Dog Dazed (idea) GxB game

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Re: Dog Dazed (idea) GxB game

#16 Post by ixWishing » Wed Feb 29, 2012 12:04 am

- What do you think of the premise? Is it good, bad, cheesy, uninteresting?
Totally loved it. We need more VNs with animal guys! (:

- What do you think of the obtainable guys (Clyde and Todd) and their designs?
Hmmm. Maybe more detail would be nice. I like their designs right now. I kinda find it weird to see Todd with a stubble on his chin (if that is one?)

- What about the main character, Melitsa? How is her design? Does she look too girly?
Eh. I'm not particularly fond of her hairstyle. In most Japanese otome games /VNs , the heroines often had hairstyles somewhat like Mel's. I find it over-used.
Maybe give her curly hair tied up in a ponytail or something? o: .

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Re: Dog Dazed (idea) GxB game

#17 Post by misamane » Wed Feb 29, 2012 4:02 pm

- What do you think of the premise? Is it good, bad, cheesy, uninteresting?
I think it looks good! I think it's an interesting idea, and doesn't look too much like other VN's which is a plus :3

- What do you think of the obtainable guys (Clyde and Todd) and their designs?
They look cuuuuute~ I especially like Clyde c: But I agree with Sapphi, I think they should be a bit scruffier, if you will. But otherwise I like them!

- What about the main character, Melitsa? How is her design? Does she look too girly?
I think you've got it just right! Her hair and top are quite girly but then the jeans and shoes equal it out c: She looks really cute :3

All in all, I think you've got a good idea here. I'm interested to learn more about Todd and Clyde, and about how they've been dogs all this time. Also I think it's interesting you haven't made Charles (re)attainable as most people probably would. I really like the art too, and I look forward to seeing more about this project!
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Re: Dog Dazed (idea) GxB game

#18 Post by Asterisk » Sat Mar 03, 2012 9:23 pm

Looks awesome :D

- What do you think of the premise? Is it good, bad, cheesy, uninteresting?
I love it ^^ I think it's interesting!

- What do you think of the obtainable guys (Clyde and Todd) and their designs?
Lovin it huffhuff

- What about the main character, Melitsa? How is her design? Does she look too girly?
No such thing as too girly, I love the way she looks. Very pretty.
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