1. If you've played the demo - no matter how long - at which point did you stop? Was there something you didn't like about it, was something boring you?
Fortunately I finished playing the demo. There were certain scenes that were so unrealistic where I wanted to stop.
2. Did you finish the demo or would you finish the demo? Why and why not?
I finished it.
3.How did you like the 3rd person narration?
I think it was ok.
4.Were there enough choices? Did you feel the choices you made were important enough? Do you think they should be more or less choices?
There were enough choices. Some of them were dumb. The ones with the uncle were pretty unnecessary if you know about which scene I'm talking about. I understand that you wanted to add a little bit of crack moments, but those choices and some parts of dialogue was too much to bear.
5. Did you reach any of the early endings? Was it difficult to get them?
I managed to get
the one where that girl killed me and the other where the MC ran away from her uncle Kyungso, but he caught her.
6. Were there any unnecessary scenes?
The scenes weren't unnecessary, it's just that the dialogue was poorly written. I'll tell you want I can remember:
The part where she tells Takumi that she needs to take a crap in order to get rid of him. That's just...I mean in real life you don't tell someone something like this
When the MC decides to run away and she meets the uncle those multiple choices are bad. You just don't need them. The MC could find an excuse ( one that works or not) or she could just run away.
I can't remember the exact scenes but there are numerous times where she tended to exaggerate things or just thought and said things that made no sense.
1. How did you like the heroine? Could you relate to her? Did you find her obnoxious?
Nope. She is too annoying and tends to be overly dramatic and exaggerate. There is too much cursing too. I understand that you wanted to make her seem like a tough girl, but there are some scenes that contradict this ( she agrees to wear the kimono although she doesn't want to. She also lets Sunwoo insult her without smacking him or saying anything, she also lets her uncle do everything he pleases). I think you can do better than this with her personality. You can make her a strong girl without her having to curse at every 5 minutes. Or you can chance her behavior depending on the choices or the guy she chooses.
2. Did you find her reactions to situations emotional enough? Or did you think there wasn't enough inner narration coming from her?
Yes, there were reactions that were emotional enough, but there were also things that she did or said that contradicted the things she was going through. When she was scared sometimes she acted stupid. I think you wanted too add some comedy too ( because the plot is pretty dark and mysterious), but I think you should get someone to help you with those parts.
3. Which of the male characters is your favourite? Why don't you like at all?
Kyungso of course. He acted just the way someone like him should.
The least favourite was Sunwoo because he curses too much and doesn't even respect the MC although she is older than him. I mean you curse sometimes when you are VERY, very, very angry, but this guy seems to have some bad words glued on his tongue.
4. Would you perceive any romantic moments between the heroine and the uncle as gross and or inappropriate?
No. Believe me I've read and played some strange things that someone would call them bad.
5. What about his younger brother? If you read the only romantic moment, did you like it? Was it unnecessary, or do you even want more?
More please.
6. Would you like to strangle Sunwoo?
OHHHHHHH YESSSSSSSSSSSS! I WANT TO KILL HIM!
He is so nasty! I think I mentioned this above, but the seems like a strong girl, so I have no ideea why does she let a brat talk to her that way! Even if she lives in a new place and wants to make a good impression if she is strong willed like you wanted her to be she wouldn't act submissive and let Sunwoo talk to her like that. People who live in orphanages tend to be very determined and controlling or meek and obedient ( you are a leader or a follower) Some spanking, punching, slapping and STRANGLING options need to be added!
Or at least she needs to tell him that she won't tolerate any insults from a kid when she didn't do anything to deserve them and she's being nice to him.
7. Do you feel like you can trust any of the characters?
Never! I think everyone has something to hide. I was very surprised
by the killer girl ending
8. Would you like to see more romance, or do you think it would go without?
Romance is always a good thing as long as it's well written.
Music:
- How was the music?
- Did it fit the situation?
- Were the transitions between tracks alright?
Perfect, I loved it!
What are your thoughts about the story?
Nice, very nice. You should work more on the dialogue and some of the characters mentioned above and everything will be awesome. I love dark stories and mysteries and BAD ENDS TOO! XD
Is it "mysterious" enough? Are you curious to learn the "truth"?
Oh yes, I can't wait to uncover all the mysteries
Is it entertaining enough, or did you find the ratio of slice of life to interesting moments too high?
You need someone to help you write the comedy moments.
Do you have any speculations about the motives of the characters?
I have some, but I'm not sharing.
Were there any plotholes or confusing moments?
Yes, I think I mentioned some of them above.
The story is nice and I really want to see this game finished. I'm sorry if I've been to harsh with my comments, but when I find something nice and promising I always have to say what's on my mind. I'm sure this project will be awesome. Do you plan to have any CG's?