The scientist and sori (BXB sci-fi adventure) (PIC ADDED)

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The scientist and sori (BXB sci-fi adventure) (PIC ADDED)

#1 Post by MiniNormal »

Hello~

The Scientist and Sori (Name may be changed..) is about A scientist and his apprentice, Sori. The Scientist, or shall i say.. the young scientist has spent the past 2 years of his life trapped in his lab...Of course he's able to survive with the help of his disciple, but unfortunately, no matter how hard sori try's to get his boss to get away and take a breath of fresh air, all the scientist says is "Need to finish.. i will make history.. i'll change this sorry excuse for a world!" What is this genius doing? You may ask. For the past 2 years he's been building a.. robot. Yes. A robot.
The first one, which was made in no less than 3 months was a failure, the second..a Failure. and so on and so on. Now he's on his fifth attempt and thank the heavens... "I... I did it!"
But what happens.. what happens when that robot eventually starts to adapt to the nature of us humans? Will the world really change or turn into nothing but chaos from here on out?

..I would have written more but.. well.. i dont want to spoil anything!

http://i1169.photobucket.com/albums/r51 ... ccad49.jpg

link to a picture that might look great (once its done) for a title screen

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Picture of Sori :D feel free to tell me if i should change how he looks in any way.
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#2 Post by AshenhartKrie »

Oooh this sounds cool. We need more BXB out in the world. XD
Looking forward to seeing more work on it!
Good Luck~

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#3 Post by tiya_nofurita »

The story concept sounds interesting, but...maybe you should consider yourself improving the quality of the sprites/characters. Sorry for being so blunt.
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