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Love Over Diamonds WIP (Tentative Title) [Otome]

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:04 am
by Green Skies
Hello! It's Studio Gabsky!
This is our first major project. It is your cliche [GXB] otome, with 1 girl and 3 bachelors.
You might have seen us lurking around the development forum, but I've decided to make this project official(-er).

Synopsis:

Minah, heiress to one of the world’s largest business conglomerates, has lived an easy, sheltered life...until now. One minute she’s being treated like royalty and the next she’s being shipped off on a plane to see her new fiancé, a man she has never met let alone loved! Minah isn’t stupid—she knows very well that her father didn’t choose this man because “he’s a good match,” but to merge with a promising company in Europe. She plans to do whatever it takes to prevent this ridiculous union. Little does she know, there are others that have the very same goal…

Bachelors:

Lee Hyung Joon: Moody and protective, Hyung Joon trusts no one but you and your father. Though he isn’t the best at expressing himself, he cares deeply for you, and will not hesitate to put his life on the line to keep you safe. What he needs is someone who will do the same.

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Nicușor Ciurea: Armed with a flawless face and charismatic personality, Nicușor is naturally gifted in the art of seduction. He hardly ever needs to lift a finger to get his way, and because of this, there is little he appreciates. It’s about time someone showed him how to love.

???: A man that remains a mystery. Can you reach him?

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NOTE: Original post has been edited by the writer.

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We would love any sort of feedback, comments, criticisms, support, ect that you are willing to offer!

Specific questions:
Would you prefer the main character girl sprites to be in chibi form, shoulders-up, or not represented?
What information/art do you want most?

Re: New game! Feedback!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:14 am
by Kindred87
I think that the sprites look great, except for the one on the far left, there's something out of place with his face...wish I knew what x(

Anyways, is the artwork the only aspect of your game? Does it have a story? If it does, you should share that too! xD

Re: New game! Feedback!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:19 am
by Green Skies
Kindred87 wrote:I think that the sprites look great, except for the one on the far left, there's something out of place with his face...wish I knew what x(

Anyways, is the artwork the only aspect of your game? Does it have a story? If it does, you should share that too! xD
'kayyy i'll fix that!

I'll post the storyline too then :)

Re: New game! Feedback!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:22 am
by Ginger
The art is very pretty(: Hopefully you're story will be as good or better so it doesn't go to waste! xD

Re: New game! Feedback!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:32 am
by Fawn
I do like that artstyle, but the story's the most important part of a visual novel! It should be your main focus. Also, does your group have a website or deviantarts we can see? That'd be great too!

Re: New game! Feedback!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:41 am
by Green Skies
Fawn wrote:I do like that artstyle, but the story's the most important part of a visual novel! It should be your main focus. Also, does your group have a website or deviantarts we can see? That'd be great too!
Hahaha I completely agree!, but i'm actually not in charge of the story (so I'm not perfectly clear on details).
I'm the artist!

But I've posted the basic storyline, sorry, my writing isn't the best.

If we make a dv or anything I'll be sure to let you know!

Re: New game! Feedback!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:42 am
by Green Skies
Ginger wrote:The art is very pretty(: Hopefully you're story will be as good or better so it doesn't go to waste! xD
Thank you!
I hope you like it :)

Re: New game! Feedback!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:54 am
by Rin
Waaahh yay new otome!! I'm gonna stalk on this :3 I love the ideas and the bishies!
*Curious to know about the assassin*
The art is nice! I can't wait to see assassin and fiance's portrait! :3 :3

Good luck on your project!! xDD

Re: New game! Feedback!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 7:08 pm
by Kindred87
Thanks for putting up the plot summary! Now my interest is piqued, especially since the assassin is up for grabs. ^^

Re: Love Over Diamonds WIP (Tentative Title) [Otome]

Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2011 3:28 pm
by Veniae
You got me at 'assassin'. (looked at previous comments)

And maaan, this looks neat. I do hope to see it completed. Good luck! (:

Re: Love Over Diamonds WIP (Tentative Title) [Otome]

Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 6:39 am
by Green Skies
Bachelor updates!
I'll probably change him a few times though :)

Re: Love Over Diamonds WIP (Tentative Title) [Otome]

Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 3:57 pm
by Kindred87
Well his face is looking better, so you're on the right track! ^^ And the mysterious bachelor looks boyishly-cute. Reminds me of Toboe from Wolf's Rain.

Re: Love Over Diamonds WIP (Tentative Title) [Otome]

Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 4:53 pm
by Green Skies
Kindred87 wrote:Well his face is looking better, so you're on the right track! ^^ And the mysterious bachelor looks boyishly-cute. Reminds me of Toboe from Wolf's Rain.
Thanks! :)
I never watched wolf's rain, but I googled it & it looks pretty amazing!

He's right and left faces are going to be redrawn, but he is supposed to be the cutetype!

Re: Love Over Diamonds WIP (Tentative Title) [Otome]

Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:57 am
by Green Skies
Happy new year everybody!