Tonight [GxB]
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Tonight [GxB]
VN, Romance, Slice of Life
Legend has it that The Magpie Bridge appears once every August to reunite star-crossed lovers. For Lola, legend becomes fact when a gap year vacation in Yunnan, China finds her touring the province alongside an unusual companion: an 1000-year-old, jilted ghost.
Throw in a drifting teahouse, a moody tractor, and a mystery pen pal, and what began as a retreat for self-actualization quickly goes awry. But life is a funny thing, and Lola learns that sometimes, the sweetest part of finding yourself is getting lost.
(WIP)
Circa 1000, Song Dynasty
Zhu
Zhu is the unruly daughter of a prominent general. She prefers mud between her toes to jade around her wrists, and is widely known in the palace by her nickname "The Wayward Princess". Over the years, Zhu has racked up an impressive record of offences, her worst being the time she lent the crown prince porn. Suitor numbers have dropped significantly since, much to Zhu's delight.
When the Emperor sends her father south to build rapport, Zhu is instantly packed and prepared for Dali. Dali, unfortunately, is not prepared for Zhu. Confident and capricious, Zhu takes the capital by storm, and Dali's Finishing School for Noble Maidens will never be the same.
Yong
Yong is hands down the most popular man in Dali when it comes to older women. The elderly, to be exact. The deadly combination of his boy-next-door charms and dimples has local grandmas doting on him nonstop. As a result, he’s become unanimously shunned by grandpas in the community. Zhu knows him quite intimately through gripes from her own grandfather at their dinner table.
Yong's hut is sits on the outskirts of town, a mile east of Dali's Finishing School for Noble Maidens.
Song Yi
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Wu
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2010
Lola
The protagonist. At 18, Lola is a whimsical girl seesawing between the roles of the adult and the child. Like the rest of Tonight's cast, Lola finds herself at a standstill in life. Ever since graduation, Lola has been plagued by a growing anxiety about her future. She can't help but feel incompetent in comparison to her classmates who've enrolled in post-secondary or joined the workforce, while she hangs in limbo with no direction or purpose. After months of deliberating, Lola finally decides to place her savings and her bet on a getaway. She sets off for Yunnan hoping the change of scenery will put things into perspective.
With her natural inclinations for buffoonery and optimism, it isn't long before Lola gets tangled up in a string of misadventures.
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Little is known about Lola’s confidant who goes by the pseudonym “Mapo Tofu”.
Yao Ning
Yao is a mute waiter working night shifts at the moving teahouse, The Ginkgo. Although he carries a pad and pen in his back pocket, Yao seldom communicates through writing save to take down orders. Instead, he relies on gestures to get his point across. The paper stays with him at all times, just in case, because Yao has the tendency to ramble incoherently around people he likes. This is mostly seen in conversations with his younger sister, who invariably gives up at the 5 minute mark, kisses Yao on the forehead, and walks away. His family calls him “The Loud Silence”.
Shuen
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-FREE!ヽ(*≧▽≦)ノ
-30+ CGs
-2 singletons
-3 endings maybe
-Uh...I'm drawing everything with my mouse?
Script: 100%
Proofreading: 99.9%
Coding: 85%
Art: 20%
Music: 50%
(IDK why random parts of the screen go blurry when I take screenies orz.)
To CheeryMoya, proofreader extraordinaire-Cripes, where do I start? CheeryMoya is hecka nice. She volunteered to proofread Tonight's script and gave (gives, really; she teaches me new things all the time) great advice on just about everything I struggle with, going as far as coding scenes for me to use as reference! Goddamn. ❤
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Re: Tonight [GxB VN, WIP]
Holy crap is that menu image mouse-drawn, too? O_O This looks and sounds awesome! Excited to see how this will turn out. Best of luck! And I totally agree about the turning sprites thing. XD That's the same reason we made the sprites in our game with a 3/4 view so they can turn~
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@Camille: The menu? Yeah, it is. And you guys pioneer proper body language <3 THANK YOU.
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That mouse art is...amazing. Brings a tear of amazement and joy to my eyes *sniff*
I like the idea and sound of the game! Good luck with it ^_^
I like the idea and sound of the game! Good luck with it ^_^
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OH MY GOD!
