The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 03 DEMO_updated 25/12)
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 01 DEMO)
I managed to finish not only chapter 02..Im also finished with chapie 03(which is very short but I think it was necessary)
the next chapter is quite long...and its the first chapter when you start making choices
Here s some scraps meanwhile I upload the other demo:
Lois and Cannan(with mosaic because spoilers)
And a Lois trying to be epic(I hope that what I wrote down there doesnt read because its also spoilers...lol better pixelate that)
So far..Anybody has played it? D: i would like to hear your thoughts!
Also
(Merry Christmas!!)
the next chapter is quite long...and its the first chapter when you start making choices
Here s some scraps meanwhile I upload the other demo:
Lois and Cannan(with mosaic because spoilers)
And a Lois trying to be epic(I hope that what I wrote down there doesnt read because its also spoilers...lol better pixelate that)
So far..Anybody has played it? D: i would like to hear your thoughts!
Also
(Merry Christmas!!)
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 01 DEMO)
I finally got around to playing the demo.
The graphics and chapter title look very nice. And the star at the end of sentences is a cute touch.
A few points:
-the menu sound effect was far too loud, and kind of irritating.
-the style of the backgrounds kind of clashed with the drawn graphics.
Also, in regards to grammar and spelling, have you tried finding a beta-reader with strong English skills in the recruitment section? I highly recommend it.
I'm not sure what is going on but the end of chapter 1 was scary/creepy ;~; good job.
The graphics and chapter title look very nice. And the star at the end of sentences is a cute touch.
A few points:
-the menu sound effect was far too loud, and kind of irritating.
-the style of the backgrounds kind of clashed with the drawn graphics.
Also, in regards to grammar and spelling, have you tried finding a beta-reader with strong English skills in the recruitment section? I highly recommend it.
I'm not sure what is going on but the end of chapter 1 was scary/creepy ;~; good job.
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 01 DEMO)
!! Thank you so much for playing! I saw many downloads(without the ones that my friends did)natsumachi wrote:I finally got around to playing the demo.
The graphics and chapter title look very nice. And the star at the end of sentences is a cute touch.
A few points:
-the menu sound effect was far too loud, and kind of irritating.
-the style of the backgrounds kind of clashed with the drawn graphics.
Also, in regards to grammar and spelling, have you tried finding a beta-reader with strong English skills in the recruitment section? I highly recommend it.
I'm not sure what is going on but the end of chapter 1 was scary/creepy ;~; good job.
and I was worried because nobody gave feedback...I guess its because christmas time and everybody is busy
About what you point
- D:! Everything on my pc sounds so low...I didnt realize that it was so loud..I think I saw a code to low the volume of music
I will give it a try
-:__; Im sorry! I can do bgs But Im the procrastinator artist type...Bgs takes me a lot of time to draw and I enjoy more to do characters...I dont want an excuse to abandon this proyect..So thats why Im using photos with some loosy efect of photoshop
I will research a little about how can I make more cooler bgs(I saw some cool resources but I didnt want them to look japanese..Even if in the visual you dont even know where does events takes place)
-I will totally give the script to someone to check it out...But I want to have all the script written first..I think It would be more fast....I think!
Thank you a lot for the feedback! I want an eerie feel on the visual haha but dont get me wrong I dont want you to be scary(sorry for the
shout D:)
Also:Demo(Till chap 03)
note:lower the volume a little..Gotta check sounds!
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 01 DEMO)
Ah yes of course, I know what you mean and that's totally understandable for a non-commercial game. I'm using photoshop'd photos too. XD More what I meant is, the very jagged type of photoshop filter has a strong contrast with your smooth drawing style. But maybe it's meant to create a strange atmosphere?clua wrote: Bgs takes me a lot of time to draw and I enjoy more to do characters...I dont want an excuse to abandon this proyect..So thats why Im using photos with some loosy efect of photoshop
I will research a little about how can I make more cooler bgs(I saw some cool resources but I didnt want them to look japanese..Even if in the visual you dont even know where does events takes place)
Anyway, good luck with finishing your script. :)
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 01 DEMO)
Ohh I see..Maybe these too wont get along because its too contrasting? I will give them a check..natsumachi wrote:Ah yes of course, I know what you mean and that's totally understandable for a non-commercial game. I'm using photoshop'd photos too. XD More what I meant is, the very jagged type of photoshop filter has a strong contrast with your smooth drawing style. But maybe it's meant to create a strange atmosphere?clua wrote: Bgs takes me a lot of time to draw and I enjoy more to do characters...I dont want an excuse to abandon this proyect..So thats why Im using photos with some loosy efect of photoshop
I will research a little about how can I make more cooler bgs(I saw some cool resources but I didnt want them to look japanese..Even if in the visual you dont even know where does events takes place)
Anyway, good luck with finishing your script.
Thank you so much for checking again! And Happy New Year! I hope I finish this one haha
Happy New Year to all!!
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 03 DEMO_updated 25/12)
Im back to scripting...Two friends of mine give me their thoughts...It seems that one of them feels like it needs more images on the second chapter
Any thoughts?
Any thoughts?
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 03 DEMO_updated 25/12)
rewritting all 4th chapter...something was very off.D:
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 03 DEMO_updated 25/12)
I found an interesting filter on this board for making bgs like drawings(yes..Lazyness to the max)
Also Mink is going to help me with the text checkout! I already finished chapter 04(Its very long)
things goes very slow till now...On chapter 05 I think It will go faster till chapter 06
Also Mink is going to help me with the text checkout! I already finished chapter 04(Its very long)
things goes very slow till now...On chapter 05 I think It will go faster till chapter 06
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Re: The hurtful Wall(WIP/Chap 03 DEMO_updated 25/12)
And then I keep talking to myself here haha..Maybe I should move this to works in progress?
Mink is working already to make chapter 1 to 3 more understandable!
and welp Im doing already chapter 5....last part on chapter 4 you can already have an ending
One of those annoying incomplete endings lol
EDIT: I did a thread here
Mink is working already to make chapter 1 to 3 more understandable!
and welp Im doing already chapter 5....last part on chapter 4 you can already have an ending
One of those annoying incomplete endings lol
EDIT: I did a thread here
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