妖精狩り : Yosei Kari ( Otoge [GxB] )

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妖精狩り : Yosei Kari ( Otoge [GxB] )

#1 Post by AriaAi » Sat Dec 22, 2012 1:19 am

【妖精狩り】~ Yosei Kari ~ Fairy Hunting

Okay I'm still deciding on a good name so this is just a filler name for now. //hithit;;

I-I know this plot may seem a bit cliche and everyone's tired of Japanese high school settings. Sorry;;
But I'm really just working with my fetish and what I know best, High school, for my first VN. Q x Q

Plot:

Tachibana, Airi [MC] often heard stories about "Fairies," "Spirits," and "Demons" from her beloved grandmother, a famous and wise, shrine maiden. Now what happens when her grandmother suddenly passes away from a natural death? Well, two months after her grandmother's death, two suspicious looking men, with seemingly realistic animal ears, appear in front of Airi and her childhood friend, Yuki, claiming Airi's grandmother has given them Airi's hand in marriage, with a condition attached to it! "In order to marry my beloved granddaughter, you must capture two fairies: The fairy of Pride and the fairy of Honor." ( This condition may change later if I decide to use a different condition;; )
Now you play as Airi as two Yokai (Spirits) and your childhood friend compete either for your hand in marriage or to free you from the engagement.

Features:

Genre: Romance, Comedy, Supernatural

Setting: Japan

- Three obtainable characters ( With the possibility of a secret character -- Though it's highly unlikely// )
- 2 endings per character ( Hopefully;; )
- Choices that decide who you'll end up with
- The game may be fairly simple with little menus as this is my first game;;
- 4-5 CGs per obtainable character ( So a total of about 15-20 CGs in all )

Development team // Credits:

- Art, Programming, and Story : AriaAi
( I know this may be a bit unrealistic for my first VN but I'm willing to try;; Even if it does take me a long time.
Either that or I may put this game on hold and start a smaller project if I feel that this is too big for me;; ) :'D

Credits: TBA when I get enough into the game;;

Characters :
These are just rough doodles of them, along with their color scheme.
*School Uniform's color scheme may change;; Since I'm not particularly set with it right now. orz;;

**More information on characters may be disclosed as I continue on-- Until I can figure out what I can disclose and what I can't, I'll just leave you with their character sketches and their personality. |D;;

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Tachibana, Airi
The protagonist of the game who you play as.
- 16/17 years old (She has a set bithday and it's celebrated within the game)
- Caring and Stubborn
- Can be quite vulgar when the time comes

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Saotome, Yuki
- 17 years old
- 170 cm tall
- Yuki has been Airi's childhood friend since they were 5-6 years old.
- The "kind older-brother who likes to tease you" type.

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Kitsune, Junpei
- Age Unknown // Appearance : 17-18 years old
- 171 cm tall
- He looks seemingly laid-back, is lazy, a terrible and witty joker, and somewhat has a perverted edge to him.
- Is childhood friends with Kashi

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Tanuki, Kashi
- Age Unknown // Appearance : 16-17 years old
- 174 cm tall
- He's very straight-forward, honest, and jolly innocent.
- He's physically active, and despite his looks, he's quite smart and clever.

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Progress:

Programming: 0%
Outline: 3%
Script: 1% ... |D
Character Design: 30%
Sprites: Sketches 15%
CG: 0.99%
Music: 0%
Background: 75% ( I'll just be using resources I find online for Music and BGs. ; v ; )b )

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This may take a while as this is my first game;;
I may put this project on hold and work on another smaller project to hone my skills if I feel it's nessessary. ; u ; )/
Please, if you have any suggestions please just throw them at me! Q 7 Q
I'd be more than happy to hear your opinion. > v <)//
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#2 Post by inhalance » Sat Dec 22, 2012 2:19 am

Wow, this looks really promising! Even if the plot is another Japanese high school one, I don't mind. I like the idea and the character concepts are nice. If you ever need any proofreading or writing help, I would gladly offer my services. Since it's your first VN, I wish you the best of luck. I really do hope you will be able to complete it, though. :)
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#3 Post by MaiMai » Sat Dec 22, 2012 2:32 am

