(WIP) Melody of Ruin [Fantasy][KN]

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(WIP) Melody of Ruin [Fantasy][KN]

#1 Post by CuddleTea » Sun Jul 28, 2013 8:58 pm

---Summary---
A young woman gets more then she bargained for one rainy day as she heads to work. Running a little behind, Jade finds herself not only locked out, but suddenly confronted by a dangerous criminal eager for her help. Given no other choice, she's swept into the man's pursuit for freedom as they try to avoid the mage sent after him. Can she help him escape to the country's border? Or will she be killed for a lost memory of the very past that connects them?


---Characters---

Jade
Gender: Female
Age: 20
Role: Reserved and the kind of person who keeps to herself, Jade is the young woman who's forced to aid Tobias in his escape.

Tobias
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Role: The dangerous criminal according the mages' records. He's rough and awkward around Jade, but why is he so certain that she's the one who can help?

Reed
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Role: The young mage in charge of capturing Tobias and bringing Jade back safely.

---Credits---
Story & Coding: CuddleTea
Sprites: ???
CG: ???
Ren'Py: Pytom
Backgrounds, Music, & Others: -Listed in Game credits-


---Other Notes---
What else would you like to see here? Do you have any questions about what's been shared so far?

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Re: (WIP) Melody of Ruin [Fantasy][KN]

#2 Post by aphosphene » Mon Jul 29, 2013 9:08 pm

I think it's quite interesting that it's like a reversed damsel in distress.
I do wonder how on earth did Tobias figure out that a *seemingly* normal human could help him?
Is magic and mages a common thing in Jade's world? What convinced her to help him?
If not, I would be pretty freaked out if a random guy suddenly pops out and asks for my help in escaping the pursuit of a mage.

Anyway it would be nice if you do give more info. :D
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