Wisdom Revival [slice of life, GxB ,otome]ON HOLD

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Wisdom Revival [slice of life, GxB ,otome]ON HOLD

#1 Post by michi 18 » Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:57 am

Wisdom Revival

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~Wisdom Revival~

It's another year ! Your now a freshmen in high school but still your having a hard time being with other people. It's not because your lacking confidence but it's because they dont like you at all!

What if you remembered the past?The past about your childhood when you were a 3rd grade. The past when you became a president and you failed to do what you are tasked and they gave you wrong judgement.
What if it all happens again in a time where it seems like everything is perfect? The time when your almost achieving your goal. The time when you are being loved by someone you love as well. The time when a lot of people look up on to you and think of you as someone big! Someone extremely great!
And what if you still have a chance to make a choice and prove them that what happened in the past was different in the present? What if you still have a chance to prove them wrong? What would you do? Will you stay on the path that almost destroyed your life? Or would you break that path and create another for you to have a better future?

You are Anita Versopher a freshmen student in high school.She is very charming and intelligent and extremely trustworthy and responsible. One day, you were once again elected as president and everything from the past starts to come back again . Terrorizing you, traumatizing you and destroying you. What choices would you do to sustain the life, the power, the freedom and happiness you have now?

Its about a girl whom shockingly became the president of their class . She has been a president once in her elementary years but she didnt do well so she never tried to be in that kind of situation anymore. Yes she was a nerd though they never thought of her as an officer even she didnt think that would happen again .Until it was the start of her freshmen years wherein she meets a lot of new people who can be her friends or enemies. The class voted for her because during their orientation she displayed the attitude of responsibility ,initiative and good leadership . She is also trustworthy. Will she find love in this situation or will she end up failing in her responsibility again ?

This is an otome game with a slice of school life

Characters:

Anita Versopher(Main Character):
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Age:12 years old
Birthday: Spring 30
Info: A young teenage highschool freshmen who is a total genius. Somehow acts like a cool swave girl. She is quite snobbish. She is very confident and cheerful. She acts bitter with boys . She is friendly.
Interests: Math, Art, Painting,food(pizza especially), Science,school, hanging out with friends, books.

Friends:
JAde Miller:
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Age:11
Birthday:Fall 15
Info: The cutest girl in school. She is one of the closest friends of Anita. She is fun to be with. She can give comfort to her friends in need.
Interests: Dougie dance, Gangam Style, Sims, Instragram, Tuna.

Minerva Wales:
Age: 12
Birthday:Winter 16
Info: One of the closest friends of Anita. She is a transfer student . She was a varsity in her former school. She also became a majorette . She is quite charming. She is the nicest person Anita met though she has this snobbish attitude. She is very artistic.
Interests: Drawing, Art , Painting, Taking pictures.



Crystal Talisman:
Age:12
Birthday: Spring 28
Info: The bestfriend of Anita. Both of them often fight though after a while laughs at the thought of the thing that happened. A drum and Lyre member.
Interest: Friends, Parties, Hang-outs.


Love Interests:
Kevin Silanius:
Age: 13
Birthday: Summer 30
Info: He is very handsome and charming. His smile makes Anita's heart float. (omigosh=overdid this one). He loves making Anita smile and laugh. At first he thinks of Anita as a sister.
Interests: School, Friendship, Love life, Dragon City.

Anthony Ming:
Age:13
Birthday :Fall 1
Info: He loves playing gadgets. He is a techno geek. Loves teasing others.
Interest: computer , games, Technology.

Karl Lhangerak:
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Age: 13
Birthday: -secret unless you get his ending-
Info:He is the bestfriend of Kevin. He loves playing basketball. He is dark tanned.
Interest: Basketball and Chicks .

Cane Murphy:
Age:14
Birthday:-Secret until the ending-
Info: He is quite naughty. He loves running around. He is an addict basketball player.
Interests: Ball, games.

Laurence Lim:
Age:14
Birthday:-Secret until the ending-
Info: He is quite noisy. And his best friend is Cane. They both do 'bad stuff ' together.
Interest: Girls, Dark colors, and playing.

Michael Sierra:
Age:13
Birthday:-Secret until the ending-
Info: He hates going outdoors, he loves playing board games, he was never serious about anything.
Interest: Food.

