[Otome] 月の姫 | Kaguya-hime

[lepapillonrouge]

I love the art style, and the story seems pretty nice |D
I wonder if the guys have to fight for her love and search for impossible things...

[PrettieAngel]

Ah, I see.
Yeah, ABJDs and BJDs are pretty much the same thing. It's just the 'A' is just sometimes added to mean Asian but I suppose it's more commonly referred to as just BJD.

[Veniae]

Yes please! I totally love that, the art style is gorgeous! Can't wait to see how it comes along.

Good luck!

[Rin]

@lepapillonrouge: The story is based on Kaguya-hime, so the core issues (like searching for impossible thing, date of returning, bachelors, King, the reason why Kaguyahime is there...) are needed. However me and my teammates would manage to make some alterations of background scenes and add extra-events on while maintaining the core plot/issues as well as reasonableness. :3
Btw, forgive me for something off-topic, I like your forum nickname :p

@PrettieAngel: I already made some research *x* They are so gorgeous and flawless *0* I want them!! xDDD

@Veniae: Whoah thank so much :p I'm so grateful

[Rin]

I just made a logo for the project :3 Also updated some sample Screenshot for the CG Gallery~

(This pic is when we hover the mouse at Sifal's Gallery)

For more information please visit our blog <3 Thanks ~

[PrettieAngel]

Yes, BJDs are very beautiful but rather costly. *_* (That's getting off topic so no more.)

@CG Gallery: It looks pretty good but I'm not sure I quite understand how it's supposed to work. Are the separate characters clickable buttons which allow you to access their specific gallery? If so, and this is just a suggestion, it might be good to make them stand out from the background/ each other a bit more obviously.

[Rin]

Woah thanks you sooooooo much for the suggestion xDDD I'll discuss with the programmer ~

[xBarahime2]

This looks so amazing!! The art is so beautiful and the bishies <3333 The plot sound very interesting, I don't know much about Kaguya-hime except the part that she will return to the moon >.> I'm soo looking forward to this story ^-^ Goodluck on this project, it looks very promising Gonna stalk this thread xDD

[9:19]

Sweet. I like the logo. Definitely keeping my eyes peeled for this.

[Rewritten Ennui]

[CG Gallery preview]

Oh Zephy-poo, why are you looking so derp? Is it your tongue? Yes, I am certain that it is your tongue that is making you look derp.
IDK, but Zephyr's expression looks weird to me :/ And where did he get that smexy collar from? Mmm... me like smexy collars...

[Kokoro Hane]

Wow, the art looks REALLY beautiful! The coloring and eyes are gorgeous. I will be keeping an eye on this one ^.^

[Rin]

@xBarahime2, 9:19, Kokoro Hane: Thank you so much xDDD You guys gave me inspiration for the pj :p

@Rewritten Ennui: Isn't it his habit? :p He's pretty rebellious and often do thing that normal ppl don't, w/o bothering the consequences. ~
About the collar, I changed their clothes in the pic. The guys' clothes will changed as well in the game. :p

[GeneDNC]

@GeneDNC: Oh... My bad. *x* I should've explain it. I colored all the characters in a kind of real style. Meaning, in the story I just use the common color for hairs (blonde, brunettes...etc), skins, eyes (blue, green, black, brown...) stuffs. (Zephyr is an exception since he dyed his hair :p). For the MC's case, the pale skin, along with white eyelashes and hair which makes she looks like an Albinism or whatever it's called, is kinda unusual under people's eyes. :S

I thought it might be something like that but wasn't sure, so thanks for clearing that up.

Yay CG gallery. I must say that the bamboo image is a little overwhelming. Obviously I don't know what the rest of the GUI will look like and it will all probably fit together, but the image is very green and very busy. This is just a suggestion but I would try something simpler and plainer that doesn't take the eye away from the images of the guys.

It's awesome that they will be changing clothes in-game.

[Miyoshi]

As GeneDNC already said the background is a too colorful, a simple way to deal with it is to lighten or darken the background and only show it's full colors on the part where the mouse hovered over. That would make it less "overwhelming".
But that's just a suggestion

[Rin]

Thanks GeneDNC and Miyoshi for your kindly help :p I already reduced the background's Brightness and blurred it for a little bit. Is that better? O.o *x*
And Miyoshiiiiiii that's such an awesome advice! Thanks *glomps* xDDDD