Fragrance of spring [GXB] Canceled

[didiwalker]

Hi i'm new here, and got an idea for my very first visual novel game, it will be a KN though ( maybe with 2 different endings)

Fragrance of spring ~the fragment of you~ Changed to;

Main CAST of Fragrance

Canceled! by circumstances

[Didules]

Hi there!
I won't surprise you if I say that the art is gorgeous, would I? It somehow reminded me of Shilkefair's art (and Kazuki Yone's but that's another thing), now that I went on your DA, I see why Both of you are really talented!
I'd be really happy to see a KN with your art
As for the sory: so far it seems interesting, it's definitely my type of stories
About the "english" part, your english isn't so bad from what I've just read, but I'd avdise you to hire a native speaker to proofread your work (to get a High quality help). If you ever need some help, I think tons of people here would be happy to help you
Well then, I'll stalk this thread, I wish you good luck!

[didiwalker]

Hi there!
I won't surprise you if I say that the art is gorgeous, would I? It somehow reminded me of Shilkefair's art (and Kazuki Yone's but that's another thing), now that I went on your DA, I see why Both of you are really talented!
I'd be really happy to see a KN with your art
As for the sory: so far it seems interesting, it's definitely my type of stories
About the "english" part, your english isn't so bad from what I've just read, but I'd avdise you to hier a native speaker to proofread your work (to get a High quality help). If you ever need some help, I think tons of people here would be happy to help you
Well then, I'll stalk this thread, I wish you good luck!

Hello, thank you! >< yes we do kinda have a similar drawing style,
i'll try not to make the story too long , (bad habits of making a simple story long and complex)
i feel my English becoming a bit sloppy' so i'll try finding some proof readers one the project is on the start
Thank you!

[pickle131]

This looks so cute ;_;

[didiwalker]

This looks so cute ;_;

Thank you! i hope i can make the story cute too.

[riiko08]

Ooohhh~~ Dat Art QwQ

This is definitely very interesting! I'll patiently wait for your next updates! Can't wait to see the sprites >w<b

[VMireil]

First, allow me to say I love your art ;D

Second, I'm not really one for KN but I think this shows a lot of promise so I shall stalk this thread until your game is released

Third, I wish you the best of luck in your game (and I offer my services as proofreader, if you need it)

[FrozenApple66]

This looks great! I might not be the best at grammar, but I would be willing to proof-read your script as an English speaker when the time comes for free.

[Duskylli]

Aww I can sympathise with Luke already. Sounds like Rosie has it tough as well. I hope that they can be happy. xD

[didiwalker]

Ooohhh~~ Dat Art QwQ

This is definitely very interesting! I'll patiently wait for your next updates! Can't wait to see the sprites >w<b

hi, Thanks

First, allow me to say I love your art ;D

Second, I'm not really one for KN but I think this shows a lot of promise so I shall stalk this thread until your game is released

Third, I wish you the best of luck in your game (and I offer my services as proofreader, if you need it)

Thank you very much! i'll asked around if i don't understand something and if i need help with this project ^^

This looks great! I might not be the best at grammar, but I would be willing to proof-read your script as an English speaker when the time comes for free.

Thanks for the offer:3

Aww I can sympathise with Luke already. Sounds like Rosie has it tough as well. I hope that they can be happy. xD

they will (i think) ;D

[didiwalker]

UPDATE!! SPRITE SKETCHES!

Rossie sketch sprite, well i hope i made her as a decent girl look, i rarely draw girls.


Luke sketch sprite in his knight look, may be added some stuff later on..


Luke after returning from the war look, he look terrible and he doesn't care...


there will be side characters like luke's childhood friends, his mother and Rossie (witch mom)

[silverpikachu99]

This looks absolutely lovely!!

[Didules]

Gorgeous!
Rossie is a beautiful young lady, you don't have to worry about it, she's really feminine!!
Luke is really cool, no matter what he wears!
I'm looking forward to learning more about your game (character's appearance or even just ages, random facts about the secondary characters, backgrounds).
Good luck for you game!!

[Luce Jumble]

Ahhh— the premise of this game is beautiful!! ;___; And the art is, too! ♥
Good luck with everything, and I hope to see more updates!

[DaR]

Wanted to add to the chorus of praise. ^_^ Rossie looks absolutely lovely and Luke looks pretty cool, especially in his knight sprite. I really adore how you draw clothes.

The story sounds really nice and I look forward to future updates! I am also offering my services as a proofreader if you want/need it. Best of luck!