With a mouse O________0??
*runs to sit in her emo corner*
Seriously though its just gorgeous ~
and the story seems to be unique too .
Good luck on this!
With a mouse O________0??
*runs to sit in her emo corner*
Seriously though its just gorgeous ~
and the story seems to be unique too .
Good luck on this!
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@manga_otaku & PockieHoshi: Thanks! I hope it'll be fun to play! (< projecting too far ahead, lol)
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First impression seems good to me~~ xD I like your sense of humour, so the story already seems interesting xD
Damn, I've drawn with a mouse before so kudos to you for having so much patience for this 8D
Man, I am liking those hot guys at the side there But in all seriousness, that really is a gorgeous picture
Damn, I've drawn with a mouse before so kudos to you for having so much patience for this 8D
Man, I am liking those hot guys at the side there But in all seriousness, that really is a gorgeous picture
PM me if needed
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Mouse-drawn? O_O
That's awesome... I had been drawing with a mouse before but it never came out that awesome... XD
Good luck!
That's awesome... I had been drawing with a mouse before but it never came out that awesome... XD
Good luck!
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I like how you incorporated the Double Happiness character (囍, shuāngxǐ) into the main menu But dayum, all that beauteous art is done by mouse? youhaveseriousskillz. That and a nice idea for a story has earned you another stalker
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OMIGOD a twist on the tale of Niulang and Zhinu?? Count me in! Not to mention the art is gorgeous. Man, I'm just drooling over those hot guys XD But seriously. I want your hands. Is Lola supposed to be something along the lines of Zhinu's incarnation? Regardless, consider yourself officially stalked~
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Out of curiosity, why don't you use a tablet?
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She doesn't have one.
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Yeah, but she could get one. Mouse aren't exactly intuitive to draw with and can do damage to your hands, so I was wondering if it was a personal preference thing.VenusEclipse wrote:She doesn't have one.
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[Edit: Argh, typos.]
@Tag-: Thank you very much!I worked very hard on those men.
@Lumen_Astrum: You've drawn with a mouse before? Do want. (That includes you Tag-, I don't care if that derails this thread, fork 'em over! XD)
@Rewritten Ennui: Your logic...me gusta. As for the touch of character, 囍 is only the beginning; there will be some Asian invasion going down in that bottom right corner, believe you me. Thanks for stalking!
@Snow Blossom: The Magpie Bridge I pillaged from the Magpie Festival (and, by proxy, Niulang and Zhinu). The tale leaves the same aftertaste as Tonight, but the backstory here is muchlamer tamer. Also, reincarnation is ON.
@VenusEclipse: Hey, it's you!
@Auro-Cyanide: The honest answer? I'm broke lol. As a student in debt, top priority is funding tomorrow's lunch. No money to spare for a tablet, I'm afraid. (Thanks for worrying about my ergonomic safety, but of the three hours I spend on a CG, two are just me surfing YouTube XD)
@Tag-: Thank you very much!
@Lumen_Astrum: You've drawn with a mouse before? Do want. (That includes you Tag-, I don't care if that derails this thread, fork 'em over! XD)
@Rewritten Ennui: Your logic...me gusta. As for the touch of character, 囍 is only the beginning; there will be some Asian invasion going down in that bottom right corner, believe you me. Thanks for stalking!
@Snow Blossom: The Magpie Bridge I pillaged from the Magpie Festival (and, by proxy, Niulang and Zhinu). The tale leaves the same aftertaste as Tonight, but the backstory here is much
@VenusEclipse: Hey, it's you!
@Auro-Cyanide: The honest answer? I'm broke lol. As a student in debt, top priority is funding tomorrow's lunch. No money to spare for a tablet, I'm afraid. (Thanks for worrying about my ergonomic safety, but of the three hours I spend on a CG, two are just me surfing YouTube XD)
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Yep. My mouse art looks horrible though. XD
And if that thee-hour thing is true, you can try disconnecting your internet for a while. It can help you focus and so you won't keep checking stuff. You can just download those videos you like using some Youtube ripper of sorts XD
And if that thee-hour thing is true, you can try disconnecting your internet for a while. It can help you focus and so you won't keep checking stuff. You can just download those videos you like using some Youtube ripper of sorts XD
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