The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 03 DEMO_updated 25/12)

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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 01 DEMO)

#16 Post by clua » Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:51 pm

I managed to finish not only chapter 02..Im also finished with chapie 03(which is very short but I think it was necessary)
the next chapter is quite long...and its the first chapter when you start making choices

Here s some scraps meanwhile I upload the other demo:

Lois and Cannan(with mosaic because spoilers)
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And a Lois trying to be epic(I hope that what I wrote down there doesnt read because its also spoilers...lol better pixelate that)
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So far..Anybody has played it? D: i would like to hear your thoughts!

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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 01 DEMO)

#17 Post by natsumachi » Sun Dec 25, 2011 12:06 am

I finally got around to playing the demo.

The graphics and chapter title look very nice. And the star at the end of sentences is a cute touch.

A few points:
-the menu sound effect was far too loud, and kind of irritating.
-the style of the backgrounds kind of clashed with the drawn graphics.
Also, in regards to grammar and spelling, have you tried finding a beta-reader with strong English skills in the recruitment section? I highly recommend it.

I'm not sure what is going on but the end of chapter 1 was scary/creepy ;~; good job.

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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 01 DEMO)

#18 Post by clua » Sun Dec 25, 2011 8:27 pm

natsumachi wrote:I finally got around to playing the demo.

The graphics and chapter title look very nice. And the star at the end of sentences is a cute touch.

A few points:
-the menu sound effect was far too loud, and kind of irritating.
-the style of the backgrounds kind of clashed with the drawn graphics.
Also, in regards to grammar and spelling, have you tried finding a beta-reader with strong English skills in the recruitment section? I highly recommend it.

I'm not sure what is going on but the end of chapter 1 was scary/creepy ;~; good job.
:D!! Thank you so much for playing! I saw many downloads(without the ones that my friends did)
and I was worried because nobody gave feedback...I guess its because christmas time and everybody is busy

About what you point

- D:! Everything on my pc sounds so low...I didnt realize that it was so loud..I think I saw a code to low the volume of music
I will give it a try
-:__; Im sorry! I can do bgs But Im the procrastinator artist type...Bgs takes me a lot of time to draw and I enjoy more to do characters...I dont want an excuse to abandon this proyect..So thats why Im using photos with some loosy efect of photoshop
I will research a little about how can I make more cooler bgs(I saw some cool resources but I didnt want them to look japanese..Even if in the visual you dont even know where does events takes place)
-I will totally give the script to someone to check it out...But I want to have all the script written first..I think It would be more fast....I think!

Thank you a lot for the feedback! I want an eerie feel on the visual haha but dont get me wrong I dont want you to be scary(sorry for the
shout D:)
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note:lower the volume a little..Gotta check sounds!
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 01 DEMO)

#19 Post by natsumachi » Mon Dec 26, 2011 4:18 am

clua wrote: Bgs takes me a lot of time to draw and I enjoy more to do characters...I dont want an excuse to abandon this proyect..So thats why Im using photos with some loosy efect of photoshop
I will research a little about how can I make more cooler bgs(I saw some cool resources but I didnt want them to look japanese..Even if in the visual you dont even know where does events takes place)
Ah yes of course, I know what you mean and that's totally understandable for a non-commercial game. I'm using photoshop'd photos too. XD More what I meant is, the very jagged type of photoshop filter has a strong contrast with your smooth drawing style. But maybe it's meant to create a strange atmosphere?

Anyway, good luck with finishing your script. :)

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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 01 DEMO)

#20 Post by clua » Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:10 pm

natsumachi wrote:
clua wrote: Bgs takes me a lot of time to draw and I enjoy more to do characters...I dont want an excuse to abandon this proyect..So thats why Im using photos with some loosy efect of photoshop
I will research a little about how can I make more cooler bgs(I saw some cool resources but I didnt want them to look japanese..Even if in the visual you dont even know where does events takes place)
Ah yes of course, I know what you mean and that's totally understandable for a non-commercial game. I'm using photoshop'd photos too. XD More what I meant is, the very jagged type of photoshop filter has a strong contrast with your smooth drawing style. But maybe it's meant to create a strange atmosphere?

Anyway, good luck with finishing your script. :)
Ohh I see..Maybe these too wont get along because its too contrasting? I will give them a check..:D

Thank you so much for checking again! And Happy New Year! I hope I finish this one haha


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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 03 DEMO_updated 25/12)

#21 Post by clua » Tue Jan 10, 2012 12:24 pm

Im back to scripting...Two friends of mine give me their thoughts...It seems that one of them feels like it needs more images on the second chapter

Any thoughts?
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 03 DEMO_updated 25/12)

#22 Post by clua » Sat Jan 28, 2012 10:35 am

rewritting all 4th chapter...something was very off.D:
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 03 DEMO_updated 25/12)

#23 Post by clua » Thu Feb 16, 2012 8:36 pm

I found an interesting filter on this board for making bgs like drawings(yes..Lazyness to the max)

Also Mink is going to help me with the text checkout! I already finished chapter 04(Its very long)
things goes very slow till now...On chapter 05 I think It will go faster till chapter 06
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 03 DEMO_updated 25/12)

#24 Post by clua » Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:40 pm

And then I keep talking to myself here haha..Maybe I should move this to works in progress?
Mink is working already to make chapter 1 to 3 more understandable!

and welp Im doing already chapter 5....last part on chapter 4 you can already have an ending

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One of those annoying incomplete endings lol

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