Her Sinister Stare (BXG) (Mystery, Psychological)(On-hold)

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Her Sinister Stare (BXG) (Mystery, Psychological)(On-hold)

#1 Post by thedarkdefender »

So, I really want to finish this immediately. The script is almost uhm, at the climax.

But I'll stop for now because I don't have a tablet yet and I can feel my wrist hurting every time I attempt to color or turn my drawings into lineart.

So, will continue this project after I get my tablet.


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First attempt to create a visual novel. :)
I just wanted to share this story.


This game is about a boy named Marv. He is considered an idol at his school.
One day, a girl named Lindsey came to him and asked if something was bothering him. He affirmed it.
Every night, he dreams of a girl. A girl with a haunted melody around her asking the question "why?"
Determined to find out what is happening, he asked for Lindsey's help.

Together they'll find out who that girl is and unveil the dark secrets of Marv.


Genre: Romance, Mystery, Psychological, Horror

Setting: A normal japan-ish school though their names are in english.

Characters

* Marv - the main character. 18 years old. Typical popular high school senior guy.

* Lindsey - 17 years old. A member of the paranormal and psychic research club at their school.

* Raine - a girl who works in the library on her free time. She always give Marv a cold shoulder.
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* Danielle - a new girl from Marv's class. She likes to keep to herself. Knows a lot about Marv for some weird reason.

* Lucy - a girl who is a big fangirl of Marv. Likes to appear out of nowhere.
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Total endings: 5 (True Ending, Normal Ending and 2 Not so good endings and 1 bad ending)


Progress

Script: 25%
Plot: 100%
Sprites: 10%
Programming: 0%




There you go.
What do you think?
Interesting? Lacking?



Peace out ^^V
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#2 Post by leon »

Sounds interesting. I like the title. Good luck.

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#3 Post by thedarkdefender »

Thanks leon-san ^^
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#4 Post by Asterisk »

Romance, Mystery, Psychological, Horror
You've got my attention.

There's not much info but it seems interesting ^^
Good luck with development!
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#5 Post by thedarkdefender »

Asterisk, I was just wondering, what kind of info should I put?
I'm really clueless XD

gomen ^^"
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#6 Post by Asterisk »

For one thing I would love to know more about the characters. One liners won't help people visualize how they are! :) Personality, hobbies, etc
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