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:21 pm

ianshane96, it's highly suggested that you include information about your game in your first post, otherwise you won't garner any interest at all. Also, please refrain from double posting. If you need to correct a typo in a post or change something else, click on the "edit" button in the bottom right corner of your post.

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#9 Post by ianshane96 » Tue Dec 06, 2011 3:07 am

ok =.=

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#10 Post by ianshane96 » Tue Dec 06, 2011 3:17 am

it begins with a 17or was it 18 year old boy named Shihumaru Jackson.after he prepares himself to go to school after christmas he woke up late and when he was running out of his house to meet his friend Ayumi...Well thats it im still thinking whats gonna happen next.I did complete untill he woke up late scene in renpy.just need backgrounds.

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#11 Post by ianshane96 » Tue Dec 06, 2011 3:18 am

anyways how to post images in here???i wanna show u a sample of my work.

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#12 Post by Pugfarts » Tue Dec 06, 2011 3:43 am

you use IMG tags. Does he run out of his house with bread in his mouth? This is important. Don't forget the bread.

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#13 Post by tigersmurf » Tue Dec 06, 2011 5:41 am

So, you have a young man who wakes up late and goes to meet his friend and that's it? And you're already pitching this idea? Maybe once you finish a few full scenes, an outline or, you know, something you can come back and recruit some folks to your cause.

But, honestly, it doesn't sound like you've put very much into this, so far. It's hard to get excited about a project that is so early in its development that its Creator doesn't even have more than what, in the movie biz, is known as an establishing shot. About 10 seconds of screen time here, max.

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#14 Post by Blue Lemma » Tue Dec 06, 2011 6:32 am

Okay, this needs to get nipped right here (even for the double-posting alone.)

tigersmurf and Wright1000 are right. I'm sorry, but a short vague idea in your head does not make much of a "Work in Progress." Certainly not one to be posting and asking for help with. You need to flesh out your idea more and show that you are doing real work on it, or else you won't know that you have a realistic shot at finishing, let alone anyone else.

This may sound harsh, but I've seen far too many of these kinds of posts. They have to stop sometime, and they're stopping now. Lemma is now the Pipe Dream Police.

If you can get your ideas more detailed and show legitimate work, you are welcome to post about your project here. But until then, going by what you've said, this is nothing more than a fleeting fantasy at the moment. Don't worry, we've all been there. Find your vision, stick to it, and show us that you have what it takes to put the time in and get things rolling :)
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