If you can do this right with the art I'm seeing, then I'm all for a classic otome in a Japanese high school setting.
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#4 Post by teacup » Sat Dec 22, 2012 2:53 am

Heh, I follow you on deviantart and have always wanted to see your artwork in a VN. :3
I don't mind otome in high school settings (how could I when I made one, heh;;) so I'm looking forward to this.
Let me know if you need any help/advice, and best of luck!
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#5 Post by Aines445 » Sat Dec 22, 2012 11:09 am

Wow this looks pretty nice. And those are just rough doodles? Dear god you must be awesome (mine certainly don't look that pretty :shock: ) The story sounds pretty nice and otome-like (lol since when does that exist?) and the characters look very nice.

I look forward to this game I bet it'll look beautiful (cause your art looks so pretty makes me ashamed of my own art and thats my strongest point O.O)

Anyways It looks pretty nice ^-^.

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#6 Post by AriaAi » Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:13 pm

@inhalance : Thank you! > v <)/ Ehehe// I'll try my best to get this project rolling. (♡˙︶˙♡)

@MaiMai : Thank youuu! Q v Q)/ I'm glad you think that//

@Teacup : FHKLDSJLDS. Thank you so much Teacup! I've been a fan of yours for so long now// I really appreciate hearing you say that. > m <)/ ////

@Aines445 : Ehehe Thank youuu/// Actually I had an old doodle of their concepts already. LOL;; I just refined it a bit. Aw// Don't be ashamed! I'm sure your art is very pretty/// > v <)/ <3

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Ehe// Hearing feedback from people makes me want to work on this more than ever LOL//
Thanks for the feedback guys. ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ

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#7 Post by HamstarXCrown » Sun Dec 23, 2012 1:35 am

This is so greatXD I want to help so badly XD Your art is really cute and the content seem like interesting.
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#8 Post by Veniae » Sun Dec 23, 2012 6:53 pm

This looks adorable! I really hope you'll finish it, because damn if I don't want to play it. Good luck!

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#9 Post by AriaAi » Wed Dec 26, 2012 12:09 am

@HamsterXCrown : Omigosh// Thank you so much. Q 7 Q/////

@Veniae : FJKLDSFDSJ// Thank you/// I'll try my best. > v <)/ Ehehe. I'm honored you'd like to play it//

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#10 Post by Anna » Wed Dec 26, 2012 8:16 am

It would be nice if you could make the boys a little bit different design-wise; they have roughly the same face, the same hairstyle and the same body.

Good luck on your first project!

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#11 Post by AriaAi » Thu Dec 27, 2012 6:41 pm

@Anna : Thank youuu~/// > v <)/ And Yes, I've been taking that into account. ; v ;
I have really bad "Same-face syndrome." orz;; I'll try harder to make it easier to differentiate between the three then;;

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#12 Post by MioSegami » Sat Dec 29, 2012 1:42 am

I'll be looking forward to this! IT'S CUTE! And I don't mind..since...mine is also in a Japanese high school XDD STORY PLOT is amazing :3
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#13 Post by Hibikai » Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:08 pm

I really like the character designs; they look awesome! :D But may I make a suggestion about Kashi? The part of his forehead under where there's a hair clip holding his hair looks a little weird to me. I know that you said these are just doodles, so I hope I'm not bothering you! ><
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#14 Post by AriaAi » Sun Dec 30, 2012 1:58 pm

@MioSegami : Ehehe// Thank you very much. > v <)/ I'm always happy to hear positive feedback. <3

@Hibikai : Ahh// Thank you~ Eheh. Yeah as you said it was a doodle and I ended up deciding to clip part of his bangs last minute. LOL. No no~! You're not a bother at all! Thanks for pointing it out! > n <)/ I'll fix it when I have the time~

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#15 Post by Hibikai » Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:56 pm

Ahh, I'm glad! :) I can't wait to see how this game turns out! :D

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