The Silver Age[Murder Mystery]

[Van Knox]

--Artist sort of disappeared on me, might as well put this on hold for now.--

[Zatch]

This sounds interesting. I can't judge it any further though beside on what you have before. You got yourself a stalker though! Can't wait to see what the screenshots of the game.

[kingjing]

Ooh! I love a good locked-room mystery!
It's hard to really offer feedback on such a general summery, but that's okay! I don't want to know how he was killed until I play it!
I guess the only thing that struck me as odd was the name "Waltz," but that's what we generally call a minor matter.

[Van Knox]

--Artist sort of disappeared on me, might as well put this on hold for now.--

[Zatch]

No problem, man. I have the same problem but let some people to read it and tell you what they think. Don't get discourage if you don't get a lot comments on this thread. Some people just stalk threads without saying thing( I kinda of do that sometimes.)

If you need any help just hit me up with an pm. :3

[Van Knox]

Thanks! Yeah, you're right, I guess I should have something in the topic at least. I edited an excerpt into the opening post just so that it wouldn't look so...empty, until I got the screenshots, haha.

[Camille]

This sounds interesting to me! I can't offer any real criticisms, but just based on the premise, it sounds like something I'd be willing to give a try.

[Arcanum]

Ahhh I have always loved murder mystery novels - I'll definitely be the one eager to point the finger and accuse the killer! Caaan't wait for screenshots.

[Sunlit-Dreamer]

A gentleman thief who announces what he's going to steal and when. Reminds me of a certain thief....(Kaitou Kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiid yosh!) And a case of a murder when no footprints in the snow. Reminds me of a case in Detective Conan. >:3 You have caught my interest. Hope you thought of another way that it was done otherwise it would take the fun out of solving the murder.

[Van Knox]

A gentleman thief who announces what he's going to steal and when. Reminds me of a certain thief....(Kaitou Kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiid yosh!) And a case of a murder when no footprints in the snow. Reminds me of a case in Detective Conan. >:3 You have caught my interest. Hope you thought of another way that it was done otherwise it would take the fun out of solving the murder.

Don't worry, I definitely wouldn't do something like copying a trick from another series. That's the lowest of lows among mystery writers. That much I can promise you, I'm not copying any tricks haha.

The 'gentleman thief' part isn't inspired by Kaitou Kid though, it's inspired by Arsène Lupin(who in turn inspired Kaitou Kid from Conan).

[kingjing]

The 'gentleman thief' part isn't inspired by Kaitou Kid though, it's inspired by Arsène Lupin(who in turn inspired Kaitou Kid from Conan).

Did someone say Lupin?

[Morhighan]

I love mystery. I already see a few nods towards other authors, which makes me happy.
Best of luck! *stalks*

[Veniae]

This sounds really intriguing! The premise caught my interest and, well, it isn't everyday that you see a murder mystery VN. :'D

Good luck!

[Elze]

It sounds pretty interesting so far. I'll be keeping my eye on this <3