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Genre:
Romance, School-life

Plot:
Do you believe in first love never dies?

10 years ago, on Christmas Eve night. Natsumi got lost and ended up at a mansion which was beside her house, crying for help. A little boy appeared and gave Natsumi a star telling her not to cry. They promised to meet again tomorrow for Christmas but the boy did not show up the very next day.

10 years passed, the Fujiwara family moved back to the mansion. Hearing that, Natsumi rushed to reconcile with the boy only to find out that there were two of them.
Will Natsumi ever find out which one of them is the boy, her first love or it’ll just be a part of her memory?

Characters:

Ninomiya Natsumi ( Protagonist )
Age:16
The protagonist of "My Star Prince" also a second year student in Sekai Academy.

Fujiwara Sho ( Obtainable )
Age:17
Older brother of Shiro. Although Sho and Shiro lookalike, Sho personality is the opposite of Shiro. He is hot headed, unsociable, straightforward, and has a prickly character.

Fujiwara Shiro ( Obtainable )
Age:17
Younger brother of Sho. Shiro was always calm and friendly toward anybody unlike Sho, Shiro is extremly popular with girls.

Matsumoto Hikaru ( Obtainable )
Age:16
Natsumi's childhood friend who also attends Sekai Academy.

Progress:
• Story: 0%
• Script: 0%
• Sprites: 0%
• CG: 0%
• Background: Free Resources
• Music/Sound: Free Resources

If this is your first project, you may want to just stick with the three obtainables you already have since more characters = more art assets. Are you going to be doing the art as well or will you be needing to recruit someone? If you're doing the art, have you ever done art for a VN before? Be sure to consider these things when you think about adding more characters.

The logo could probably use some improved readability. The "P" and "r" in Prince are way too close together, making the word look like "Rince" or "Punce." The only reason I know what it says is because I read the title in the thread subject already. The cross for the "t" in Star could probably also benefit from not being so curly so close to the letter S. Just my take on it.

Reikun wrote:If this is your first project, you may want to just stick with the three obtainables you already have since more characters = more art assets. Are you going to be doing the art as well or will you be needing to recruit someone? If you're doing the art, have you ever done art for a VN before? Be sure to consider these things when you think about adding more characters.

The logo could probably use some improved readability. The "P" and "r" in Prince are way too close together, making the word look like "Rince" or "Punce." The only reason I know what it says is because I read the title in the thread subject already. The cross for the "t" in Star could probably also benefit from not being so curly so close to the letter S. Just my take on it.

No. This is my first time and thanks for the advice and I'll change the logo later.

Your logo looks nice, I cannot wait to see what this project becomes

blahblah0625 wrote:Your logo looks nice, I cannot wait to see what this project becomes

Thanks I'll try to finish it as soon as I can.

This looks really interesting ^^! I hope you finish it soon! ♥

looks cute. I'll keep an eye on the development .

Haha, this kinda reminds me of the manga, Orange planet (the "giving" of a star to the heroine, to make he stop crying, as she has gotten lost)
But yeah, just a bit changed from the basic plot of Orange Planet, I guess lol.

Seems cute, I'll be sure to keep my eyes peeled for this!

Cute and sweet premise. Good luck

This looks like it could be good! Look fwd to playing it when it's done

Haha, when I first saw Fujiwara Shiro, I thought it was Fujiwara SHINO. Hahaha. )

This looks nice. Yes, I do believe that first love never dies, but it does fade. Lol. )) I think that when we fall in love, there will always be something in our hearts for that person, even though we no longer love them. ^^ The story is definitely interesting to me. Hahaha. I hope we'd see more updates soon. Looking forward to this!