Temptation of the FIRST Kiss ~ [Otome, Romance/Comedy VN]

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Temptation of the FIRST Kiss ~ [Otome, Romance/Comedy VN]

#1 Post by CuppieKeyk »

Hello GUYS ! I'm very happy to be back again T^T...
It's just that... I've been in sorrow since my mother died just this last nov 16.. Huu :(

Anyway, nevermind.. WE MUST STILL CONTINUE TO LIVE ON AND ALWAYS BE HAPPY ! :)
EDITED AND UPDATED : I've just Changed the ART = Which is I really easy to.. I can't draw mature guys anymore like I drew the last time T^T


This is what my VN/Otome game represents and titled as :
Temptation of the FIRST Kiss ~
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Some pictures : I'm sketching for Menu art ! Now yet done :(
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Temptation of the FIRST Kiss, was inherited from my very first VN.. Well.. It's not done yet, so I made this one as it's "PART ONE"..


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This story revolves around a girl whose mother was deceased but continued to moved on, but the start of it all was when her First Kiss happened.. "THE SAME STORY AS THE OTHER ONE"..

Her first kiss was her childhood friend - her best friend whom she often teased about being "gay". Suffice to say, he got mad and warned her that he would kiss her if she continued. The little girl, thinking that he was kidding, took no heed and continued teasing him.

So, at that park where their playmates had been playing - all stared at the two as they kissed. As it happened, the couple's mothers exchanged looks and smiles with each other.

As a result, their relationship unexpectedly got closer, but then..

It was announced that the girl's mother had an incurable disease, and thus had to be confined to the hospital. The girl and the boy were separated, and soon after, the girl's mother died.

Alone with no one to look after her and distance separating her and her childhood friend, she had no one but herself to depend on.

That was, until one day, she was approached by a wealthy man...

What could this mean? Would she and her childhood friend be able to get back together?

[OMG, I'm sorry, I'm not good with story-peeks so PLEASE SPARE ME T_T]

~ VERY VERY THANKFUL FOR THE ONE WHO HELP ME ! IT REALLY MAKE ME CRY ;'D. [I'll put you in my credits soon ! XD]
NOTE : After this, I'm gonna continue to MAKE the other Temptation Kiss which is complete and full :)

Image ~ KYAA ! What am I gonna do ? XD

FEATURES :
-I THINK I'LL HAVE 24-32 CG'S. Really, At that way I can represent my story well..
2 OBTAINABLE GUYS..
-EXTRA STORY-
-All Good ending, [THE FRIEND ENDING, AND THE LOVE ENDING]
-CHIBI CG'S - the numbers are not included at the first.. [ 10-13 ]
-CHOICES, I'M NOT YET READY FOR SIMULATION-LIKE OTOME GAMES XD-
-ONLY 5-7 CHARACTERS


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Here's the girl's sketch Character art :.. [No name yet.. I'm still asking for suggestions !]
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Here's the boy's sketch Character art : [No name.. also ;3]
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And the other boy's Sketch Character art : [No name.] :
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[LOOKING FOR AN CHIBI ARTIST ![Found one ! = GUI/design MAKER AND BACKGROUND ARTIST ! ANY HELP WOULD BE APPRECIABLE !~ Could someone teach me how to compose music in piano ? xD ! :D]
Any suggestion are also fine.. :)


Art : Cuppie and =NEW MEMBER= HamstarXCrown
Story : Cuppie
GUI : Cuppie? =looking for another, I'm poor at it=
Programmer : Cuppie? =I need help ! XD=
Music : Some free resources =Would someone create just one music for it's Opening Movie? XD=

ANY HELP WOULD BE VERY APPRECIABLE ! REALLY REALLY !
Advance Thank You !


=HEY ! IT'LL BE CHRISTMAS SOON ! Hmm ~ What should I give ? =3
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#2 Post by vyushko »

Hi! This looks interesting! If you still want suggestions for the girl's name, then I would suggest something like Melana. I don't know why, but that name just popped into my head when I looked at her. What color are the boy's hair and eyes gonna be? I think he would look good with black hair and unique eyes, something like yellow or silver. I really like the way you drew both of them. Keep up the good work :)
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#3 Post by HamstarXCrown »

Awww, this look so cute XD !!! Do you need a co-writer? I'm good at come up with ideas and writing dialouge and screenplay. I can design characters, too.
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#4 Post by CuppieKeyk »

vyushko wrote:Hi! This looks interesting! If you still want suggestions for the girl's name, then I would suggest something like Melana. I don't know why, but that name just popped into my head when I looked at her. What color are the boy's hair and eyes gonna be? I think he would look good with black hair and unique eyes, something like yellow or silver. I really like the way you drew both of them. Keep up the good work :)
Aww Thank you very much ! That name sounds good... Let me examine it XD.. Let's make a poll ~! And for your suggestion for the boy ;).. I'll try it ! That was a very nice suggestion ! Thanks again :)
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#5 Post by CuppieKeyk »

HamstarXCrown wrote:Awww, this look so cute XD !!! Do you need a co-writer? I'm good at come up with ideas and writing dialouge and screenplay. I can design characters, too.
OMG ! Sure ! You're my guardian angel XD ! And thank you very much ! I'll PM you right away if I finish the story ;).
Characters ! COOL <3 ~ Whatever is fine.. VERY APPRECIATED ;D
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#6 Post by CuppieKeyk »

Wohoo ! UPDATED xD.
Lols, I mean not really.. It's only a sketch ;)
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#7 Post by CuppieKeyk »

~ Sketching ~
~ Starting to make GUI's xD. ~
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#8 Post by Hazel-Bun »

Oh this looks to cute! I'd love to see this finished and name wise the guy sketched above looks like a Damian to me for some reason haha
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#9 Post by CuppieKeyk »

Updated ! Changed the art to MY NATURAL ART WAY..
It's so hard to draw matured guys T_T


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#10 Post by CuppieKeyk »

Hazel-Bun wrote:Oh this looks to cute! I'd love to see this finished and name wise the guy sketched above looks like a Damian to me for some reason haha
Aww, Thanks :3..
Anyway, Just changed it's art, so you won't see Damian anymore XD.
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#11 Post by CuppieKeyk »

SHAPDatedd !!
xDD.. ~ I'M MAKING GUI ! MY GAWSH, I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO !!!
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XD I can draw chibiArt XD
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#13 Post by CuppieKeyk »

HamstarXCrown wrote:XD I can draw chibiArt XD
Ohh ! Cool, by any chance, Are you willing to work with me ? XD
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#14 Post by destiny_921 »

Love the art! The girl looks like a "Rin" or "Megumi" to me... As for the guy, he looks like a "Takeshi" or "Ryuu"...

*facepalm*

Why are all those Jap names? @.@

I'd offer writing/proofreading services but I've got other work as well...

Anyway, good luck with everything! Can't wait for this to be out! :D
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#15 Post by CuppieKeyk »

destiny_921 wrote:Love the art! The girl looks like a "Rin" or "Megumi" to me... As for the guy, he looks like a "Takeshi" or "Ryuu"...

*facepalm*

Why are all those Jap names? @.@

I'd offer writing/proofreading services but I've got other work as well...

Anyway, good luck with everything! Can't wait for this to be out! :D
Hehe, Thank you very much ! :)
It's fine, busy persons must not be bothered anymore ! =D


I'll do my very best !

~Thanks again ! =3
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