Deeplake - Demo v 1.3 Released! 22/09/07

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PrettySammy09 · #31 Post by **PrettySammy09** » Thu May 24, 2007 11:14 am

Awesome! :3

Great drawings and great character designs! I love them all! My favorite is probably either Richard (the doctor) or Camilla (the little girl with green hair). I can't wait to see your progress! It's great you two are working as a partnership!

chronoluminaire · #32 Post by **chronoluminaire** » Thu May 24, 2007 12:45 pm

Wow, this looks very impressive. Do take care to get one or two stories finished, so that you have something to release even if you don't get all the way done... But for the moment, this is looking awesome!

YuMMz · #33 Post by **YuMMz** » Thu May 24, 2007 1:17 pm

Again, great job. The coloring really brings the picture to life and you definitely have talent as an artist. Can I make one suggestion and feel free to ignore it. The character:

"Randolf Bennett: The resident watchman of Deeplake. He has a deep sense of duty, taking his job very seriously."

It may be just me but he looks kind of like a rugged, tough guy in the first picture. Which would be appropriate since he is a watchman, but in seeing him colored, his hair color seemed a little jarring. It seemed out of place as it softens his image. If this was the intended effect, then I apologize for bringing it up.

Remember that is definitely opinion and regardless I think this game looks outstanding. Keep us posted on the progress!

Sapphire Dragon · #34 Post by **Sapphire Dragon** » Thu May 24, 2007 3:19 pm

After discussing it, yeah, we changed his colour. This is the new one.
edit: also below theres the first background image done. I'm not going to post them all but this is an example of the style.

Septimus · #35 Post by **Septimus** » Thu May 24, 2007 6:17 pm

I've almost finished the first day of the first week script-wise. I'm hoping to speed up progress soon. The demo should be finished within two months, so unfortunately there's quite a way to go yet. We'll keep you posted on our progress though.

PrettySammy09 · #36 Post by **PrettySammy09** » Thu May 24, 2007 6:51 pm

It's great to see the progress. Your coloring style is really original SD. I haven't seen anything like it on these forums. And I'm glad to see the story is coming all along as well. :3 Can't wait to see some results from you Septimus!

Go for it, guys! Sammy's behind you all the way!

DaFool · #37 Post by **DaFool** » Thu May 24, 2007 8:04 pm

Looks just like a western graphic novel

Sapphire Dragon · #38 Post by **Sapphire Dragon** » Fri May 25, 2007 8:39 pm

Heres the title screen, and also the first fullscreen pic of the game. Ill probably add more detail to the town soonish, ill rego over this file when I do. Ill be adding more buildings I think and also a better twon square then the one here now.

Septimus · #39 Post by **Septimus** » Fri May 25, 2007 9:23 pm

I've finished the first day of the first week! Only six more days to go until the demo script is complete. (Although I say 'only' it's probably going to take me a long time, heh...)

Sapphire Dragon · #40 Post by **Sapphire Dragon** » Sat May 26, 2007 9:36 pm

And finally here is what the characters will look like in game. So thats pretty much an example of all the types of picture im doing.

Nafai · #41 Post by **Nafai** » Sun May 27, 2007 1:01 am

Nicely done! Good colors - almost seems cell-shaded ^_^

Sapphire Dragon · #42 Post by **Sapphire Dragon** » Wed May 30, 2007 2:03 pm

I have some mock up pictures, just did these to see if they looked ok together

monele · #43 Post by **monele** » Wed May 30, 2007 4:26 pm

Looking good and detailed ^_^... You might even get the mikey seal of approval for background and character perspective ^_^

mikey · #44 Post by **mikey** » Wed May 30, 2007 4:47 pm

monele wrote:Looking good and detailed ^_^... You might even get the mikey seal of approval for background and character perspective ^_^

You are mean, you know that? ^_^

But yes, the bottom one is just right

. The stables picture should have the character (very slightly) bigger (closer to the camera).

There you have it, I said it. Happy now?

Alessio · #45 Post by **Alessio** » Wed May 30, 2007 5:34 pm

I've prepared some quality seal to be used in VNs ^____^

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