Keeper[GxB][Supernatural]

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Keeper[GxB][Supernatural]

#1 Post by iiStarCandy » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:33 pm

I'm currently working on a game titled "Keeper".

STORYLINE
A girl named Aelwyn (don't worry, you can pick your own name) lives a perfectly normal life the way she wants it to be. Since as long as she could remember, her stubborn friend, Fyris, has always been there for her. However one day, everything changes. Fyris introduces Aelwyn to another boy named Xeius, and they both reveal a secret: she isn't human, and neither are they. Aelwyn feels like she is put on the spot, and ends up meeting a (perfectly normal) boy named Grey when running from her troubles. Confused by sudden events, Aelwyn is conflicted on where to go and what to do. (Sorry about the vagueness of this. I just don't want to end up spoiling something.)

http://tsukiyomihoshi.blogspot.com/2013 ... eview.html The main menu picture. I can't draw guys for my life. Also, the little blue star is the game's mouse, but I'm going to change that into a flower, like the ones on the logo.

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Aelwyn "Do you know why clouds rain?"
Our protagonist of this story. She's a relatively mellow and happy girl who doesn't cry easily.

Fyris Lies and being made-up are two different things.
Aelwyn's friend. He's possibly a tsundere character, though sometimes enjoys teasing Aelwyn dearly.

Xeius Full of questions, aren't you? Not that it's a bad thing.
A fairly cheerful guy. It's hard to tell when he's serious and when he's not.

Grey If you don't tell me that it's secret, I'll never know that it is one, so might as well not tell me anything at all.
Grey is so calm that he almost seems cynical, though he really isn't. He's a good listener.

Yiani I don't hate the weak. I hate the people who don't bother to try.
A girl who truly hates Fyris from the bottom of her heart. However, she becomes friends with Aelwyn.

Holly Apologizing is weird, isn't it? After all it's just a single word that someone gave a meaning to.
Although Holly is rather shy and soft, she can be scary when angry.


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Re: Keeper

#2 Post by Kait » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:37 pm

The plot sure looks interesting! Good luck on your project.
But I think you should give us some detail on the title, like GxB, BxG, Supernatural...
Are you going to be the artist too? I'm sure everyone wants more information.
I'll be keeping an eye on this :)

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#3 Post by iiStarCandy » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:44 pm

Kait wrote:like GxB, BxG, Supernatural...Are you going to be the artist too?
I'm not 100% sure what you mean by GxB and BxG ^^; but there are four possible endings, and there are no endings with a girl character. And yes, I'm going to draw the character sprites, CG's and backgrounds myself.

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#4 Post by Kait » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:46 pm

Oh. GxB means Girl pursues Boy, and BxG the opposite.
So it would really be nice if you could give us some detail ^^
But no rushing here, take your time and bring us an awesome vn!

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#5 Post by iiStarCandy » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:57 pm

Ohhh. I see. Well...I guess both come in at a point, but it's more GxB. The outcome depends on which guy the girl is more, ah, familiar with. Also, it's a supernatural kind of theme, where the main character thinks she's human at first and then...yeah.

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#6 Post by Aines445 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 8:31 pm

Hmmm...This is pretty cool! I think I'll like the characters a lot. The plot is interesting, and I'm curious about certain details of it.

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#7 Post by Ran08 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 8:45 pm

I also think this is pretty cool. I like the vagueness of it, it just makes me intrigued. Although I also do agree that we need a bit more detail. XD

Goodluck on this project! :)

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#8 Post by Aines445 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:46 pm

Ran08 wrote: I like the vagueness of it, it just makes me intrigued.
That's totally what I wanted to say but me and words...... Well yeah, And I'm also wondering how the art will be, I don't know why, But I am. Is that weird I wonder?

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#9 Post by inhalance » Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:59 pm

The idea sounds interesting. Even though there's quite a few others out there with the same general supernatural plot, I can't wait to see what you come up with! :) I'm also a bit curious as to what the art looks like as well ^^;
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#10 Post by iiStarCandy » Tue Jan 08, 2013 9:17 pm

I'm just your average digital artist. ^^; I only recently got a pen tablet (Wacom!) so I'm still getting used to it and I have to redo the sprites because half of them were done with a mouse so the styles and qualities are different. I'll upload a screenshot of the main menu when I finish that main menu picture! ^^b

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#11 Post by Aines445 » Thu Jan 10, 2013 5:34 pm

iiStarCandy wrote:I'm just your average digital artist. ^^; I only recently got a pen tablet (Wacom!) so I'm still getting used to it and I have to redo the sprites because half of them were done with a mouse so the styles and qualities are different. I'll upload a screenshot of the main menu when I finish that main menu picture! ^^b
Well, I'm a complete noob at drawing digitally, I usually draw on a paper so yeah, I'm still trying to think if I should learn how to do that, or just use a scanner when I make a serious visual novel. And I really wonder how that game menu's gonna be like, since the title is beautiful, like, REALLY BEAUTIFUL.
I'm looking forward to this! ^-^

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