AliceX2 [GxB][BL]
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Re: AliceX2 [GxB][BL]
I dislike the original AIW story, personally .. But found I rather like when people take the basics and twist it into something else. I liked what I got to read of the Alice in the Country of Hearts manga, for example. As for your art, I love your shading and I think it's very pretty~ I love girl's names for boys (and vice versa) and bishie boys and BL so yey for you. I also like when people don't force all their characters to fit gender roles. (: I'm very interested in this, can't wait until you upload more character information!
Re: AliceX2 [GxB][BL]
Hello all c: Sorry, I've been looking at this for a long time and have some things to say.
First is: Roughly 20,000 words I had written (which was basically all) were in fact deleted, along with the majority of concept art and things involving AliceX2.
Second is: This project is by no means dead.
I had just reread what I had written, and wasn't very happy with it. So in the end, I lost a bit of the rough outline, but I had already wanted to add some major changes. And the art, in my opinion I'm better now. While I'm also working on a smaller project right now, I'm honing up on my coding skills. Not great, but enough to make the game run the way I want to and smoothly.
So thanks to you all, and I will most certainly be updating this thread. Updates may not be super quick, but they will definitely be coming.
Soooo, have some character concept art c: You guys all make me very happy.
MCs concept

Obtainable boys and men c:


Please give me any critique and/or suggestions on their designs c:
Till next time c:
First is: Roughly 20,000 words I had written (which was basically all) were in fact deleted, along with the majority of concept art and things involving AliceX2.
Second is: This project is by no means dead.
I had just reread what I had written, and wasn't very happy with it. So in the end, I lost a bit of the rough outline, but I had already wanted to add some major changes. And the art, in my opinion I'm better now. While I'm also working on a smaller project right now, I'm honing up on my coding skills. Not great, but enough to make the game run the way I want to and smoothly.
So thanks to you all, and I will most certainly be updating this thread. Updates may not be super quick, but they will definitely be coming.
Soooo, have some character concept art c: You guys all make me very happy.
MCs concept

Obtainable boys and men c:


Please give me any critique and/or suggestions on their designs c:
Till next time c:
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Re: AliceX2 [GxB][BL]
Umm, this is still in progress, right? Right? Oh please say yes! Hahaha, I think it's really nice. I loved the story of Alice in Wonderland, and up to now, it's still one of my favorite classics ever. (Although nothing can beat A Little Princess! Teehee.) Can't say I'm tired of AIW. :3 I'll never be tired of that story.
I like the characters, you give them interesting twists.
Hmm, I am not an artist, so I don't know if I am allowed to say this but, I think the arms of the male Alice are too long. I think. I don't know, I'm not sure of it myself. It just looks that way to me. Nevertheless, I love the female Alice's design! And when it comes to character art, it's Theron or Valkeri I am interested in the most. :3 I seem to like Dum as well, but he looks so much like a child that I feel almost guilty. Hahaha. Looking at the art, I'd say the others are like 20+ while Dum and Valkeri are in their teens. That's just a guess though.
For the story, I have to say I am intrigued.
I am curious what real connection this new Alice has to the original one, other than the similar name of course. :3 And... I have to admit that I'm also waiting to see the background art of this project.
Wonderland is just so beautiful~
I sure do hope you continue this! I know you said it's not dead, but you haven't updated in a long time so... pretty please? :3 With sugar on top and a cherry? It looks really nice and it sure would be a waste if you stopped making it.
Sorry if I am so impatient. Teehee.
Still, I'm wishing you good luck! Looking forward to more progress from you~
I like the characters, you give them interesting twists.
For the story, I have to say I am intrigued.
I sure do hope you continue this! I know you said it's not dead, but you haven't updated in a long time so... pretty please? :3 With sugar on top and a cherry? It looks really nice and it sure would be a waste if you stopped making it.
Still, I'm wishing you good luck! Looking forward to more progress from you~
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