Gabriel Topphermore:
Age:12
Birthday: Spring 31
Info: He loves playing basketball. He is very cheerful and playful. He is one level lower than Anita's.
Interest: Basketball,


And here is a little sneak peek of the art:
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Re: Wisdom Revival [slice of life, GxB ,otome]

#2 Post by ShadowBerry » Thu Aug 09, 2012 6:16 pm

So will this be a otome with minigames or stat raising?
Or will it be solely decision based?

It sounds kind of nice. Didn't have a slice of life otome in a while xD
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#3 Post by michi 18 » Thu Aug 09, 2012 9:49 pm

otome with surely be decision based actually though if we can find a good programmer maybe We can add up Minigames and Status raising ..
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#4 Post by ShadowBerry » Fri Aug 10, 2012 7:30 am

oh, okay.
Well looking forward to this^^
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#5 Post by michi 18 » Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:54 am

-delete-
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#6 Post by michi 18 » Wed Oct 10, 2012 6:49 am

Guys, further info:

As ShadowBerry asked if there will be minigames or stat raising
-Yes there would be minigames. I don't think Stat raising would be appropriate if I have already given "descriptive" information about the MC.
-Ofcourse still the cycle of the game runs around the otome life of the girl and the way she lives with her trouble making classmates and grumpy teachers.

If anyone asks: When will be the expected release; Are there still some things needed?~

-The release date is still unsure because (yes the script is almost done but...) there are a lot of preparations that must take place. The artist for the game is just new. As you know there are a dozen of characters so it would take time.
-We still dont have a Designer and BG artist for this one. I dont want to be a too much burden to my other BG and CG artists because they are helping me make the BGs and sprites in Uni-H(Universal Hope).
-Well it would be a great help for extra writers because I think this would be a very long story (I mean paths )
-Maybe further advice would be best to be given for now and some helpful suggestions.

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How willing are you in making this game?
-I am truly topmost willingly dedicated to these projects of mine (this will be my first 2 VNs)
-MAybe school papers would eat up a lot of my time but during weekends if I dont have a new issue of a novel book ,I've come to the way of writing .

How's the progress?
-Well it's not that much but I think it's enough to start a WIP thread.
-Maybe on the script we're on the 30 %
As for the Character Sprites maybe uhmm... (she already has some sketches so...) 5%

P.s: I am still looking for a BG artist and designer as said in one of my posts in the recruitment .
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#7 Post by Daistarir » Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:00 am

Gangnam Style
LMFAO xD
Seriously , you're having a teen spirit.
Ugh , so much characters

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#8 Post by michi 18 » Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:02 am

Daistarir wrote:
Gangnam Style
LMFAO xD
Seriously , you're having a teen spirit.
Ugh , so much characters
Lol I am a TEEN . Sorry for the "too much character" thing. It's because there are flashbacks and childhood stuff being discussed here.
And FYI the prequel and most of the tim the game is at school (where there are classmates , how many in a class? 40? I didnt include all .)
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#9 Post by Daistarir » Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:05 am

-u- I meant teenage. And I am a teenage. -u-

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#10 Post by michi 18 » Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:08 am

Really? If so how old are you ?( Im sorry if you think it's disrespectful=some say it is )

She already knows my age.
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#11 Post by Anna » Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:38 am

I really think you might have mentioned too much characters, since I count around 26 mentioned here (excluding parents). Were all of those really necessary to be in the post ^^;? Presenting many characters at once like that kind of becomes overwhelming, especially without sprites.

Also, I only see a few sketches, a synopsis and a huge list of characters so maybe this fits better in the ideas section after all? It's just that this comes to mind:

"This isn't difficult - being able to show screenshots or production quality assets like art and writing, is enough to pass this bar. We just want to make sure your game is more than just a setting and a list of characters."

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#12 Post by michi 18 » Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:41 am

Oh.. well The sprites you're saying just needs some coloring.
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#13 Post by Anna » Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:44 am

michi 18 wrote:Oh.. well The sprites you're saying just needs some coloring.
I still think mentioning 26 characters would be too much then. Why not pick out the most important ones and talk about just those? People will get to see the other characters when they read the demo or the finished VN.

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#14 Post by michi 18 » Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:48 am

sure thanks for the suggestion . Id be editing it now. ALto! Hoo yeah! =)
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#15 Post by Anna » Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:49 am

Great ;)! Good luck with your project.

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