Distant Dream [Mystery] [Supernatural] moved to WIP

Ideas and games that are not yet publicly in production. This forum also contains the pre-2012 archives of the Works in Progress forum.
Post Reply
Message
Author
User avatar
hikaa212
Regular
Posts: 38
Joined: Wed Jul 17, 2013 9:39 am
Projects: Distant Dream
Contact:

Distant Dream [Mystery] [Supernatural] moved to WIP

#1 Post by hikaa212 » Wed Jul 31, 2013 1:41 pm

Now I'll present you my first VN... *quickly hides*

DISTANT DREAM

"When was it... the last time I'm able to sleep peacefully?"
"Now, whenever I sleep, I always have nightmares."
"No, not that kind of nightmares."
"My nightmare is different."
"I always dreamt of being alone, and bugs crawling over me."
"It's painful, truly painful."
"But..."
"Recently, I met her in my dream..."
"In my painful and scary dream..."
"She always talks to me in my dream, telling me not to worry..."
"But the question is..."
"Who..."
"Is... She?"


Genre: Mystery, Supernatural, Romance, Slice Of Life
Type: Visual Novel


*SUMMARY*:-

Hisato(renamable) is a guy who often have nightmares about him being alone at forest and bugs crawling on him. Because of that, he always stay up late to avoid that nightmare. But in one night, a mysterious girl out of nowhere appears in his lonely dream...

*CHARACTERS* :-

Hisato(renamable) :You'll be playing from his point of view. He's a guy who loves to stay up late to play games. That's what he said, but the truth is he always have nightmares if he sleep at night. He's the type of guy who always 'go with the flow.' His childhood friend is Miki, a girl who always take cares of him, such as waking him up in the morning so he won't be late. When they were seven, they were involved in truck accident, making him not remember anything from his childhood. Recently, he's curious about the girl who keeps appearing in his nightmares...

Miki : Hisato's childhood friend. He call her a modern tsundere. She always tries help Hisato at everything, including waking him up every morning. She acts all sweety at first, but blushes everytime Hisato teases her.

[attachment=1]Unbenannt.JPG[/attachment]

Mysterious girl : The girl that appears in Hisato's dream. She loves stars and always ask Hisato what does the world outside looks like.

[attachment=0]Unbenannt (1).JPG[/attachment]

and others will be minor characters...

Features:-
*Five endings
*Renamable Character

Sprite sketches credits to mikiwing ~

Because of some school stuffs and other problems, I will be hiatus for a while, but I still will continue this game~ I currently need help with sprites and hopefully simple CGs ^^;;

Progress;
Story : 40%
Code: 10%
Sprites: 0%
Background : 70%
Music&Sound: 70%

P.S - I changed Miki's personality. I think... it's hard to write a naive and innocent girl. So I'll change her into a modern tsundere ( like Kyou from CLANNAD) instead~ but it won't affect the storyline.
Attachments
Unbenannt (1).JPG
mysteriousgirlsketch
Unbenannt.JPG
mikisketch
Last edited by hikaa212 on Fri Oct 04, 2013 10:26 am, edited 8 times in total.
"I hope that all of the choices I've made while wandering through the darkness might give everyone a ray of Light." - Kotarou Tennouji, Rewrite.



tumblr | a blog about games
I'm useless, haha.

Ideduce
Newbie
Posts: 7
Joined: Wed Jul 31, 2013 1:13 pm
Contact:

Re: Distant Dream [Mystery] [Supernatural]

#2 Post by Ideduce » Wed Jul 31, 2013 1:50 pm

This sounds really cute and awesome. I'd like to play it when it's done or maybe even test it if you'd like.

User avatar
hikaa212
Regular
Posts: 38
Joined: Wed Jul 17, 2013 9:39 am
Projects: Distant Dream
Contact:

Re: Distant Dream [Mystery] [Supernatural]

#3 Post by hikaa212 » Wed Jul 31, 2013 2:06 pm

Ideduce wrote:This sounds really cute and awesome. I'd like to play it when it's done or maybe even test it if you'd like.
Thanks~ ^^ :D
"I hope that all of the choices I've made while wandering through the darkness might give everyone a ray of Light." - Kotarou Tennouji, Rewrite.



tumblr | a blog about games
I'm useless, haha.

User avatar
Ran08
Miko-Class Veteran
Posts: 737
Joined: Tue Jun 12, 2012 1:17 am
Completed: https://ran.itch.io/
Projects: Fate's Cafe
Tumblr: otometwist
Skype: @otomeran
itch: ran
Location: Manila
Contact:

Re: Distant Dream [Mystery] [Supernatural]

#4 Post by Ran08 » Thu Aug 01, 2013 2:24 am

I like the idea. :) I don't know why, but when I first read this, I thought: "Arachnophobia." Hahaha, I know it wasn't specified, but spiders just popped into my head. Lol.

That mysterious girl is really interesting! I'd like to know about her. Hihi. She piqued my curiosity.

Also... (I don't know how to say this but...) I think you made a few errors up there. Don't worry, they're just minor stuff! Just like the "since I last sleep" and some others. :) Other than that, you're fine. Haha.

Oh well, I'll be keeping my eye on this! The story seems great and a lot of things can really come from this plot if you develop it well, so I'm looking forward to this VN. Hahaha. Goodluck! I hope you update soon!

User avatar
hikaa212
Regular
Posts: 38
Joined: Wed Jul 17, 2013 9:39 am
Projects: Distant Dream
Contact:

Re: Distant Dream [Mystery] [Supernatural]

#5 Post by hikaa212 » Thu Aug 01, 2013 7:30 am

Ran08 wrote:I like the idea. :) I don't know why, but when I first read this, I thought: "Arachnophobia." Hahaha, I know it wasn't specified, but spiders just popped into my head. Lol.

That mysterious girl is really interesting! I'd like to know about her. Hihi. She piqued my curiosity.

Also... (I don't know how to say this but...) I think you made a few errors up there. Don't worry, they're just minor stuff! Just like the "since I last sleep" and some others. :) Other than that, you're fine. Haha.

Oh well, I'll be keeping my eye on this! The story seems great and a lot of things can really come from this plot if you develop it well, so I'm looking forward to this VN. Hahaha. Goodluck! I hope you update soon!
ahaha! Maybe the main charac did have Arachnophobia :D :P ahh, thanks~ I'm quite confused with my grammar lately :? hehe :wink:
"I hope that all of the choices I've made while wandering through the darkness might give everyone a ray of Light." - Kotarou Tennouji, Rewrite.



tumblr | a blog about games
I'm useless, haha.

Post Reply

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users