Heartstring Bugs [dating sim, otome] Overall: 90+%

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Re: Heartstring Bugs [dating sim, otome]

#16 Post by IanaBri »

This looks very much promising. The prospect of this new game excites me (especially since I enjoyed Frozen Essence). And to think, it's already 69% done?! I can't believe I've only just noticed it. Please keep me posted. I'd love to help any way I possibly can.

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#17 Post by selenity136 »

the artwork is definitely an improvement from frozen essence! =)

my only gripe so far is that on the clothing screen, having the MC's model be black makes it difficult to see some of the clothing that are dark as well. I suggest having the model be nude brown color. Other than that, I can't wait when the demo/full game is release :)

Btw,..is there going to be a 2 guys/1 girl ending?

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#18 Post by VenusEclipse »

@xelacroix. I use a black model because it's simpler. I'm just trying to limit art assets since there's a lot to draw. If she has a face, I'll have to draw a full model with undergarments, and it'll be tough for me to edit some outfits. I hope you understand. So it's all about shortcuts there. ^-^;
I am sure the main girl is cute enough though. Are you talking about her face or her hair? The character herself isn't really extravagant/cutesy so I hope her looks are okay. o.O
I guess I'll stick with the Elly too. =)

@IanaBri. I don't like to announce projects anywhere other than my site until they're at least halfway done, and this topic is still sort of new. ^-^

@selenity. I'll think about changing the model's default colour. Even though some clothes are black,they're a little bit lighter so you can see the clothes. If it does interfere when it's tested, maybe the model will be a dark grey.
There's no two guys with one girl ending, if that's what you mean. XD

@everyone: I'm glad the art got better because it's been messing with my mind for a while.
I didn't expect to see many replies until I got this notification and thanks for being interested!

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#19 Post by briannavon »

Does this game have a demo? I hope it does!
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How did you come up with the title of this game?
I remember reading before that you didn't give it one when you were describing to make a dating sim game on your Unbroken Hours website that you couldn't think of one.
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#21 Post by VenusEclipse »

@briannavon Sorry, there's no demo. There's too many bugs for that, and there are missing things randomly from the beginning, middle and end of the game. ^^;

@Celestine
I usually come up with titles later on while I make VNs/Sims. I didn't have a title at first because I want to have a title that's hardly used. The hard part is making that fit the theme of the game. If I named this "Love" or something simple, it'll be lost when people Google it. XD

Heartstring:
1.)Our deepest feelings of love and compassion;
2.)string = also a computer term

Bugs:
1.)annoying pesky real life bugs
2.)Computer bugs

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#22 Post by briannavon »

Oh. By the way, what areas are in the game?
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#23 Post by Michiyo6918 »

This looks great so far :3 I love your Frozen Essance, can't wait for this to come out.

The art has really improved a lot, and I love the BG of the game (wish I could draw like that...)
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#24 Post by VenusEclipse »

To Brianna: Areas include a high school, home, a mall, downtown and a few other areas relevant to the setting.

To Michi: You're not seeing things. I guess I had it short for "Virus." I'm sure you'll enjoy the Vi in this game, I hope. ^_^

Anyway, I fixed more messed up coding on my part, but no one really thinks that's progress anyway.
So I uploaded a gameplay video that's more functional. It's missing some graphics but it's working better. If you want a preview, check below. It's close to how the final version will be like.
(The girl's happy expression is not done.)

http://youtu.be/rCRYKenWNy0

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I for one welcome our Tokimeki VenusEclipse Edition overlords, as I enjoyed both Frozen Essence and Tokimeki Memorial. I hope that the characters/world here are as interestingly characterized even with the lighter, high school setting.
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#26 Post by Celestine »

That's a cute GUI it looks like a chalkboard.

The girl in the white uniform mouth looks a bit funny though.

Like how you had the sprite moving around though, that's cute and funny too :wink:
Especially dropping the weight. :lol:
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#27 Post by VenusEclipse »

To Celestine: Oh yeah, I didn't color in her mouth yet. I thought it would be obvious but I guess it isn't. XD

Sorry for the late reply. I got a bit busy. Thanks for your interest! ^_^;

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#28 Post by VenusEclipse »

Phew, here are some seasonal outfits. There's more outfits to fit the seasons, but I don't want to reveal them all in a thread. :mrgreen:
There's costumes for Halloween too. I guess there's a minimum of four outfits per character, and a maximum of nine.
The last character is Blaze, the "loud" guy.
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Hopefully, I can finish sprites and sprite outfits by next week. ^_^

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#29 Post by Celestine »

I like the first sprite if she's a chick. But what's with the pink hair's outfit?! I like the 3rd sprite hair, nice white color you picked.
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#30 Post by VenusEclipse »

The guy with red (pink???) hair is just outgoing and his personality is "loud." His outfit just matches his personality. XD

As for the blond, does he really look like a girl? I think I have to fix his clothes.
And thanks for the comment for the guy in white. I'm glad he passes. =)

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