Well Horror Story SMOKE

[Ideduce]

This game is inspired by the following
Sherlock Holmes
Phoenix Wright
Myst
Hotel Dusk
Silent Hill
Uncharted ps3 game series

Synopsis - ex cop Ray Hope receives an alarming letter from a young girl in a town he can not locate on a map. However in the letter are various clues to where the location of this town is. The town itself seems to be surrounded by an ominous fog. When he arrives he's very down to earth and refuses to believe the ghost stories he's told. Though as events begin to unfold believing in the paranormal may not be so difficult after all....

Protagonists
Ray Hope - ex cop, can he really be the good guy of this story?

Sheryl Lockly - goes by Sherri, the one who sent the letter for help

Established Characters
Johnathon Spades - the hotel manager and cook of Nights Inn
Kasey Winters - the spirit of the well, possibly dead
Danial Ross - journalist writing about the oddities of the town
Jenna Hofstadter - a doctor who is passing through but often gets lost and returns to the inn hoping the fog settles

Name Ray Hope
age 27
hair dusty blonde, wavy short
eye blue
skin tone slightly tan
personality down to earth, comes off as cold to most people but only because he tells it how it is, smokes, enjoys jazz music, typically plays the bad cop role.

Name Sheryl Lockly
age 14
hair auborn brown, pig tails
eye brown
skin tone fair skinned with freakles
personality bubbly, tries to be as helpful as possible, easily attached to others, cries easily

Name Johnathon Spades
age 29
hair black, short curly
eye dark brown
skin tone dark
personality Salesman type when renting out rooms, however seems rather secluded and very much into ready a variety of books

Name Kasey Winters
age unknown
hair unknown
eye unknown
skin tone unknown
personality curt with a sultry like voice she appears in the form of smoke, steam, cream in coffee, and other various ways.

Name Danial Ross
age 24
hair brown
eye hazel
skin tone tan
personality closet pervert, excitable, seems happy, Ray swears he knows him from someplace....

(will update more later today I've got work right now so I have to pause here)

Name Jenna Hofstadter
age 25
hair white
eye purple
skin tone tanish
personality typically serious but suffers from being a klutz unless it involves a medical procedure, which includes giving out band aids (though once the band aids is secure and she walks away tripping on her own may occur)

Type of Game
Puzzle Point and Click adventure-

Music supplied by http://freemusicarchive.org/ artist Boxcat (Sadly I can't post it because it's in mp3 format)

[Ideduce]

Currently the story part is just past what I call a prolog. After I get done with the first part I will upload the CG to give people of taste of what to expect.

Edit

Oh I forgot to mention the reason this is taking me longer than most stories that I've written before ect is because I'm writing up the puzzles for the game and making sure they work in the engine first.