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Cloaked Explorer [KN][Fantasy]

#1 Post by Shad12ow » Fri Feb 08, 2013 1:08 am

My second VN (if I completed this first, then this is the first one, hehehe...)

Title : "Cloaked Explorer : The Summoning Book"

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After receiving a letter, he landed into the island where the clue for the thing he is looking for. But before he can even get his hand on the clue, he must do something.And that is to become a teacher a magic academy. But it seems that his days of teaching is not going to be far from ordinary due to the strange chain of events. Starting from a girl that leap out of a window in the third floor to a strange disappearance of a book in the library. His mission, search and tell his students the truth.

Character :
Willhalbert Sahterneson
An explorer turned teacher due to his friend request. A bit unsociable. In search of something he called "it".
"Troublesome, because you’ve taken my time"

Yinothu
A living mechanical shield that acted as Wilhalbert assistant and partner.
“A man wearing an old and worn out rucksack, a heavy cloak, a shield on his back, and a unkempt hair. Wouldn’t it attract attention that way, sir?”

Roslindis Vigdis
The Head Researcher of Marqash Royal Academy. She has a long history with Wil.
"You see, I now have a duty."

Velitha Sternberg
Roslindis faithful assistant and also a first year researcher in the MRA.
"I can’t give you something less valuable or that will tarnish my family honor."

Clotilde Runeberg
A girl with a strange cases revolving around her. A second year student in MRA.
"I’m sorry, guys. I just want to rest for now."

Crew:
Shad12ow : Programmer, Writer, GUI Designer
IceInferno26: Proofreader

Status:
Story : 100%
Proofreading : 80%
Script : 50%
GUI : 20% (Title, Save Load)
Concept art : 0%
Sprites : 0%
CGs : 0%
BG : 50%
Music : 50% (Collect enough public domain music, but still need to choose which music goes where.)

I'm still looking for any artist that is willing to help me with this.
I am planning to make 2 version for this KN. One is an offline version which used Ren'Py, while the other is an online version using WebStory Engine.
This will be a free VN and I hope that I can finished it as soon as possible. :mrgreen:

Update 26-04-2013:
Hey all! It's been a while since I update this thread. Have a hard time finding someone who can help me with this. So, in the mean time, I have uploaded my story on FictionPress.Com. Yey!!! :mrgreen:
Here's the link to the story : Cloaked Explorer
So please read it (if you want, that is. If not, well, thanks for coming!) and give me review. I'll update each chapter as often and as fast as I can.
Thank you all! :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

Update 19-05-2013:
Hey y'all! Got another update. I have uploaded my story on ReadWave.Com. Yey again!!! :mrgreen:
Here's the link to the story : Cloaked Explorer
Thank you all and see you later! :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Re: Cloaked Explorer [KN][Fantasy]

#2 Post by tiya_nofurita » Fri Feb 08, 2013 11:27 am

Artist ? Haha, count me out. But I'll do beta-testing, maybe. Estimated words/ time to read this VN ?
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#3 Post by Shad12ow » Fri Feb 08, 2013 2:13 pm

O, ketemu orang indo lagi, hehehe...

Hmm, for time to read, how long would 90k word took to read? I don't know, hehehe...

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#4 Post by Hazel-Bun » Fri Feb 08, 2013 7:06 pm

Is this a sequel to the first book ^^?

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#5 Post by Shad12ow » Sat Feb 09, 2013 12:21 am

Hazel-Bun wrote:Is this a sequel to the first book ^^?
Nope, different series, different world, different character. :mrgreen:
The sequel of the first book is already written. In fact, I already made the third book.

So, while waiting for the other to finish their part, this series was made. Hehehe...
I've just finished the script a few days ago. Care to read? I'll send it to you if you want to read it, hehehe...

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#6 Post by tiya_nofurita » Sat Feb 09, 2013 4:41 am

Shad12ow wrote:O, ketemu orang indo lagi, hehehe...

Hmm, for time to read, how long would 90k word took to read? I don't know, hehehe...
Yep, nice to meet you too !
90k ? That's pretty long for a kinetic novel if you ask me. Let me guess...if there is no branches (depending on the reader's pace of course) maybe it will take around 1-2 hours
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#7 Post by Shad12ow » Sun Feb 10, 2013 9:46 pm

Really? I don't know the standard for KN, so care to tell me? I really want to know. Hehehe...

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#8 Post by KomiTsuku » Sun Feb 10, 2013 10:39 pm

tiya_nofurita wrote:
Shad12ow wrote:O, ketemu orang indo lagi, hehehe...

Hmm, for time to read, how long would 90k word took to read? I don't know, hehehe...
Yep, nice to meet you too !
90k ? That's pretty long for a kinetic novel if you ask me. Let me guess...if there is no branches (depending on the reader's pace of course) maybe it will take around 1-2 hours
90k will take roughly 6-8 hours to read.

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#9 Post by Shad12ow » Sun Feb 10, 2013 10:57 pm

Really!? 6-8 hours?
Man, that is very long!
Do you have a suggestion for this? I mean, should I set the KN in a few separate part to make the reader read it easier?
Because if I should, I can divide it into maybe 3 parts.

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#10 Post by KomiTsuku » Sun Feb 10, 2013 11:06 pm

Shad12ow wrote:Really!? 6-8 hours?
Man, that is very long!
Do you have a suggestion for this? I mean, should I set the KN in a few separate part to make the reader read it easier?
Because if I should, I can divide it into maybe 3 parts.
Keep it that length. That's still slightly shorter than your average traditional novel.

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#11 Post by Shad12ow » Sun Feb 10, 2013 11:09 pm

Okay then. Thank you for the answer!

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#12 Post by tiya_nofurita » Mon Feb 11, 2013 9:18 am

KomiTsuku wrote:
tiya_nofurita wrote:
Shad12ow wrote:O, ketemu orang indo lagi, hehehe...

Hmm, for time to read, how long would 90k word took to read? I don't know, hehehe...
Yep, nice to meet you too !
90k ? That's pretty long for a kinetic novel if you ask me. Let me guess...if there is no branches (depending on the reader's pace of course) maybe it will take around 1-2 hours
90k will take roughly 6-8 hours to read.
Whoooops. I'm very sorry XD. I must be dreaming when I answered your earlier questions :lol:
Yes, maybe it will be that long, especially when it will be KN with no branches. CLANNAD : A Past Path (a fan VN of Clannad) has roughly 100k, and they claimed the playing time is around 8-10 hours.
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#13 Post by Shad12ow » Mon Feb 11, 2013 10:20 pm

Then this one will probably about 7-8 hours, eh? Hmm, didn't realize that. Hehehe...
Oh well, let's just try to make it.

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#14 Post by Shad12ow » Fri Apr 26, 2013 12:39 am

Update! Update!
Well, not for the VN, at least. Hehehehe...
While I'm waiting the day I can recruit someone into this project, feel free to read my story in FictionPress.Com.
Here's the link => Cloaked Explorer
Feel free to read it, give comment, point my mistake, or whatever you want. Hahahahaha....
Well, that's all folks. Thank you all! :mrgreen:

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#15 Post by Shad12ow » Sun May 19, 2013 12:40 am

Hey there!
Been a while since I'm here.
I've re-read the script all over again. Had some help for proofreading the script too. So the script is being processed at the moment.
Ah, one more thing. I have uploaded my story on ReadWave.Com. Yey again!!! :mrgreen:
Here's the link to the story : Cloaked Explorer
Once again, feel free to read it, comment, give critique, complain, or whatever. Hahahaha...
Thank you, good luck to you all, and see you later! :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

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